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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 78)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged
oh my god i am spechless
please update soon

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ClapClapClapClapawesome..... i just love ur ff.... no other ff has kept me captive like ds..... i started reading it on saturday only and was disappointed to know that u have not updated from so long..... but i ws really happy when u updated after so many days....... please update it soon....and do send me a pm if possible...Clap.ClapClapClap

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dreamy_Mystique

..hiii reet....
just before giving this update u wer complaining about having lost ur touch in writing.....
but do u have any idea....that with this update...u have simply shut the mouths of ppl who dare to question ur writing abilities.....
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i doubt if there is any person who wud question ur writing....
this was simply mindblowing.......what shall i say reva .....i was feeling lil depressed yesterday ....so tried....but neva thought i will get this reply in return ....i cant explain what i m feeling while typing this for u .....reva......how shud i thank u ? ..do u hav any idea how much i missed ur replies the whole jan and half of the feb ....i missed u so much
 
 
u have no idea...i was literally wishing that this ff shud definitely be made into a movie or a show......coz it is simply paisa vasool.........
this update just blew my mind..............especially with the emotional turmoil of geet and maan............i was literally at the verge of screaming my lungs out saying ...u dumbos.......ur other half is missing u as much as u miss and love them.....
each and every character has such a genuinity n them...that u simply cant help falling in love with themm..
i never in my dreams has thought about me likin dev...but here....i just adore him......but not as much as i do maan......
yeah ....i just try portraying as a normal human of our daily work....until u get hurt by ur heart .....everybody is good.....till ur expectaions are being satisfied....u are happy and nice...isnt it ..?
the convo between geet and adi, or su or yash or rishi.....they added so much authenticity to ur ff.....which simply not only focuses on the leads but also on the other characters............
 
 
hey ...i loved this part of ur reply ............ohh thank u so much for understanding ......you know me....i m kind of belong to rational groupies....i cant make exceedingly romantic lovey dovey things like nissar do ..he is hell of a director ....i salute him ....he fills what lacks in me.....sorry yaar ..m not comparing myself with him ..but still ....i m very fond off his skills.....
i try imagining what can happen in ths situation ...and just write it down ....may be i dont fulfill the criteria of an actual fanfic writer ...but i cant be like that ..i envy people who rights damn good romantic shots ...like bheegi and all....
i wish someday i will able to blend utter romance in my fic
geet's torment, her outburst, her loneliness, her self talks wer so heartwrenching...that i cant help feeling lik giving her a tight hug and consoling her.......
u just compel ur readers to feel emphatic for ur characters....
the way u began ur update...i thought geet's saviours wer either adi and maan....but gurl u proved me wrong........and i simply love when i am being proved wrong.............
u spring unpredictable surprises in ur updates......that i feel lik giving u lots of jhappies and kissies for it.....LOL
 
lolz.....hehe...kissies to u tooooooWink...it cudnt be maan ...as he was behind the bars ...he had to go as he had to make a real criminal image in front of Rheo ...who owned the strip club at goa ....and aadi .....why wud su fall behind .....well as for aadi .....boring ho jata ....
 
adi is simply adorable who is not only like wellwisher and friend for geet....but is equally faithful to maan...
the reaction from adi when geet accuses maan .....is simply a scene to watch out for .... when it annoys adi to no end that geet doubts maan..........i was bowled over by adi's loyalty and friendship towards maan......
me too.....havnt u seen our stammering aadi at geet hsp ....he is loyal to both of them...i simply adore him to the core
 
again su's calm and composed behavior when geet shouted on her ...shows how much su  is misunderstood ...atleast thats what i did when in ur earlier updates su used to treat geet like trash......
 
yeah....u can  neva know a person fully until u see every aspect of him/her ..i will prove that in this fiction ...at least will try too
 
the scenes between dev and geet wer equally engaging....the way geet tried to put all her energies in her profession and block out maan's memories wer very painful to read...but nevertheless they wer powerpacked..
the bouquet of roses scene left a mark on my memory and my mind...coz the scene had so much to convey through its sheer simplicity...the image u posted just struck the right chord.....i was left completely speechless...she is able to spot the roses from him..eventhough unknowingly that its from him....and takes her to bedroom with her.......i simply loved that scene.....
awww.......i loved this so much ...............thank u thank u so much .....uhh...u picked the right part of it .....yepp.....i didnt get the real pic for it ..like i imagined....but well tried...
u know reva ....what maan wanna show ......that his love is pure WHITE ...and strog RED
 
how geet miscontrues his actions of keeping his ppl to watch over her........or the way she thinks tht maan never had any deep rooted feelings for her....or the way he wants thinks to happen his way.............
i actually feel so helpless coz both luv each other but the distance is taking a toll on their already complicated relationship......
righto......so they will have next set of encounters.....i dont know how and when ....but time out for distance ...will geet get to know who chief is ?
 

what does he wanna prove...what does he want ....if he doesn't want to come in front of me..doesnt want to see my face....if he wanted to finish everything like he said.....then what's the meaning of such gestures ...what m I supposed to understand ..... that he cares....he still cares....then why the hell he doesn't come in front me.....i m sick of this endless wait ...

Doesn't he get what m I going through ...? either come in my life ...or go away ....dont raise hope in my mind and break the castles made in air ...please stop it ....her heart cried but eyes didn't spill the salt water ...she was not able to take it any more.....the sky kissing expectations and the next moment shattering into pieces .. ..months passed ...and each passing second seemed like years to geet ....

well the above lines wer simply fabulous and rightly echo geet's inner turmoil

thank you so muc h EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
the convo between M and G wer hardly of two or three lines but had such an impact...i never knew silence could leave so much impact...the song chosen was amazing....i personally love that song tooLOL
ahhh...i m elated that u liked song ...ohhh myyy......i so love the song .....often i type the story of this fiction keeping this song in backgorund score....bt not the remix version .....i love the real one
 
their body language, breathing rhythm , oscillating thoughts...everything has been captured minutely and accurately......kudos to u for that...

the following phone convo btwn M and adi.....shattered me....coz ...

i felt lik crying with maan for loving her so much and yet thinking that geet can be happy with dev...........and not a criminal like him.....
i love u reva......that is the only thing i can say ...u dug out the entire thing from just three words ....
u r marvello0us
hell...i never thought i wud sympathise with a criminal....but this one is too good and i really dont mind falling in love with him......

the club scene was electrifying....the way u described the ambience of the club simply transported me to another world.......

i never been to any nightclub in my entire life..so u hav to praise my imagination for that .....and as well forgive me if its not perfect Embarrassed
 
maan swaying and gyrating to the song just left me awestruck...i cud visualise..........how i wished if my imagination had wings and ur updates cud also be visual...i wud have fainted and hyperventilated.....

the scene of maan stripping, singing, dancing  must have left many of ur readers on the hospital bed...................i mean u wer too good.....

yup ..rania asked for a video ...lolz.....
 
geet also singing along with him......without realising when she joined in was such a cute one.....and gettin pulled towards him, his aura......

she feeling guilty for eying a stripper inspite of loving somebody else was equally good.....

maan having eyes only geet inspite of half naked girls falling on him..........

love u once again .....u pick up the right essence
so u have no doubt thats maan ....!!!! haha
 
the song selection was again cherry on the cake......coz it simply added to sheer beauty and excellence of the update.....
 
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh.....thank u sooooooooooo muchhhhh...!!
 
 
so i am simply bowled over by this magnificent update of urs...

and indeed this was a lovely and longgggggggggggggg update....but not complaining coz i loved it.....i loved it

and these are not some words i say just becoz u r my frnd.....but it is something that i feel as a reader and i am sure a lot many will agree with many..........

 
what shud i say reva....i know u dont write it only because u r my reader ...u feel it ...and that makes my heart swell
ur updates are mindblowingly intense and addictive

1000/10.............super duper update......

love u and ur ff.... and addicted tooLOL

keep writing

revaBig smile


P.S.-- yet again i managed to write such a lengthy commentLOL....i am simply incorrigibleLOL be what you are .....because ..everything about you makes me proud ....that i have such a friend like you ...but reva sometimes bas me up too....adat padi ja rahi hai ....lolz


  



 

 



Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 11 April 2011 at 10:36am

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Amazing update, just loved it :))
Plz cont soon!!
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged

oh god he z maan..
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
loved it... loved the poster as welll.... 

precape... whn they will talk face to face thn wont she know by his voice that he is the masked man... hope she recognized him ....
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged
suupreb update.
love it.
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
loved it...longest must say

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