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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 79)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
loved da update
do continue

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
The stripper is undoubtedly Maan!! & man what a song selection!!

& u talk abt LIKE?? U bet I loved it!!! Bt jaldi khatam ho gaya :(

Heheheh....

Awesome update.. Luv u fr that.. & reply to my PMs pls

-Kads

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
OMG..this update was hell painful Reet!..the way Geet was suffering in his absence was so disheartening..and the most heartbreaking part for Geet was

"Geet broke down on the floor........she couldn't hold the sobs anymore......she recalled how mum he went on other side .. she didn't know what she did......why she did.......just did.....the ball was out of her court ......

He had hurt me so much .........so why is it bothering me if I have refused to recognize him .......is he hurt .......he didn't say anything after that .....

Please forgive me....................................................................

She helplessly dug her nails in the cold floor...helpless sobs echoed in the constant sound of rain .....nobody knew how her excruciating cry lost its way in the crackling noise of the thunder .......nobody knew how her heart broken into pieces just after she stabbed her beloved's heart ...."

and Maan..oh god..I literally cried reading what Maan went through after Geet denied recognising his voice!Cry..my heart truly ached and it was not just Geet and Maan who were in pain..I was also in great painCryCryCry
"

He smiled with filled eyes.......

You have made the right decision geet .....he is the right man for you .

Why would you recognize me......i m a criminal ......a dweller of darkness .....and you are the rays of sun ....

I m so happy today .....but why my heart betraying .....

See geet ...i was always right ...you never loved me.....

He smiled again ...this time a lone tear trickled down ...and he was not ashtonished...."

the entire episode at strip club was extremely well written..I could actually imagine each and every scene and Maan's teary eyes and jealous Geet!..(great song selection-very apt for the situationStar)
calling this update AWESOME would be totally an understatement!..have no words to describe how amazing,fabulous,fantastic it is!..ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
PS-I know I dont reply regularly and I am sorry about it but I truly love your FF and your writing ..you are just an amazing writer..for me you are truly one of the bestest writers I have come across on IF!..and in love with enemy is the most unique and extremely different FF I have ever read..it is so gripping and interesting and unpredictable!!the best FF for me!..love you for giving such a brilliant FFHug


Edited by Bul3 - 11 April 2011 at 11:36am

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
wow reet......super-long part, i must say ur fingers must be aching after typing all this....................but u know how much greedy we all r and we r not even satisfied wid this much long  part atleast i m not i just wanna read next now...................
about d update it was really amazing as well as heart wrenching.....
d way maan reacts after geet's phone call and geet broke down......is really heartbreaking.......................really i am crying after seeing maan so helpless after knowing dat geet doesn't recognize his voiceCryCry.............."

He smiled with filled eyes.......

You have made the right decision  geet .....he is the right man for you .

Why would you recognize me......i m a criminal ......a dweller of darkness .....and you are the rays of sun ....

I m so happy today .....but why my heart betraying .....

See geet ...i was always right ...you never loved me.....

He smiled again ...this time a lone tear trickled down ...and he was not ashtonished...."

awww its too painful................
continue soon dear...........
love u..............

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
thank u 4 such a loooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnngggggggg update...... jst loved it........loved how they both care 4 each other still dont admitSmile...... the boquet wid white n red roses was ultimate.... dat was sent by maan na...Big smile
i hope they meet soon n she after discovering dat he was the male stripper.... i literally want geet to get jealoused, irritated , annoyed at this..... claiming him too be only hers... how gud dat wud be...Day Dreaming..... then maan coonsoling n manaofying herWink

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
awesome dear...

loved it.. I wasn't able to take the pain.. So maan is out of jail????

please please bring them togather..

and continue sooooon
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
just 1 reaction after reding ds update
O..M..G..Shocked
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
wow.. fabulous...superb...awesome...loved it.... 

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