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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 81)

maanmishti Goldie
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
hey reet,

Both updates were terrific.....no words describe the way u put everything........loved their sadness abt each other........how crazily they r in love with each other but dont know how much they love each other........anyways this is a kind of testing their own love.......i liked the way adi scolded geet for thinking so low of himClap........i dont know why but i am hating devAngry..........i hope geet  have strong grip on her love in future.......she should not be emotional and give in to darji if he asks her to marry dev.......loved the goa scene......oh my goodness chief is the stripper.........oh my god!!! i missed it......at least u should have given me an invitation to the club yaar when u r adding this scene to u r scriptLOL...........i thought we were fdsCry.........anyways it was terrific part though.......waiting for next part eagerly...........why i think that goa would change life of geet and chief.......anyways i am loving this rolacoaster ride........update soon sweety...........love uHug


Edited by maanmishti - 11 April 2011 at 5:17pm

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
wow  very long  and awesome  update love it  and thanks for pm and no was not boring reading it love it very much hope you update soon please will wait desperately for it
  i know the striper is MAAN  and the poster is very nice i like it
     and hope will get another update as soon as possible when you  can                                                THANKS YOU                                                               

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sakadafi Senior Member
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Wow what an update...the way you show Geet living her life after that incident...trying yet not able to move on...especially with Adi & Sunaina continually coming in front of her.  And the phone call.........
 
Maan's stripper entry was....dhamakedar!!! What an entry....really looking forward to the story ahead.....
 
Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
love how yu describegeet's feeling & restlessness when she was craving to see or hear maan that was amazing...
ohh they are in so much pain yet they dont tell each other how they feel
imaging him as a stripper it i'll be
fun part he he he
uff & that dev i hate him how
can he ask geet hand without
her permmission
they there suffering both of them
i hope they confess soonnnnnnnnnn
love the siggie so beautiful
even though made long update
but still craving to read more
love the way yu write like
magic it was blast & sandwich
lovely update
music lovely toooooooooooo
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
thank yuuuuuuuuuu for keeping
the promise
i'll be waiting for another freaking amazing update
with long long one toooooooooooooooo
muah oh god never comment that long
but what can say its magic update
thanks pm

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 8:00pm | IP Logged

yaaaaaay you back

i was sooooooo eager to read this part

loved how you described both maan and geets yearning for each other

really brilliant

cont soon please

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sadique137 Senior Member
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
OMG
i am still wondering y the page has no burned edges
it was too hot to handle
kya dhamakedar wapsi thi maan ki
cant wait more please update soon
now that the eye to eye talk is overwill have to see what they speak face to face...................

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
wow... have no words to describe... really good... i missed your updates so much...

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
omg i am so happy with the long update...............thanks for such a long update................
wat to say abt this update............awesome is just a short word...............
i just got emotional and had tears in my eyes when i read abt the pain both maan and geet r going thro...........
oh god when maan felt the pain, when geet said she doesnt recognize him.................uff man geet had more pain after saying those hurtful words to her love, her life...............
but i feel sad for geet more...........she can never forget him or move in her life............
devAngry might be nice guy but how dare he goes and asks for her hand in marriage from darji..........i will kill him.............actually being a lawyer he was playing with the words i guess bcoz when darji asked abt geet's choice he said darji's is hers so her her darji might think she is ready to marry him...........or is it me...........am i thinking more of it than its supposed to b.............

patha nahin inn dono ka yeh hide and seek game kab tak chalega...............agar woh paas ayega toh geet jhat se pechan legi ki woh kaun hain............probably thats the reason he never came near her....but still she cud feel a familiarity in him...........

maan ko male stripper bana diya...........uff saare ladkiyan toh mar gayi hogi.............so he sports the stubble now and he wud b looking like as he is in the serial now..............

waisey where was dev when geet was singing around.............

cant wait for the next update.............too many things to b solved.............first their hide and seek game with their feelings............dev has to b shown his place out of her life.............she has to know the truth abt him.............i dont know how u r going to move the story fwd but i trust u, u will make it much more captivating..............hey when can v expect the next update..............
as u hv started with their meeting again.............cant wait for the next update............i know v r little demanding but pl try to update frequently.............

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