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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 110)

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged
oh yaar reet..............i just loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved 
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this update..................
i just comp enjoyed this update...............
thanks for clearing it that geet heared guru only when he shoved her into the car..............
right first thing first.....................thanks for such a longggggggggggggg update..............love u for that....
geet thinking abt all the possibility and then her instinct abt chief-maan-guru...........awesome......no words u just explained so detailed abt everything.............
maan's monologue abt everything.................first time maan was thinking abt it in diff angle and that he wanted her no matetr wat and the stupid mistakes which he did that geet got her way to know that he is the chief..............yeh aank micholi ka khel kab khatam hoga in dono ke beech.............
i seriously hate devAngry now to the core.............how dare he.............chief kya main kud usko tapka doongi agar woh geet ko apne darji ko lekhar emotionally blackmail karega shadi ke liye.....i am sure thats wat he is trying to do trying to corner her with this so that she wont say no..........but yeh geet handa hain aur agar uske samne uske chief aa jaye ek baar woh sab kuch bhoolkar uske bahon mein hogi.................

enjoyed maan's remembrance with all their meeting and how he cudnt stop himself from getting closer to her...........he cudnt hold himself after their 1st meeting and he can never leave her too he will b always there to protect her from anything and everything.............u hv written it so amazingly.....ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

arey yaar adi pehle geet se ek baar to poocha hotha.............agar woh chief se pyar karthi hain toh woh kaise dev se sagai kar sakthi hain...........poocha hotha toh sab ki dil toote toh nahin hothe......

uff geet jhalli kahin ki jab sab uske aagey peechey ghoom rahe thei tab sab ko baga diya aur jab chief kudh phone kiya toh apne gussey ki aag mein ussey bhi baga diya.....aur koi raasta bhi nahin tha chief ko contact karne ke liye.............ab sab kuch khatham ho gaya hain...........nahin sab kuch tab khatham hoga jab maan uff chief chahega lekhin ab tak toh maan ne tujhe jaane ki ijazat di nahin...............

i am sure maan will definitely come to the party uske bina uski geet ki b'day party kaise hosakthi hain...............adi dev ko kidnap kar lo aur chief geet se sagai kar lega.........waisey bhi masquerade ball hain chief mask pehna hoga geet ke alawa koi aur nahin pehchanega.........sagai kya directly shadi kar le aur geet ko baga le ja..................

jab woh cheek cheek kar apne pyar izhar kiya tha tab kaha tha infactuation hain aur ab bhagwan se pooch raha hain ki kya usne pyar kiya budhu pagal kahin ka...............

arey yaar reet jaldi se agla update kar do...............bahut intezaar nahin hoga mere se.............



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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
amazing update

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Thanks so much for maans pov, but you could add in the NeXT part too i am Feeling tht i have stress you i am feeling very bad. But amazing i loved the update



Amina

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Big smilewat an update reet........... full of drama...suspense.... n painCry.... loved maan's prologue..... how he explained his feelings was awesomeBig smile...... i hated it when dat stupid dev planned geet's b'dayAngry.... i wanted maan to do dat 4 her.....but dats wat is making the story interesting i guess..... att first wat adi told maan jst broke my heart..... i was lyk ab kya hogaConfused..... but thnx to chotu.... our maan's rescue squadLOL
waiting 4 the next update..... n hey thnx 4 clearing my doubt!!!!
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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
hie..loved the update..each part..
specially the dance part was fab..<3 <3
Maan was like totally pissed off at the sight..but still..i loved it!!
cont. soon
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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
I GUESS A LOT OF PPL ARE HOLDING THEIR BREATHS FOR AN UPDATE THAT LEAVES US BREATHLESS.....LOL

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
i m really speechless reet...............d way u described maan's pov is superb....................i think u shd think abt writing novels................nd dat too strictly luv stories nd i m damn sure that they would be bestsellersSmile....................

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by my_maan_geet

i m really speechless reet...............d way u described maan's pov is superb....................i think u shd think abt writing novels................nd dat too strictly luv stories nd i m damn sure that they would be bestsellersSmile....................


completely agree

they will sell like hotcakes.....

reva

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