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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 22)

Krishnaluv94 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Hit the like button if you like it??? What !!? I loved it!!! Awesome! Can't wait for more!

maanmeet1 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
reet whts dis dear...........i was in tears.......very emotional and heart touching.........i love chief soooooooo much and adi too.........he is a sweetheart............

geet's behavior was very much understood........she saw d scene where her love was covered in blood..........couldnt take it..........fantastic, fabulous and awesome update.............v waited for it and it was more den worth...........loved it to d core........superb dialogues, emotions.........adi's understands maan too well..............i knw geet's word not only hurt chief bt herself too........

i can understand maan's pain........pls update soon.......i dont want dem to part ways.........pls make d next update long too.............reet u r simply awesome...........
-shamima- IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Wow that was truly beautifully written and this is the 2nd time I've used the word beautiful which means I'm taken aback with this update the intense emotions made me grip onto every single word form start to finish; from adi's POV where we get an insight on how his seeing things it shows his observant nature where he can piece together geet and maans behaviour tonknow what is happening from his view we get to see how geet is actually portraying herself at that moment and how maan is showing his concern for geet I really do like it when you put in aid's POV and when he said the onion line to her it held so much significance of how she's masking her pain and her tears behind the facet of the onion in other words the people around her and liked how he noticed little things like her eyes darting towards the door at very noise looking for him and not eating anything because he didn't and ooh you wrote the violence part really well and I had this feeling geet was going to watch all this to give them both a dose of reality but make them understand the the death of their love and hmm when maan had that flashback about sudhir revealed a bit about maans character which come in grey shades and the intense moment when geet couldnt take the violence no more and emotionally breaks down and hurls those painful words to maan make him realise that he can't see hatred in he eyes for him as love and care from her is his relief. But maan thinks that he should separate her full from himself so decides to give back some hurtful words which break her completely which result to her wanting to kill herself, it's adi's part again which I loved in this moment because of how he stepped up and showed maan the consequences to his ignorant actions and made him realise he can detach himself from gee and she needs to know the truth and that's when maan let's down his guard and decides to soothe gee and reciprocates as she was longing for this and surrenders herself to maan and the showers scene a the end was so symbolic to a new start to this relationship the old stains of tears and blood being washed away anyways a fantastic update and I really appreciate how much you wrote and hope this comments makes up for half of it Smile
sweet cherry IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
omg that was bloody awesome
omg maan and geet do much love
but she was willing to kill herself
it was superb
do continue
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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
ur damn good in emotional
senses yu made me cryCryCryCry
atleast he eccept her &
his love to love adi he did
good job brilliant update
pls next happy one & naughty
pls cont soon thanks pm
Sofna IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:05pm | IP Logged

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So Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz DON'T xpect ANY comments from me..........LOLLOL
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
I am going to go back to read n  re-read that rollercoaster of an update u posted ..again n again n again...till u update Next Big smile..
 
 
Thats All I can manage for now...... Embarrassed..I'm sure it conveyed ALL my reactions...
 
 
 
U no Reet Thank You/ the person who compelled u to join IF, Watch, Geet, n grant us via yr Amazing wrritting skills n imagination such a fabulous FF.............
 
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Always Be Happy........Embarrassed 
 
 
PS. Do u knw I never knew about yr FF...or wud hav knwn....as I had stopped watching Geet arnd Oct...n was slowly loosing interest in visiting the forum aswell.......It was by luck that i saw a post of a member asking for help for  the names of a few FF's that she had started reading but had to leave midway.....When one of replies to the descriptions was it's titled 'In Love With The Enemy'......By Manmeet - Reet....i literally rushed to FF corner...found yr FF...N READ All the updates in one goLOLLOLLOLLOL......N i thank everydayafter reading yr updates that i actually visited the forum that day!!!
sakadafi Senior Member
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Oh wow....what an update!!!!!
 
Having read many of the FFs here, this was the most visual & violent update I've read till now...the way u showed Maan for who CHIEF is....what it means to be heading a gang and pulling off what he does...it's much more than just pressing the trigger....and you portrayed it wonderfully!! Clap
 
Geet's reaction to the violence was natural and understandable.  What she saw of the man she loved....ignorance is truly bliss but feigning ignorance is stupidity and that's what she did, as Maan also said.  Her reaction to his statements again, made sense....she would hate herself for allowing herself to feel this way, for not being able to control herself......especially when she knew it all.
 
Adi-Maan relationship is strong and that is evident.  The only one who truly understands what goes on in Maan's behind...the reasons behind his actions and the meaning behind his words.  Really curious as to what the truth is...
 
Don't know but I have a feeling that this story is not gonna have a happy ending....regardless of him not killing innocents, can Geet really live her life with a killer?? I remember you saying earlier that it's not gonna happen like 'Wanted' which really makes me wonder about the truth behind Maan....
 
You really do write fabulously!!! Please do continue soon...
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
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