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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 28)

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Speechlessssssss... yaar u r too good Smile
nd thx 4 long update

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SakshiGarg Goldie

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
yes u deserve.............u deserve ClapClapClap............loved 1st i thot everything has finished.........geet will leave himCry......but loved it how d story turned.......maan can only calm her down.......make her realize dat she has not done anything wrongBig smile.......i hope he tells her the truth soon!!!!!!!

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vantu12 Senior Member

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged

U hav made me speechless...Smile

U truly have

This was just BREATHTAKING...Smile





0mg... This cud b made into the BESTEST EVER THRILLER SHOW...

Reet dear.. Just Love u.. More n more n more...
vantu12 Senior Member

Joined: 10 April 2010
Posts: 264

Posted: 03 February 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
U knw wat.. Reet..Smile
I'm travelling rite nw..Smile
Its 1.30am.. Al sleeping in train.. N me awake...Smile
Just cant liv widout readng the update..Smile
It tuk me alm0st an read it.. Wid cmplete feelings..Smile
Loved it..Smile
Update soon dear..Smile
Antares IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6377

Posted: 03 February 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Whoa! That was so intense and exciting! I did not even realize it was so long as I was so engrossed in it that I did not even know when it ended. Guess this will change the things between them to a certain extent and their relationship will move on to another was damn interesting! Do continue soon.

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shivangi783 Goldie

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Phew, that was one of the longest update you've ever done with so many twists and turns! Took me a good amount of time to read it. I am still under the spell of the update!

BTW HelloHug Hug
First of all let me tell you no need to be worried about the response. You don't know how much we love your work. See we even pester you to update despite of knowing that you have exams coming upTongue How can one not enjoy after reading super long updates with so much interesting events happening and the story going through lotta twists and turns?

So you worried about the violence part. To be honest, i was getting goosebumps reading that part. Well, it was too much of violence but you managed to bring it out wellClap 

Interesting revelations in this update-
1. Adi- Till now we knew that Adi knew that Chief had a soft corner for Geet but today he first spoke it out to Geet and then later to Maan after Geet broke down. Will come to this later. He saw Geet desperate to catch a glimpse of Maan and understand that both kind of harbour feelings for one another no matter how hard Chief-Geet try not to show to themselves or others. Also, he's concerned about Geet just as he is about his Chief-Maan. That food-kitchen-cooking scene was sweetSmile
2.  Maan- Maan's, not Chief's concern for Geet-he repetitively ordered Adi to take care of Geet. Signs of some danger for Geet which came true when she saw 'him' killing Sudhir. He somehow knew Geet won't be able to take it. The part where Geet is breaking down was very painful. But equally painfull was Maan's reaction and his words which he was saying to make her hate him even more, to detach her from himself. My eyes were moist at this soon. The dialogues were very powerful here! they had a great intensity!
3. Chief's 'professional' plans- His plans to reach out to Anna had been made very clear. I like the way you keep each part intact while writing. Like the transition between the scenes.
4. Chief's violence- His violence streak was very clear in that part. No mercy for the deceivers! 
Somehow, it shows that something's very grave had happened to him in the past that has made him the way he is! 
5. Geet-The girl who loves her kidnapper deeply! She wants to stay back but was preparing herself to be back thinking about her exams, transient life in the early parts of the update. Her desperation for her kidnapper was shown very nicely! And this desperation made her look for him frantically until she saw the most dreadful sight. Her love killing people, the hands with which she wants to be hugged, being loved are colored with people's blood. Her outburst, breakdown was so heart-wrenching!!! Wonderfully written!!!Clap
6. Adi-He was special to Chief than all his other members. he was close to him, he understood him better than anyone else but an interesting fact came up in this update-he not only knows Chief but also the person who lived a normal life before plunging into this word-Maan! He probably knows the reason why Maan is Chief today. He understands him fully. He's able to decipher Maan's unsaid words. This part was really carved out very nicely.
Infact the part post Sudhir's death part was really high on emotions, relationships, truth, right and wrong. Geet-Maan part while she's in the kitchen trying to hurt herself and then when she's safe and Maan in kitchen-that part was again very beautifully written. Emotions were flowing through the words. The words had so much power that I could actually visualize the scene. The shlok from Geet made her stop, she pondered over the fact. Somewhere she realized that behind the mask is a innocent man. 

I just don't have words to express myself about this update!
All I can say is that I just want to read more and more. I'l keep reading this update till the time you update the next one. I know your exams coming up, prepare well for them. And do update but only if you get time. Studies shouldn't be affected. All the bestSmile

About my results-it wasn't good. Scored 94 %ile in CAT, 91 %ile in XAT and couldn't clear FMS. About the job interviews, negative here as well.  My stammering is taking a toll on my career. I am landing nowhere. 

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SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 November 2007
Posts: 18199

Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
awwww that was just out of world update reet......gawd me in tears now...
u put down everything so beautifully....u now reet ur superb of writer
loved it to core.....great superb and what not
vivacious_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 20 July 2010
Posts: 12741

Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
@Ritu baby, let me know whe u wanna discuss bout u bin tere.....from feb 15th to feb 21st i will be not reachable as i will be out of india..... but uske pehele aur uske baad mein.. i shall be available....
u take care
lossa love kiddo

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