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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 78)

Fallen Angel IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Amazing update, just loved it :))
Plz cont soon!!

zoha25 Goldie
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged

oh god he z maan..
holyangel Senior Member
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
loved it... loved the poster as welll.... 

precape... whn they will talk face to face thn wont she know by his voice that he is the masked man... hope she recognized him ....
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged
suupreb update.
love it.
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
loved it...longest must say
sweet cherry IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
loved da update
do continue
Kkadss Goldie
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
The stripper is undoubtedly Maan!! & man what a song selection!!

& u talk abt LIKE?? U bet I loved it!!! Bt jaldi khatam ho gaya :(

Heheheh....

Awesome update.. Luv u fr that.. & reply to my PMs pls

-Kads

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
OMG..this update was hell painful Reet!..the way Geet was suffering in his absence was so disheartening..and the most heartbreaking part for Geet was

"Geet broke down on the floor........she couldn't hold the sobs anymore......she recalled how mum he went on other side .. she didn't know what she did......why she did.......just did.....the ball was out of her court ......

He had hurt me so much .........so why is it bothering me if I have refused to recognize him .......is he hurt .......he didn't say anything after that .....

Please forgive me....................................................................

She helplessly dug her nails in the cold floor...helpless sobs echoed in the constant sound of rain .....nobody knew how her excruciating cry lost its way in the crackling noise of the thunder .......nobody knew how her heart broken into pieces just after she stabbed her beloved's heart ...."

and Maan..oh god..I literally cried reading what Maan went through after Geet denied recognising his voice!Cry..my heart truly ached and it was not just Geet and Maan who were in pain..I was also in great painCryCryCry
"

He smiled with filled eyes.......

You have made the right decision geet .....he is the right man for you .

Why would you recognize me......i m a criminal ......a dweller of darkness .....and you are the rays of sun ....

I m so happy today .....but why my heart betraying .....

See geet ...i was always right ...you never loved me.....

He smiled again ...this time a lone tear trickled down ...and he was not ashtonished...."

the entire episode at strip club was extremely well written..I could actually imagine each and every scene and Maan's teary eyes and jealous Geet!..(great song selection-very apt for the situationStar)
calling this update AWESOME would be totally an understatement!..have no words to describe how amazing,fabulous,fantastic it is!..ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
PS-I know I dont reply regularly and I am sorry about it but I truly love your FF and your writing ..you are just an amazing writer..for me you are truly one of the bestest writers I have come across on IF!..and in love with enemy is the most unique and extremely different FF I have ever read..it is so gripping and interesting and unpredictable!!the best FF for me!..love you for giving such a brilliant FFHug


Edited by Bul3 - 11 April 2011 at 11:36am

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