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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 96)

sakadafi Senior Member
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Wow!!! A brilliant update!!  I love the way you write...both this part and the last one, I could practically visualize the whole entrance and dance sequence.  Amazing job!!!  Writing a romance thriller isn't an easy job and let me just say that you are doing a great job at it...building up the suspense, keeping the readers hooked.  Brilliant!!
 
"i m staring at men's eyes a little too much these days ......this leads to quite a complication" LOLLOLLOL
this part was really funny...bechari geet...she thinks she's seeing cheif in everyone she meets when chief is actually meeting her in a different disguise each time....what a torture...usse sach mein lag raha hoga ke woh pagal ho jaaye gi.
 
Am really looking forward to the upcoming dhamakas in your story...wonder how geet will react to dev's proposal when she knows she's in love with someone who's out of her reach...or is he? continue soon....
 

kasturi11 Groupbie
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing update
speechless
keep on going dear
how much ever big the update feels like not enough 
waiting for next one
princess163 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged

Hey reet!!

Brilliant updateClap

love you Hug
Poor geet-maan wrecking havoc with her senses...
and how can i forget, geet...tadpaofying him...burning him at her sensous best...
OMG!!! I strained my imaginative power completely visualising the hot and sizzling performance of the duo.............arghhh......update real soon dear...its getting harder and herder to wait.....but, wait...what did you say? end this ffShocked
please don't  say that, let alone do it!
Love
Swati
P.S.-are you on fb???
jazzerette IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Wow!! It was magical!! Truly like a Arabian Night saga!! The entire dance sequence was spell-binding. I was literally glued to the screen!!
KreyaArshiLover IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Amazing finally some Maaneet scenes, pl can you add maans pov to bcs, i want to see what he is thinking.
sukklover IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged

.....reet dear......

really ....

n i
just  ..ur work.Big smile.
tons of hugs 4 u......Hug..reet.....
..dear just keep it up...Thumbs Up
sorry 4 short comment...
lov,Heart
Tama
Shalve IF-Sizzlerz
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Posts: 12616

Posted: 13 April 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
hey reet..
wow... what should i say... i mean...i  m speechlessDead.....
its.... fantastics....superb.... awesome....just loved itClap...
tell me something frankly... Ouchdo u write to us??????   
if yes... then i must say u are very much sucessful in thatROFL....
so update the next part soon... ready to be deadDead again...LOL

sudhi123 Newbie
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
WOWWWWW......AWESOME....

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