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Hello!.... With all the respect i call you Shumi Ji because you deserve that and also you are too sweet and a wonderful Lady! but please don't attach the Ji to my nameit makes me too ghamandi!Anyway you are giving me sleepless nights with your updates.... ufff awesome story! i like the way you describe how the perfume distubs Prats... the convo between Krish And Ramsing was funny... loved the scene where his heart beats when he put the ear-ring in his pocket.... thanks for making Angad look like Johnny Lever.... and Kudos to you for chap 8... my favourite! hilarious scene between K and P ... i love them acting like teenagers... made me smile to see this side of K, playful and sexy at the same time...he pretented to be sick to find out the truth.they are so cute together! i am eager to know if it is just an infatuation or love for K?????Waiting for the next part and good taste for the lovely bedroom Shumi JI!
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wowww!!!!u updated sooooooo fast!!that i have to comment for the prev 4 chaps in one go.....
ah ha!!Prats working under Krishna..........a great MUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH for fulfilling my wish for.....(u knw wat)nw talking abt the KriYa interaction,while reading that part,i felt lyk singing "KUCH THO HUA HAI.....KUCH HO GAYA HAI..."....sooo....both r feeling something!it ws expected from Krishna...but i nevr thot that Prats wil have a slip.uff!!!!i can feel the UV rays from here itself....n
n it was good that rolli also got a job..
so anita has succeeded in making krishna drink that drug.....but i luuuuuub anita for doing so.....wowwwwwwww!!good choice of place for krishna to enter......hw can i say about the part?.....it was my hairs which rose while reading it..she jz dropped him at home????err...i was expecting....but then thot,there is still time for.....err.more kriYa scenes.........
Chap 7 n 8
will comment after reading once agn!!!!!coz im in sedation....
will be bk soon....
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