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~* AdiYa FF|JUNOON|NOTE:Page 7 *~ (Page 5)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Read all the 4 parts and when is the next part coming???? Please update soon.

Your writing skills are amazing, i was all lost in Adi-ya land, could imagine every sequence. Really like the bubbly attitude girl priya. And my adi is cute and hot in the FF too.
Great plot, wonder why he kidnapped her and how there love story began.


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Yo For how long am i suppose to wait Angry !! 
if u love ur life 1 Thn UPDATE ASAP Angry ROFL

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Originally posted by mrs.luvjaysean

Awesome update sri! Loveedd it =) Update soon xxx .. 


Aw..thanks shilpa..
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Originally posted by jattionfire

wonderful update dearClapClapClap

i really liked the way you described their emotionsStarEmbarrassed
 
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wow sriiiiii u r the best
really enjoyed it


Thank a lot... Big smile

Originally posted by amnaM

Read all the 4 parts and when is the next part coming???? Please update soon.

Your writing skills are amazing, i was all lost in Adi-ya land, could imagine every sequence. Really like the bubbly attitude girl priya. And my adi is cute and hot in the FF too.
Great plot, wonder why he kidnapped her and how there love story began.


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Yes my FF has a bubbly priya and naughty aditya..kya jodi hain naDay Dreaming
well can't reveal the suspense..but do enjoy reading..


Originally posted by -Cwezy_Manoola-

Yo For how long am i suppose to wait Angry !! 
if u love ur life 1 Thn UPDATE ASAP Angry ROFL


Updating soon..Ouch i care for my life Broken Heart ...

Thanks everyone..and extremely sorry for delay
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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged

*Dedicated to Manal*Hug

(Without whose warnings Ouch i can never write an update myself LOL)

*Tries to patofy manal so she forgets that i promised to update 2 parts but updating 1 Big smilebtw its a long one Embarrassed*

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"Junoon"

Part 5

Next day:

All are very excited about engagement and preparations are going on in pradhan house which will happen in evening.

Devyani is taking care of all works and is tensed about preparations not still done on time.

"Aree.imli..yeh phool wahan rakho aur yeh saari cheezi bahar rakhwado..arre ramlal dekho ki shamyana wale abhi tak aaya kyun nehi..itna saara kaam hain..kaise hoga..dopahar bhi ho gayi'hey bhagwaan..suno"

Devyani collides with priya who is coming in the same way..

"Uffo..Sab ho jayega aunty aap tension kyun leti ho hamesha.. pata hain itna tension lene se na B.P high ho jata hain heart problems aa sakthi hain aur fir aap bimar pad jaougi toh.?So no tension..just cool!"

"Par priya beta itna kaam baaki..aur ladki wale aate hi honge aur fir mehmaan bhi aayenge..aur kuch kaam..imli kaam hua ki nehi."Devyani goes again to do her work but priya stops her..

"Ye lo fir se..achcha chalo main aapki parehaani kum kar deti hoon..aap kaam batate jayiye..main check karti rahoongi,,ok,,isse aapka kaam bhi ho jayega aur tension bhi kam ho jayega.."

"Par.".

"Par war kuch nehi..Aunty aap yahan baith toh jayiye na..ok..ab bolo..boliye.."

Priya makes her sit on the sofa and asks her to say all works..devyani sees priya for a while n seeing she's not giving up..she says..

"Achcha..phool aur sajawat.."just then imli comes..

"Madamji..saare parde lag chuke hain aur phool walon ka kaam bas ho hi gaya hain'"

"Good'imli tum jao..(sees devyani n smiles)ab aage."

"Wooh shamyana..wala.."just then ramlal the worker comes..

"Memsahab shamyana wale aagaye aur lagana bhi shuru kar diya.."

Priya sees n smiles teasingly indicating how she always gets tensed for small issues..devyani sees n says..

"Par..Panditji..?"Priya smiles n says..

"Maine unhe subah hi phone kar diya aur driver ko bhi le aane ke liye kheh diya.."

Devyani thinks for a while n says..

"Catering wala.?"Priya thinks about what to say as she didn't contact them..just then aditya comes and says..

"Uska bhi tayariya ho gayi hain mom..maine unhe phone kar diya tha..(devyani n priya sees him differently..aditya adds)wooh dad ne phone karne ko kaha tha..isiliye"

"Bahut achcha kiya"devyani comes n strokes his cheek lovingly..while priya trying to get her attention again says..

"Aur haan aunty guests ke liye saari arrangements bhi maine kar diya hain"Devyani smiles while aditya adds..

"Mom..Maine bro ke doston ke rehna ka arrangement kar diya hain.."aditya says proudly.

"Maine garden mein lights lagwane walon bhi bol diya hain..bas ho gaya hain..dekhna shaam ko hamara ghar poora chamakega.." She says proudly teasing aditya that she did more work than him.

"Chamkega tab jab electrician aake circuit theek karega..usmein subah problem aaya tha maine electrician ko kahan hain wooh ab tak theek kar chukka hoga"Priya sees aditya angrilyly n then smiling turns to devyani n says..

"Aur haan aunty maine wooh vidya deedi ke ghar walon ke liye jo gifts hain na wooh bhi ready kar diya.."

"Aur maine mom.."aditya starts when devyani interrupts him..

"Bas.. bas'tum dono ne sara kaam kiya..ab meri pareshaani thodi kum hui hain"

"Dekha maine kahan na aunty main saari kaam kar doongi.."

"Ahem ahem.."aditya coughs indicating he too dod

"Kya?"casually.

"Maine bhi kiya hain.."proudly.

"Toh?"Not caring n says casually.

"Miss.Nakhchadi.."angrily facing her..

"Sarfira.."facing aditya and ready to argue.Devyani comes n between.

"Ab phirse shuru mat karo tum dono..hmm..waise tum dono ne itna imtazam kiya hain toh aaage bhi tum dono milke ki kaam karo..kyun?"Devyani says smiling at both of them while priya and aditya sees shockingly..and says together..

"Kya?"

"Haan..ab yeh tum dono ka zimedari hain ki ki sagayi poori tarah ho jaye..aur guests bhi khush rahe.."

"Par aunty"

"Mom..main aur iss.."before aditya can take any word priya looks at him warningly and devyani too stops him..

"Mujhe kuch nehi sunna..tum dono mujhe pareshaan nehi dekhna chahthe ho na..(both nods unwantedly)toh apne zimadari khud hi nibhao..main jaake aaram se tayaar ho jaati hoon..dulhe ki maa hui bhai..kuch achcha toh mujhe bhi lagna chahiye"

Devyani starts to leave.. aditya n priya are still in a shock that they both should work together but the problem is they simply hate being together.Imli who just comes there with a lot of gifts asks devyani..

"Madamji..yeh saaman kahan rakhu.."

Devyani gives a smiling look to aditya n priya and says"Imli..ab yeh meri nehi aditya aur priya ki zimedari hain..unhe kaho.."and leaves away laughing to herself.

Imli who is a bit confused what to do.. goes to priya and asks..

"Priya memsahib..yeh saaman"

"Huh.."Priya comes out of her stance..while aditya comes near her n says taunting..

"Ab aisi hi mooh khole rahogi..ya fir kaam bhi karogi,?Hume bahut kaam karna hain"

She gives a raging look at aditya and goes away with imli giving attitude not before saying..

"Chal imli main tumhe batati hoon..waise mujhe tumhari help ki koi zaroorat nehi hain Mr.(after thinking a bit n taunting him)Sarfire"

Priya leaves while aditya see her with a teasing smile..

"Zaroorat toh tumhe padegi hi.."


Evening..

All are ready and welcoming guests..vidya ,her father n family relatives too arrived at the time..while jhakkar's receive them.Brahmanand welcomes them..

"Aayeye..samdhiji kaise ho aap'"

"Bilkul theek Bhaisahab..behenji..(seeing devyani)namaste.."

"Namaste..ayiye'ayiye..vidya beta aao na..kitni pyaari lag rahi ho..(who is wearing  a pink gharagra looking beautiful)aaj toh sabki nazar tum pe hi rahegi..aur gaurav ka toh nazar tumse hatega hi nehi,,"Devyani teases while vidya blushes and lowers her eyes.

All goes inside while vidya's father talks to devyani thanking her..

"Behenji sagayi toh hamari zimaderi thi par aapne yeh sab .."

"Aree bhaisahab waise shaadi toh aap ki hi zimedari hain hume bhi toh vidya ke liye kuch karna chahiye na..isilye humne sagayi hamare ghar mein rakha hain'aur sach maniye mujhe bahut khushi horahi hain..aap bilkul bura mat sochiye .."devyani says with a smile.

"Arre behenji nehi ..mujhe toh bahut khushi hain ki vidya ko aap jaisa sausral mil raha hain..main issi zyaada kuch maang bhi nehi saktha!!"

 

They all sit at the respective places while more guests arrive..vidya is sitting with her father and gaurav who is wearing a maroonish sherwani sitting near aditya and his friends who are teasing him.Both are trying to see eachother secretly n smiling at eachother trying to avoid others eyes.Priya comes down from the stairs looking lovely in a green ghagra..aditya who's wearing a matching lite green shrewani sees her coming and can't stop staring her for a long time until she reaches down.She goes upto devyani who is talking with brahmanand and other business colleagues ..

 

"Priya beta kitni pyaari lag rahi ho.."Priya blushes ..

"Thank you aunty.."

"Achcha beta..saari tayariya ho gayi hain.."

"Jee aunty sab ho gaye..maine sab ko keh diya hain..bas main ek baar jaake wooh catering wale se baat karlu..main abhi aati hoon.."Priya starts to go when devyani stops her..and calls aditya..

"Ek minute priya beta..aditya ..yahan aao.."Aditya comes near them..

"Jee mom.."

"Yeh kya priya saara kaam kar rahi hain..maine tum dono se kahan tha na..?"

"Ab wooh sab akeli karna chahthi hoon toh main kya karu mom.."Teasingly..

"Aditya aisa nehi kehthe..chalo tum bhi jao na priya ke saath..abhi sab guests bhi aa gaye..rasam shuru karni hain na..jao tum bhi priya ki thoda madad karlo..jao,,"

 

Aditya and priya goes unwantedly together to the garden area outside where the catering work is going on..priya goes near them and enquires..

"Kaisa chal raha hain sab.."the manager comes near and replies..

"Ek dum perfect madamjee..sab tayaar hain.."showing all the arrangements

"Mehmaan bas khaane ki liye aate hi honge aap sab tayaar rakhiye..sab achche toh bane hain na?"smelling the food..

"Sab ek dum swadist bane hain..log ungliya chaat chaat kar khayenge.."

Aditya talks teasingly.."Kahin saath mein ungli bhi na khale..problem ho jayegi.." manager sees him sternly first then laughs loudly.

"Arre sirjee..aap toh bahut mazakiya hain..chaliye aap hi chakke boliye yeh rasgule kaise bane hain..khayiye khayiye"

The manager gives him a bowl with rasgula's and aditya eats them..

"Hmm'kitna tasty bana hain'bhai maan gaye..(manager smiles proudly..he eats another from bowl n sees priya who is standing with her hands folded and not seeing him at all)tum bhi khaogi..(giving priya the bowl..before she could take he takes away the bowl..)chalo chodo..zayadaa kahogi toh moti ho jaougi..mujhe hi ek aur deejiye.."

"Leleejiye.."manager gives him more..and he eats nicely..

Priya gets angry as its her favourite sweetdish and he has taken away from her..she stomps her foot in anger..

 "Aisi hi khate rahoge ya kuch aur kaam bhi karoge.."

"Jahan tak mujhe yaad hain tumhe toh meri zaroorat nehi thi..(with his mouth full of rasgula)kyunki tum sab akeli hi manage kar sakthi ho?"

"Fine main khud ki jaake dekhloongi.."she gets more angry ..and leaves.


Priya is going back angrily and talking to herself. "Stupid..idioit..hmf..waise koi kaam toh bachcha hi nehi..very good priya dekha tumne sab kaam kaisa karliye uss sarfire ki madad ke bina hi.."

She almost goes inside the door but sees that on the right of the house the lights are not blinking,,

"Arre yeh kya iss taraf ki lights kyun nehi jal rahe hain..lagtha hain switch loose ho gaya..chalo main lagadeti hoon..

(she goes near the plug and see's it fixed and fine)..shayad main switch main hi problem hain..(she goes to the main circuit board)kahan gaya plug..yeh raha..(she sees the plug is loose and is hanging from the socket and tries to fix it but it doesn't fix)Yeh lag kyun nehi raha.."

She tries to fix it harder and she gets a mild shock even before it can get more.. aditya who comes to see her what's she doing here..pushes her back to ground and they both fall on eachother..they are lost in eachother's eyes for a few seconds when priya gets pain in her hand..

"Ouch..mera haath"Aditya makes her sit properly and checks her hand..

"Priya' dekhao apna haath.tum theek toh ho na'." checks her hand and blows air sweetly.

"Haan..wooh shock lag gaya tha..bas issiliye"she withdrews her hand from aditya's hand slowly and sees it herself..nothing happens..all is fine..aditya makes her stand and scolds her getting worried than angry.

"Maine kahan tha na .circuit main problem hain..(she nods remembering)tum ne kyun lagana chaha..kissi aur ko keh deti.. pata nehi agar mein nehi aata toh kya hota'"he gets worried thinking about it.

"Wooh maine socha.."

"Ki saara kaam tum akeli kar logi..i know tum kar sakthi hoo..(priya looks up to him)par agar tumhe kuch hogaya toh..(aditya says it with such concern n care that priya gets lost in his eyes foe few seconds)ab ghur kya rahi hoo?chalo yahan se fir se koi gadbad na karlo...."Priya nods and moves but looks back n asks..

"Par wooh lights.."

"Main ramlal se keh deta hoon..wooh kar dega..chalo.. "

 

Priya is looking down and walking by aditya's side back to house..she is thankful that he saved her and want to say him but is a bit uncomfortable saying it..but atlast she says it..

"Aditya'wooh ..main..i mean..Thanks.."

"Kya kahan tumne.."not looking at her and asking innocently..Priya says again a bit loudly..

"Thanks.."

"Mujhe sunayi nehi de raha zara zor se bolo na..Bolo..bolo.."teasing her..

She sees him angrily and all her thankfulness pops out in a second and she says loudly "Sarfire ho aur sarfire hi rahoge ..hmf!!" and goes inside angrily leaving a laughing aditya back.

 

Inside:

 The whole hall is beautifully decorated and all guests are talking.Priya goes near vidya and sits beside her angrily but seeing vidya she smiles back..and goes back to her usual chirpy mood.

"Priya tum kahan thi..mein tumhare hi intezar kar rahi thi.."

"Kyun gaurav jeejajii ko koi love letter dena hain kya..no problem main aap dono ke beech ki kabutar ban jaathi hoon.."(she acts if flying with her hands)

"Uffo  tum bhi na..main toh bas aisi hi..waise tum bahut pyaar lag rahi hoon.."seeing her dress..priya poses and says teasing her..

"Wooh toh main hoon hi..sambhal ke kahi jeejaji ki nazar aapse hatkar mujhpar na atkee.."

"Priya.."vidya gets fake anger while priya tries to cheer her up.

 "Vidya deedi aap se zyaada toh aaj koi bhi sundar nehi hain..gaurav jee-ja-ji ko dekhiye..kaise chupke chupke aapki ek jhalak pane ke liye taras rahe hain bechare..dekho dekho"

Vidya looks up to see gaurav trying to signal her that she is looking lovely..priya pushes vidya teasingly..


Engagement:

Panditji calls vidya and gaurav to the temple in their house first and after doing puja as per their custom..all gather back to hall where the engagement ceremony begins..Panditji calls vidya and gaurav and all family emembers near and announce.."Chaliye sagayi ki rasame shuru karte hain.."

"Pehle var vadhu ko sagayi ki angooti pehnayiye"

"Chalo bro lagayiye angooti.."aditya nudges gaurav who puts the ring in vidya's finger

"Ab vadhu var ko pehnayiye" vidya blushes taking gaurav's hand..

"Sharmao mat deedi lagayiye na.."vidya too keeps.

All clap and flowers are fallen on gaurav-vidya.


Gaurav gets a chance to talk to vidya atlast..

 "Tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho..pata hain.."

"Aap bhi bahut achche lag rahe hain.."

"Sach.."

"Muuch.."

Vidya blushes.. both are very happy..and pose for the photo while others congratulate eachother.

"Bahut badhai ho samdhanjee..hmare ko aaj ghana khush lage se..ab toh jaldi se shaadi bhi nipatle.."brahmanand hugs vidya's father.

"Jee bhagwan ke krupa se wooh bhi hojayega..aap ko bhi bahut mubarak ho samdhanji"

"Badhai ho bhai sahib"devyani welcomes smilingly..then looks around for priya and aditya.."Yeh Aditya aur Priya kahan chale gaye?"

 

All lights suddenly are put out and spotlight falls on aditya and priya with their friends at back on the top of stairs...they both look eachother mockingly and comes down from stairs and goes near gaurav and vidya.

 

Aditya: (coming from gaurav and vidya back)

"Waha Waha Ramjee, Jodi Kya Banayee

Bhaiya Aur Bhabhi Ko, Badhayee Ho Badhayee

Sab Rasmo Se Badee Hai Jag Me, Dil Se Dil Kee Sagayee"

 

Priya: (Going near Brahma and devyani)

"Aapkee Kripa Se Yeh, Shubh Ghadee Aai

Jiji Aur Jija Ko, Badhayee Ho Badhayee

Sab Rasmo Se Badee Hai Jag Me, Dil Se Dil Kee Sagayee"


"Waha Waha Ramjee Waha Waha Ramjee Waha Waha Ramjee"


Aditya: (Pushing vidya towards gaurav more and more)

"Mere Bhaiya Jo, Chup Baithe Hain

Dekho Bhabhi Yeh, Kaise Ainthe Hain

Aise Bade Hee Bhale Hain, Mana Thode Manchale Hain

Par Aap Ke Siva, Kahee Bhee Naa Phisle Hain"

 

Priya: (Pulls vidya back who's blushing)

"Dekho Dekho Khud Pe, Jiji Itrayee"

 

Aditya: (Pulls priya and dances together)

"Bhaiya Aur Bhabhi Ko, Badhayee Ho Badhayee"

 

Both:

Sab Rasmo Se Badee Hai Jag Me, Dil Se Dil Kee Sagayee"

 

"Waha Waha Ramjee Waha Waha Ramjee Waha Waha Ramjee"

 

Priya: (Talking to gaurav)

"Suno Jijaji, Ajee Aapke Liye

Meree Jiji Ne, Bade Tap Hain Kiye

Mandiro Me Kiye Phere, Puja Sanjh Sawere

Tin Lok Taintis, Devo Ko Yeh Rahee Ghere"

 

Aditya: (Going near vidya who pulls his cheeks)

"Jaisee Maine Mangee Thee, Waisee Bhabhi Pai"

 

Priya: (Pulls aditya and both dance together)

"Jiji Aur Jija Ko, Badhayee Ho Badhayee"

 

Both:

Sab Rasmo Se Badee Hai Jag Me, Dil Se Dil Kee Sagayee"

 

"Waha Waha Ramjee Waha Waha Ramjee Waha Waha Ramjee"

 

The engagement is done successfully and all guests are very happy as all arrangements,decorations and food is excellent and praise.Brahmanand and devyani are thanking all guests who are leaving and giving them return gifts also inviting them to come to marriage.

"Jee aapka bahut bahut shukriya aane ke liye..namaste.. yeh leejiye..shaadi par bhi zaroor ayiyega namaste"

"Bahut achchi tayariya kee hain aapne brahmanand sahab'"one of the guests praises to which devyani replies..

"Yeh sab toh aditya aur priya ne arrange karne mein help kiya hain.."

"Achcha..bahut achcha kiya hain..tarif ke kabil hain..hum chalte hain..namaste"they leave.

 

Brahmanand sees devyani and says.

"Waah bhai..adi ne kiya ?maan gaye chore ko..akhir hmara beta hain..issiliye naa dikh raha tha subah see..ab uski bhi umar ho gayi zimedari uthaneki..main soch raha hoon usse bhi business mein lagwado yeh shaadi waadi ho jaane ke baad.."

"Jee yeh toh achchi baat hain,,,par aap ek baar usse bhi baat karleejiye..kahin wooh aur kuch.."brahmna interrupts..

"Aur kuch ka matlab ka se?Usse bhi gaurav ki tarah kaam sambhalna hoga..bas'ek baar maine kehdiya toh kehdiya'ab yeh sab chod aur samndhi ji ko jaake vida kar.."

"Jee.."scared a bit hearing his tone .

 

Vidya's family is gathered to leave..devyani and brahma joins..

"Vidya beta ab toh mujhe bas shaadi ka intezar hain..jab tum iss ghar mein meri bahu bankar pair rakhogi aur meri ghar ko khushiyon se bhar doongi.."

"Matlab gaurav bhai ko khush kar dogi.."priya adds,,

"Haan haan wooh bhi.."devyani says laughingly..

"Maa aap bhi.."vidya says blushing..

"Kyun tumhe mere gaurav ko khush nehi karna?"devyani adds again..while aditya comes to rescue this time.

 

"Kyun chida rahe ho mere bhabhi ko tum dono..dekho meri bhabhi ko koi nehi chidayega..ab se bhabhi ka devar unka bodyguard banega..kyun bhabhi.."

"Haan aditya..bilkul..iss priya ki bachchi na hamesha mujhe pareshaan karthi hain.."

"Aree kisi ki mazal jo meri bhabhi ko tang kare..(coming near vidya and saying)waise aap batao agar guarav bhaiya aapko tang karenge na toh main unhe bhi nehi chodonga.."

"Aditya..tum bhi..ruko..ruko.."

 

Vidya goes back of aditya who steps aside and vidya falls on gaurav who is coming from aditya's back..and he catches her and both gets lost for a while..priya teases them singing song..

"Haaye haaye..rab ne bana di jodi.."

Gaurav steadies Vidya who blushes and comes back to his father..all are laughing..while vidya and gaurav are embarrassed..

 

Vidya's father starts to leave.."Chaliye ab hum chalthe hain bahut deer ho gayi hain..aur haan tayariya bahut achche the.."

"Maine kiya hain uncle"priya says..

"Aur maine bhi."aditya adds between..

"Bahut achcha hain..khush raho dono..(smiling at both who are avoiding eachother)ab toh farmhouse mein hi mulaqat hogi 3 din baad shaadi ke liye.."

"Jee bilkul hum sab pahunch jayege ..aap chinta na kare..namaste.."says brahmanand and they drop them till outside.

 

 In priya's room:

 Priya is infront of her mirror combing her hair and thinking about aditya..

"Humesha beech mein taang lagata hain..mujhe itna chidata hain'par usne meri jaan bhi bachchayi..haan par jab maine thanks kahan toh itna akad gaya..idiot..uffo kyun soch rahi uske baare mein.."hitting herself with comb..and says "Sarifira.."

 

In aditya's room:

 "Gussa toh jaise naak pe chada hain..baat bolthi kum hain chiltathi zyaada hain..kitni akdu hain ek thanks bhi theek se nehi keh sakthi'main kyun sochne laga uske baare mein.."he tilts to the side of the bed and covers with blanket saying"Miss.Nakhchadi.."

 

"Ishq hain..Ishq hain..Ishq hain..hain yeh'"

 

Precap: "Par hum sangeet mein kaise jayenge?Wooh toh ladies sangeet hain?"

              "Jaana toh hain ab koi na koi tarika zaroor dhoondhna padega."

 

Sorry for the delay...was LAZY Sleepy to write first then wasn't well Stern Smile

Please do comment..Big smile

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Next update..manal se poocho..jab bhi wooh warning shuru kardeLOL

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Edited by sri_4 - 01 April 2011 at 9:14am

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
OMG FINALLLy Angry ! !hahahah I was Jst gona Hunt U Angry ! ROFL 


OMG Reserved !! Jst Cant missss it :D ! 
n Yippppeeee Im FIRST :DD !! 

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Loved it <3 !! 
all those fights They were jst amazin ! I could jst imagine AdiYa fightin LOL
n OMG when she got the Shock ! n the concern on Aditya's face was Awwwww 
n thn the Wah Wah Ram ji Sequence ! hahaha i was imaginin AdiYa dancin on it ROFL !! Amazin ! 

n thn both thinkin about eachother ! in the rooom ! thn Ishq Hai <3 ! 
Perfect <3 !! 

this reminds me of Hum ap ke hain kaun <3 !! ma fav movie !! 


now can u plz Update SOON Angry ! or shalll i run afta u wid ma Chapal Angry <3




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loved this update dearBig smileBig smileBig smile
it was nice to see AdiYa fighting n arguingLOLLOL
keep it upBig smile
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Hey Sri,

Awesome updateClap.

I have read all the 5 parts  and its very very good. i am eagerly waiting for the next part. plz write it soon and share it with us.   

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Just started reading your FF, its fantastic. Your a good writer. I like Priyas bubbly character and Aditya is ofcourse great too. Got to read part 5 yet but please do update soon. And can you pm me please. Thanks Smile

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