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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 89)


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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 3:38am | IP Logged
U r.....brilliant.....uhh.....i mean,Ok cant say anything i m speechless.
Ur last update made me cry again at d scene wen Maaneet were on call n den chief n adi convo abt Dev.
See geet.....i was always right.....u never loved. (A tear den a lone tear trickled down his cheek.)
dis line n his n her feeling made me cry.
N dis d above update, was toooooo gud. So dis was ur Arabian nights surprise, well nw wenever i will read AN i m going 2 remember dis update.
Luved der dance n Maan's anger seeing pervej dance wid her n Maan teasing her wen she asked abt d male stripper, he knw dat wat she was feeling abt d stripper, he knw she still luv him den also annoying her linking wid Dev.
Nw not able 2 say anything more, still lost in update.
Going 4 re-reading d update n imagining everything in my dream as i hav not slept last nyt.
Waiting 4 ur next part

Edited by SOLACEofEYES - 13 April 2011 at 5:04am

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RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 9713

Posted: 13 April 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged

I sooo loved it Clap
Can't pinpoint 1 particular part
My  throat went dry reading the dance sequence Clap
The entire update was Fantastic to say the least Clap .....

Edited by drashsree100 - 13 April 2011 at 4:15am

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sweet scorpio IF-Sizzlerz
sweet scorpio
sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
maan will definitely make geet mad by his different appearances...first as a stripper and thn as a policeman!...poor geet!LOL
wow!...loved thier arabian dance!
continue soon!

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kyphfanz IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2637

Posted: 13 April 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
a very hot dance. and love when maan got pissed wheneva geets with some other guy!
loved it and cant wait to read ahead.

Edited by kyphfanz - 13 April 2011 at 5:45am
xxx123 Groupbie

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged

Hi Reet

My name is Radhika

I don't think I have commented ever on anyone's fanfics so you are the first!!! Smile

You have an amazing talent to portray an engaging story so beautifully!! Star

Hats off to you mate! Approve

i hope you are not ending this amazing fanfic soon, that will break many hearts!!!!Broken Heart 

plz plz update soon waiting eagerly!!!  Lots and Lots of LoveHeart

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Bul3 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 12534

Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
lovely update Reet!..the encounter between Maan and Geet was amazing..loved how Maan was pestering her just so that she blurts out what he has been longing to hear!..those smirks of victory and those moments of pure jealousy truly took my breath away!..he is so madly and hopelessly in love with her..he kept asking questions like"you have a habit of forgetting easily,..when a person is unreasonably rude ....that means there was something irking her from within ...or she is trying to conceal something bigger than it ...."..all this was just because he needed to see those reactions from Geet which proves that she hasn't forgotten him and loves him too!..awDay Dreaming..but feel bad for both of them..poor Geet is having such a tough time and Maan's rather ambigous appearances in different avatars is just confusing her..But the beauty is that no matter which look Maan deceives,Geet's heart always recognises him!..they love each-other soooooooo much..Geet felt terrible watching him strip and Maan was in no less fire when he saw Geet flaunting herself in the arabian dance!..the dance was MAGNIFICENT!!..once again you were extremely brilliant in your potrayal of events..I could really visualize Maan-Geet dancing(WHAT A DANCEStar) and could actually feel the chemistry they shared..I was literally going all dreamy and red while reading(=seeing) the dance sequence..BRILLIANTClapClapClap..I am so longing to see these two confess and be in each-others arms!..hayye..aise enemies mil jaye to dost kise chahiyeLOLWink..apart from them,I feel bad for Dev..he is a nice guy and hopefully he will find someone who loves him too!..but I am glad we dont have negative Dev hereSmile..AWESOME UPDATE!..cant wait to read the next part and see what will happen next!..what will Maan aka Guru tell Geet?..will Geet realize that her feelings that he is chief is right?..update soon!..loveHug

Edited by Bul3 - 13 April 2011 at 5:01am

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged
it ended........Angryi was hoping to see more dance & chemistry between the twoEmbarrassed
it was just marvellousClapClap
geet gave maan tit for tat LOLhe was stripping & here geet is dancing arabic danceWinkLOL
the reaction on maan's face was worth watchingShockedLOL
(did you notice i am saying these things as they were happening in front of my eyes)thats the magic of your writtingSmileClapClap
poor devShocked when geet said he is not her boyfriend or fianceOuch 
plz plz plz cont soon
am axiously waiting for maneet's encounter in next updateDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

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richiiiii Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
god loved it soooooooo much....and i am happy to hear that updates will be more frequent now.....yayiieeeee!!!

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