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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 51)

MishtyShona IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Reet, ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapIt was amazing yaar, mind blowing n speechless yaar.... Am not a player of words so i cannot write wonderful things but wat even words i am using, they r from the bottom of my heart dear... Pls don stop, i don mind if it goes on for another 5 threads too, its worth it... Waiting for ur next update...


PS: I read this update 4 times continuously...Smile

..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
loved it so maan is not a police officer ok will b waiting to know on what charge is he going to hand over himself to police
MsMovielover IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged
this was amazing seriously no words can describe it...
you are really an amazing writer that just keeps me glued to ur story i do not even want the update to finish i want just want to read read & read more Wink


please please dont discontinue what am i meant to do without reading ur ff??? OuchOuchOuchOuchDeadDeadDeadDead

please continue it means a lot... so i wish you all the very best for your exams but i hope you dont forget about us & the Ff Cry


OMG you have another FF ??? Shocked send me the links please i would love to read them i hope you have many ROFL
jazzerette IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Amazing and fabulous!! 
shining_moon IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanmeet_Reet

Originally posted by shining_moon

hey reet
well what to comment I m literally speechless
the emotions of both maan and geet are beautifully described
the way he cared for her.........get offended by her remarks of seducing her to bed was simply very well expressed...............ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
n thanks a ton for the lastkiss geet gave to chief.............I was really waiting for itEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
lovely.................just awesome....mindblowing
if u were not a doc then u could have made an awesome career in writingWink
the last part was most touching when maan realises that he loves geet when she actually walked out of his life......................Ouch
but my hopes r still up as they r bound to cross each otherWink.....................
n I dont know who r those writers copying u but let me tell u something............no one can ever equal u in quality of words n expressions however they try to copy................so plzzzz dont give a damn to them n continue this fic..............Thumbs Up.............n to tell u honestly if u will discontinue this fic I'll certainly go mad as I m super addicted n cant help itCryCryCryCry..........so plzz plzz plzzz plzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz keep writingBig smile n one more request plzz read my comment to ur previous part on pg 19 I really meant those words for that lovely updateSmile
love u
n yes I forgot to mention I have copied ur line from part-19 for which I have pmed u.....plzz dont sue me for that...........Cry
 
 
u know what....
 
the lines i hav marked in blue
 
it feels so high ..so damn good .....
 
that u have noticed...
 
and i wait for this kind of reply one simple note has made it clear ......
 
that u are a true reader ...!!
 
i m elated in joy ..cloud 9
 
pm ....copied...dnt get u .....!! jo bhi kia accha kia ...chalo yaar ....i love for every thing ...!!
dont think about anything ...just remember u made me so happy !!!
 
 
yes ...he was mad at her comment.......the love was not only physical.....
 
thank u anupam ....thanku so much
 
and yes.....i m nt a student of cmc......bt my frens are there ..how cum u hav a relation to that place ?
well I m glad u acknowledge my commentBig smile.............
n as for the pm well I have pmed u before starting a fic of mine that I wanted to use the line.....irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired........from ILWE.....it really suits the concept of my story.............
and I too have frnds in cmc u provide me with full update of that place thats how I know about it.....
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
good to know u are continuing the story. gr8 update. ur updates makes my day.
chubzy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
SmileClapClapSmileamazingly beautiful Big smile ClapClapBig smile        
now i see their real struggle gonna start,  this is wat we can sence in this update of urs
geet thinks maan to b impredictable but i think she is not less . tat goodbye kiss was sizzling yet unexpectedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i jst loved d whole scenerio where geet bid her goodbye to adi n he wit such a cute n loving gesture showed how much he'll miss her , his action of touching her head like an elder bro touched my heartHeart  , it simply indicated tat they share a bond of purelove  n respect
her cold behaviour towards maan helpedmaan to realise tat no  matter wat he says her to forget their yet nameless feelings n bond  but he by himself is unconditionally n irrevocably in love wit her n he can't deny it anymore
iwasnt realy expecting this update but as always u surprised me wit this fabulous update
sweet !!! i realy didnt remember of coming across a ff very similar to urs but if i do i can bet there is simply no comparision between  original wit a copied ff
 
 
ShockedShockedShockedU WANTED TO STOP WRITING THIS UPDATE, ShockedShockedShocked
mind it gal there is some one behind u pointing a gun at u if u even think tat again * giving an evil laugh* muhaaahaaaa. just kiddin!!!Embarrassed LOLLOLLOL  
but its not fair tat b'coz of some1 u thought to punish ur readersCryCryCry
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooon n very best of luck wit ur studiesBig smile
sona-rai IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
awesome awesome but but noooooooooooooooo discontinuing allowed complete it yaar loved ur ff a lot and enemy ko lover main tu change hona hi hoga na so i'm waiting for next partBig smile

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