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Are we meant to be? MN FF Ch 4 pg 7

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:23pm | IP Logged

Nupur's POV (point of view).

"NUPUUUUR!!"

I raised my head, eyes wide.
"Shit!" I hurriedly stood up and started running away from there.
"Nupur!!??" My mother yelled, "YA! Get back here!"
I ran as fast as I could, sliding on the floor when I smoothly tried to round the corners of the house.
"Nupur, you bad girl!" My mother ran after me, waving a t-shirt in her hands, "didn't I tell you to wash these properly?! Now look at it! What's your father going to say?!"
I dropped my shoe, so I had to make a wobbly halt, run back and grab it.

 Don't think that you'll get away!" My mother nearly caught my skirt.
I jumped away and started running again.
"I'm sorry, Mom!" I cried, "It won't happen again!"

"Who do you take me for?? Do you think your promises means anything to me anymore?" she replied harschly.
I halted, but still keeping a fare distance between us.
I looked down, pushing my lowerlip out.
"You're a mother, who loves her daughter very much... and that daughter is really, really, REALLY sorry that she made a mistake and will make it up to her mother".
She sighed, putting her hands on her hips.
"You shouldn't let that dreamworld of yours take you away at times like that!" she exclaimed, "while you're doing laundry you have to focus!, really..."
I looked down again, folding my hands together infront of my mouth.
"Me, so sorry... you forgive? Me love you long time!" I mumbled, smiling sillily.
She giggled, letting her shoulders drop.
"How come I can't stay angry at you for long?" she mumbled as I lovingly grabbed her arm.
Phew... dodged another bullet there.

Hello, my name is Nupur Bushan and I'm 19 years old.
As you may already have figured out, I am somewhat of a cluts.
It's not my intention to be! But I just can't keep myself from disappearing into my own world sometimes.
Don't give me that look! I know all of you do that, too!
Alright, whoever hasn't found themselves travelling to a warm beach, the arms of a hot guy or to a stage with hundreds of fans screaming, during class, raises their hand now!
Neh, that's what I thought...

It's not that I dislike the life I'm living right now, nothing like that!
But of course it could've been better...
If the hottest guy in College suddenly realized that he loved me and wanted to go on a date... and maybe we could go to the theater...
No lights, all alone in there... we could sit in the far back... he would have his arms around me and we'd share true loves first...

See what I mean?

Sometimes everyday life is just so boring!
That's mostly the reason why I like to disappear into those lovely dramas...
Who wouldn't want to live the life of a drama character?
Prince charming, kisses, huge signs of affection, overcoming all hurdles...
Ah, that would be something, wouldn't it?

Mayank's POV.

"I met this awesome girl yesterday" my friend said, making all the guys lean closer to him, "she had the personality of an angel and the body of a rockstar..."
The guys around me bursted out a 'woooh', nodding knowingly at eachother.
I leaned back, crossing my arms.
"Since the evening was going so great... I decided to bring her on a walk in the park" my friend continued, poking the guy next to him in the ribs, "you know, under the stars..."
I frowned.
"Why would you do that?" I asked, everyone turning towards me, "a walk in the park doesn't sound like the most fun thing to do".

They all looked at me with confusion in their eyes.
"Mayank Sharma, you may be the best looking guy in College..." he mumbled, "but your sence of seduction is really non-existing".
I shrugged my shoulders.

Hello, my name is Mayank Sharma and I'm 19 years old.
As you may have already noticed, I am a cool, handsome guy.
But just as my friend said... I'm completely clueless when it comes to love.

I don't know why. It's alright to flirt with girls at College, or just look at them, making them swoon.
But when that special girl comes along, the one with the perfect appearance, perfect personality, perfect everything.
That's when I start digging my own grave.
Luckily the students at College just think it's charismatic.
They think I never have a girlfriend, because I want to be independent, not settle for one person.
Appearantly that makes me even more appealing.
Every girl wants to be the one breaking through my shell.
Yeah, what would they say if they knew the truth?

Sometimes I wish I could be like those guys in the dramas.
They always seem to know what to do.
Maybe I should just hire a script-writer and make my own drama?
Neeeh, I hate those gestures of affection.
*Barf*
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Hello, Muskaan here ^^
This is my third fanfic.
Once again, I've completely changed the genre. This time it's a comedy, woooh.
Of course, it's going to be a lovestory also. That's a must!



Edited by Muskaan_01 - 16 February 2011 at 6:14pm

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Hi Muskaan
lovely start dear
i liked nupur and mayanks intro
hmmmmm so its a comedy + lovestoryyyyyy
wow  veryyyyyyyy good
i m waiting for ur next part
Do update soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged

Hi Muskaan
lovely start dear
i liked nupur and mayanks intro
hmmmmm so its a comedy + lovestoryyyyyy
wow  veryyyyyyyy
good
i m waiting for ur next part
Do update soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
nice start..
continue soon..
pl pm

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
nice starting............. 

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
nice start
love this cute couple 

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
hehe muskan......
another ff by you.would luv to read
so this time its going to be comedy plus love story....
interesting............continue soon
and ofcorse i am in your pm list

love
tasfia

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fantastic loved it

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