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My SP write up - Maneet in Bathroom 1/28/2011

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Maneet Bathroom Romance - My screenplay write up for tomorrow's episode - 1/28/2011


Camera angled towards the sky. Sun rising over the Kurana's Mansion

Maan in the bedroom and Geet in the bathroom -  (same clothing as in the show)

GEET
"Sunnie yeh, did you get any hot water for your bath this morning? I am having trouble, please could you come in and check?" 

MAAN
(checking emails on his phone and a little distracted)
"Ha, Geet"

Maan walks into the bathroom and sees Geet by the bathtub. He walks up to her and sits on the edge of the bathtub to run the water. Geet quickly moves up between his legs and puts her arms around his shoulders and laughs softly. 

GEET
(smiling and looking down at him) 
Mr.Maan Singh Kurana, I trapped you! Ab kahan jaoge?

MAAN
(A little taken aback and looking up at her)
"Hah?? What no hot water problem? I thought if it needed repairs I would ask Nakul to look into it before I headed to work"

Geet is gently running her fingers through his hair

MAAN
(smiles and puts his arms around her waist)
(in a husky tone)
"Don't mess up my hair, I have an important meeting this morning" 

GEET
(disappointed at his statement, holds his face in her hands)
(in a low sweet voice)
"Aaj, meri Shaadi ka Joda dry cleaning mei dhene jawoongi"

MAAN
(In his own world, pulls her close and puts his head against her stomach)
(whispers)
"The client is coming from UK I might have to take him out to dinner tonight"

GEET
(Lowers her mouth to his ear)
(soft and seductive voice)
"I have to scrub my feet today"

MAAN
(moves back to look at her)
(confused)
"Kya kaha tu ne?"

GEET
(pouting a little)
"Thoda toh sudhar jaye yena? Does it have to be boring practical talk all the time? How about some morning romance with your wife? How about some meeti bathe?"

MAAN
(pulls her face close to his, his lips a hair's breath away from hers)
(in a husky voice, his eyes wondering from her eyes to her lips)
"Tu mujhe sikadona Geet?" Yeh meeti meeti bathe kiase karte hai?"

GEET
(mesmerized and eyes on Maan's lips)
(whispers)
"Yeh aap ke hont..."

Geet moves her fingers across his stubble chin enjoying the sensation. Moves it to the edge of his lower lip and gently touches his lip. Maan closes his eyes and marvels at the feelings she is evoking in him.

DADI & ANNIE
(Off Screen)
"Maan, Geet where are you guys?"

Maan and Geet snap out of their trance and rush to open the door. Then they stop in their tracks feeling embarrassed to go out together.

GEET
"Maan what shell we do?"

MAAN
"You get yourself into trouble and I have to be the one to rescue you, hah?"

GEET
(she looks at him pleadingly)
"plea... Oh, forget it. I can help myself. I am Mrs. Maan Singh Kurana now!

She gives him a sweet smile over her shoulder while walking out the door

MAAN
(mad, under his breath)
"Geettttttttt stop! Yeh pagal ladki. I never know what she will do next."

Seeing Geet walking out of the bathroom Maan looks around and quickly grabs something off the counter by the sink and walks out.

DADI
(Surprised)
"You both were in the bathroom?"

Looking at their guilt filled faces it dawns on both Annie and Dadi that they have interrupted something interesting. And they start apologizing and laughing at the same time. Geet feels shy and looks at Maan and sees him with a frown on his face and trying to signal something to her.

DADI
(laughing)
"don't feel bad, it happens to all us. We all get caught in awkward situation sometime or the other."

MAAN
(rushing to explain)
"No Dadi, nothing like that."

MAAN
(lifts his hand up to show something)
"I was just showing Geet how to use an electric toothbrush"

GEET
(looking at Maan surprised)
"Huh??"

ANNIE
(grimacing)
"Gross bro, you were making her use yours?"

GEET
(crossing her cheeks and looking up)
"chi chi babaji"

MAAN
"Quite Annieeee. I was showing it to her with the spare head that comes with the kit"

GEET
(Looks up again)
"Babaji, Ab jhoot bhi bole ne lage"

Maan turns to Geet and takes her hand and puts the electric toothbrush in it. Geet looks at him with the expression what do you want me to do with it.

MAAN
(sternly)
"Now that I showed you how to use it go use it."

GEET
(little mad, want's to bug him)
"Sure, I will go use it. It looked really interesting while you were demonstrating it." 

Geet smirks at him and starts heading towards the bathroom.

MAAN
(smiles at Geet and turns with a smile towards Dadi and Annie thinking he got the whole situation under control. Slowly it starts to sink in and his expression changes to panic when he hears the toothbrush turning on.

MAAN
(quickly turns and walks towards the bathroom, looking over his shoulder)
"Sorry Dadi, I will be right back. I forgot to say goodbye to Geet."

DADI
(Shouts)
"Geet Beta, we are going down. Come down after you finish brushing your teeth"

ANNIE
(winking at Dadi, shouts)
"Since the electric brushing is new to you take your time Bhabi. We will understand if you come late to breakfast."

Maan rushes into the bathroom to see Geet sitting on top of the counter with the toothbrush whirling in the air and with a cute grin on her face.

She sees his relieved expression and with a coy smile, head down looking through drooped eyelids, she beckons him to come to her. "Aye yeh Aap kaha ja yenge, ek nazar laut ke phir ayenge..."  

MAAN
(running his hand through his hair and smiling to himself)
(mumbles)
"Yeh toh mujhe pagal bana degi! Life will never be dull with my sherni....."


This was my screenplay write up for tomorrow 1/28/2011.. I know the CVS will come up with a better one... but till then hope you enjoyed my version...(there is only one A in mineWink
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Tonyahk, if you read this post, this msg is for you:
Did I do a good job bringing into this post the element that you found common in both my previous posts? LOL You were the only one who spotted that! And to tell you the truth it was an accidental mention in the first two. In this post I deliberately tried incorporating it. Haha sounds like I have a fetish for oral hygiene. 

Kash, Kal Aisa hota toh??... Ufff 

Thanks for reading.. Push "like" if I have entertained you even a wee bit.Embarrassed





Edited by naamteeg - 27 January 2011 at 7:23pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Haha, I definitely liked it more than just 'a wee bit!' Loved it, loved it, loved it...it had me 'LOL'ing my seat! LOL
 
Really very funny!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikhi...

Haha, I definitely liked it more than just 'a wee bit!' Loved it, loved it, loved it...it had me 'LOL'ing my seat! LOL
 
Really very funny!

Wow, Thanks a bunch!! Embarrassed
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
DancingSilly where is everyone??? don't ignore my postAngry

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Lovely post from where u get this electric toothbrush idea.

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
agar aisa hota to mazza na aa jaataLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namitasin

Lovely post from where u get this electric toothbrush idea.

Thanks yaarEmbarrassed

Haha how did the electric toothbrush idea come about? Ummm...

In my previous two "asia hota..." posts the comedy element involves around Geet brushing her teeth. And this happened purely by accident. I did not even notice it till another GF member Tonya mentioned it. So when I was penning down this post I thought it would be a good idea to carry the theme.
Haha, so when I was desperately looking for an excuse for Maan to explain to Dadi why they were both in the bathroom together, the electric toothbrush idea popped into my head. You see I use one myself.LOL

Much appreciate your appreciation and curiosity...Clap

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