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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 29)

shivangi783 Goldie
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Phew, that was one of the longest update you've ever done with so many twists and turns! Took me a good amount of time to read it. I am still under the spell of the update!

BTW HelloHug Hug
First of all let me tell you no need to be worried about the response. You don't know how much we love your work. See we even pester you to update despite of knowing that you have exams coming upTongue How can one not enjoy after reading super long updates with so much interesting events happening and the story going through lotta twists and turns?

So you worried about the violence part. To be honest, i was getting goosebumps reading that part. Well, it was too much of violence but you managed to bring it out wellClap 

Interesting revelations in this update-
1. Adi- Till now we knew that Adi knew that Chief had a soft corner for Geet but today he first spoke it out to Geet and then later to Maan after Geet broke down. Will come to this later. He saw Geet desperate to catch a glimpse of Maan and understand that both kind of harbour feelings for one another no matter how hard Chief-Geet try not to show to themselves or others. Also, he's concerned about Geet just as he is about his Chief-Maan. That food-kitchen-cooking scene was sweetSmile
2.  Maan- Maan's, not Chief's concern for Geet-he repetitively ordered Adi to take care of Geet. Signs of some danger for Geet which came true when she saw 'him' killing Sudhir. He somehow knew Geet won't be able to take it. The part where Geet is breaking down was very painful. But equally painfull was Maan's reaction and his words which he was saying to make her hate him even more, to detach her from himself. My eyes were moist at this soon. The dialogues were very powerful here! they had a great intensity!
3. Chief's 'professional' plans- His plans to reach out to Anna had been made very clear. I like the way you keep each part intact while writing. Like the transition between the scenes.
4. Chief's violence- His violence streak was very clear in that part. No mercy for the deceivers! 
Somehow, it shows that something's very grave had happened to him in the past that has made him the way he is! 
5. Geet-The girl who loves her kidnapper deeply! She wants to stay back but was preparing herself to be back thinking about her exams, transient life in the early parts of the update. Her desperation for her kidnapper was shown very nicely! And this desperation made her look for him frantically until she saw the most dreadful sight. Her love killing people, the hands with which she wants to be hugged, being loved are colored with people's blood. Her outburst, breakdown was so heart-wrenching!!! Wonderfully written!!!Clap
6. Adi-He was special to Chief than all his other members. he was close to him, he understood him better than anyone else but an interesting fact came up in this update-he not only knows Chief but also the person who lived a normal life before plunging into this word-Maan! He probably knows the reason why Maan is Chief today. He understands him fully. He's able to decipher Maan's unsaid words. This part was really carved out very nicely.
Infact the part post Sudhir's death part was really high on emotions, relationships, truth, right and wrong. Geet-Maan part while she's in the kitchen trying to hurt herself and then when she's safe and Maan in kitchen-that part was again very beautifully written. Emotions were flowing through the words. The words had so much power that I could actually visualize the scene. The shlok from Geet made her stop, she pondered over the fact. Somewhere she realized that behind the mask is a innocent man. 

I just don't have words to express myself about this update!
All I can say is that I just want to read more and more. I'l keep reading this update till the time you update the next one. I know your exams coming up, prepare well for them. And do update but only if you get time. Studies shouldn't be affected. All the bestSmile

About my results-it wasn't good. Scored 94 %ile in CAT, 91 %ile in XAT and couldn't clear FMS. About the job interviews, negative here as well.  My stammering is taking a toll on my career. I am landing nowhere. 


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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
awwww that was just out of world update reet......gawd me in tears now...
 
u put down everything so beautifully....u now reet ur superb of writer
 
loved it to core.....great superb and what not
 
 
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
@Ritu baby, let me know whe u wanna discuss bout u bin tere.....from feb 15th to feb 21st i will be not reachable as i will be out of india..... but uske pehele aur uske baad mein.. i shall be available....
u take care
lossa love kiddo
 
 
junglli billi Senior Member
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
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hi i m neeti
 
ok let me tel u a story ok?
i know u write very well n obviously i cant write lik u 
but here it goes...........Tongue
ek ladki thi anjaani si. khoi khoi si. jise bohot bore ho raha tha
usne socha chelo ab is ak solution dhunda jaye.
to usne fanfics browse karna shuru kiya.
phir socha yar in incomplete fanfics ke char me nahi padna kyunki bohot ghumate hain
lekinCryCryCryCryCryCry
galti se "[MG] in love with enemy " uske hath laga usne socha chalo line marte hain
Ouchphir use laga dhaka
KYA FIC HAIN MAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
us bechari ne sochaClap
phir use bohot need aa rahi thiOuch
LAKINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
USNE THAN LIYA
KI
WHT EVA HAPPENS EVEN IF EARTH QUACK COMES OR TSUNAMI OR EVEN IF THE VALCANO
BURSTS
VO YEH FICTION COMPLETE KARKE RAHEGI
she read it. n finished it till 3 am.
DEN IT FLASHED KE IT IS NOT COMPLETED
LOL
she went to the college droollinggggggggggggggggggggggg
whre eva she is finding place poor gal she is trying to sleep
and here kamine dost r not lettiing her too
bechari iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii from tat time she is WAITTTTTTTTTINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG.
YAR      PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
UDATE KARO CryCryCryCryCry
I NEVA CAME ACROSS SUCH A SCRIPT
I LOVE IT BABS
 

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Hi i used to read this ff before I joined IF so could never comment- then you took a break and I lost the ff. But I am very happy to say I have once again found it and have finally caught up with all the parts! I absolutely love this:)
Please pm me when you update- hopefully this will be soon!
Thanks
Paloma x

Edited by Paloma_D - 04 February 2011 at 8:53am

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
hi reet,
 
it is a wonderul update. plz. dont finish this ff soon. make it a long one and give it a happy ending.
 
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
hi reet
can u believe me  iam reading your  update  for the  4th time  again  because i really  loved it
specially  how maan talks to geetthe last pat of the update
ur update  is veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice
thank u so much for  such  an great update
waiting  eagerly for the  next update

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