Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 21)

komlika IF-Rockerz
komlika
komlika

Joined: 04 April 2006
Posts: 6119

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
im speechless............awesome update..........cant wait to read more Smile

chubzy IF-Dazzler
chubzy
chubzy

Joined: 25 May 2010
Posts: 3422

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged

 after reading ur update i realised i was holding my breath *pheww* u always manage to shut my mouthStern Smile n i become bankrupted wit words to appreciate u

gal u shld comit some mistakes so tat i can believe u r not a prof writer n a medico!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shocked m realy shocked to see d length n intesity of this amazingly flawless update but believe me this shock is happy wala shock, u knw wat i meanEmbarrassed
wat!!!! a cliffhanger?????????? *can u see me hanging* oh! ofcourse not hi! hi! silly me, but m surely feeling hangin off d cliff so plzzzzzzzzzzz update soooon. may god help u wit ur studies n make a super gal so tat u can manage studies n updates simultaneouslyEmbarrassed


Edited by chubzy - 02 February 2011 at 3:06pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Amour_Reet

shah10 IF-Sizzlerz
shah10
shah10

Joined: 03 May 2010
Posts: 24122

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
amazing..supreb..
geet loves him so much..
awsome..
do continue plz
thx.
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz
..hinal..
..hinal..

Joined: 18 March 2010
Posts: 12936

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
wow man im speechless after reading this update
felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz
felicitysmoak.
felicitysmoak.

Joined: 05 November 2007
Posts: 44357

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
WOW
cant say more
was excellent
loved it all
me speechless
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Krishnaluv94 IF-Rockerz
Krishnaluv94
Krishnaluv94

Joined: 03 October 2010
Posts: 7548

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Hit the like button if you like it??? What !!? I loved it!!! Awesome! Can't wait for more!
maanmeet1 IF-Sizzlerz
maanmeet1
maanmeet1

Joined: 12 August 2010
Posts: 10297

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
reet whts dis dear...........i was in tears.......very emotional and heart touching.........i love chief soooooooo much and adi too.........he is a sweetheart............

geet's behavior was very much understood........she saw d scene where her love was covered in blood..........couldnt take it..........fantastic, fabulous and awesome update.............v waited for it and it was more den worth...........loved it to d core........superb dialogues, emotions.........adi's understands maan too well..............i knw geet's word not only hurt chief bt herself too........

i can understand maan's pain........pls update soon.......i dont want dem to part ways.........pls make d next update long too.............reet u r simply awesome...........
-shamima- IF-Dazzler
-shamima-
-shamima-

Joined: 20 August 2010
Posts: 2883

Posted: 02 February 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Wow that was truly beautifully written and this is the 2nd time I've used the word beautiful which means I'm taken aback with this update the intense emotions made me grip onto every single word form start to finish; from adi's POV where we get an insight on how his seeing things it shows his observant nature where he can piece together geet and maans behaviour tonknow what is happening from his view we get to see how geet is actually portraying herself at that moment and how maan is showing his concern for geet I really do like it when you put in aid's POV and when he said the onion line to her it held so much significance of how she's masking her pain and her tears behind the facet of the onion in other words the people around her and liked how he noticed little things like her eyes darting towards the door at very noise looking for him and not eating anything because he didn't and ooh you wrote the violence part really well and I had this feeling geet was going to watch all this to give them both a dose of reality but make them understand the the death of their love and hmm when maan had that flashback about sudhir revealed a bit about maans character which come in grey shades and the intense moment when geet couldnt take the violence no more and emotionally breaks down and hurls those painful words to maan make him realise that he can't see hatred in he eyes for him as love and care from her is his relief. But maan thinks that he should separate her full from himself so decides to give back some hurtful words which break her completely which result to her wanting to kill herself, it's adi's part again which I loved in this moment because of how he stepped up and showed maan the consequences to his ignorant actions and made him realise he can detach himself from gee and she needs to know the truth and that's when maan let's down his guard and decides to soothe gee and reciprocates as she was longing for this and surrenders herself to maan and the showers scene a the end was so symbolic to a new start to this relationship the old stains of tears and blood being washed away anyways a fantastic update and I really appreciate how much you wrote and hope this comments makes up for half of it Smile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
love love love(ar,rm,aa)part 5 pg 21updt

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: mithilalovesksg   Replies: 209   Views: 108785

mithilalovesksg 209 108785 07 December 2013 at 10:24am by ksgandjsg21
Arranged ya Love {AIMEE's love story in AR's way}

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: arshluver_15   Replies: 78   Views: 37602

arshluver_15 78 37602 26 February 2012 at 5:27am by nikky_angel
FF: Hate Or Love 2: P49: True Love: Pg 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: -Jwalamukhi-   Replies: 93   Views: 46528

-Jwalamukhi- 93 46528 07 September 2009 at 7:06am by amazingneira
AR FF: In love with the enemy(lst pt updt page124)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 129 130

Author: seffttytyht   Replies: 1039   Views: 124040

seffttytyht 1039 124040 21 June 2009 at 2:53pm by GoldenPanda.
Falling in Love with Enemy[AR/AK]promo pg16 20/3

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 16 17

Author: Rohit86   Replies: 129   Views: 12970

Rohit86 129 12970 29 May 2009 at 4:22am by AngelsHeaven

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index