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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 105)

-Humera- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
Clap Awesome awesome fantabulous update, just like all your others.. :)
I am not able to comment regularly, as college work doesn't give me the time Disapprove
Coming to the updates..
Loved the dance where Maan was expressing how painful love is, and Geet ended up singing along.. Loved the Maaneet dance as well, after aages they are together so close and only he knows that she is his Geet she is under the illussion that he is not her "Chief", but a guy called Guru, and she is cheating on her love, Maan is also aware that she is feeling this..
Loved the convo betweek MSK and Geet, shows the different characters he is, and how different he can be
He very cleverly pointed out what Geet was asking, like when she asked about Guru, and how she is trying to connect Guru and Chief... It must have been very hard for him to control his laughter...
Loved Maan's thoughts, love has changed him FOREVER, he is in immense pain, and doesn't know what to do, he thinks that by staying away from her he is doing right to her, but she is just as hurt or probably more hurt than he is... Cry
Poor Adi, he is really hurt he thought Geet would change Maan but he does not know what Geet is going through he is only seeing things and believing them rather than finding out and asking her what is wrong!!
Can't wait for the next update, hope Maan is at the masked ball with his chief mask on Wink Would like to see something spectacular on Geet's birthday, Maan's reaction to proposal, Geet's reaction.. Day Dreaming 
Can't wait... Big smile
Thanks for the pm's xx

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maaneet_pisces Goldie

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged

U are incredible with portraying emotions...

your updates so easily bring pain and tears in the eyes of the reader....

speechless  and spellbound!!!Smile eagerly waiting for the next...

Predictions : Well i will always predict and hope it is full of hugs and kisses Wink

Edited by maaneet_pisces - 14 April 2011 at 4:40pm

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Krishnaluv94 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Hmm. I'm thinking someone's gonna crash a party (that someone being Maan). I wonder if Geet will recognize him, actually that's a stupid question, DUH! lol I wonder if they will finally confess? Probably not, but then you never know... waiting for the next update!!!! :)

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febinyusuff IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:24pm | IP Logged

u r one of the best writers i have ever seeeen..

update was awesome.. and i think it was really needed..

I want Maan to witness Geet rejecting Dev.. He should know that her heart still beats for him.. him only

I was also sad to see Aadhi's behaviour.. I thought he was angry because of the phone call incident with cheif.. but he has a very good reson to get angry with her..

please continue soooon

Edited by febinyusuff - 16 April 2011 at 1:47am

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kalpana_spn Senior Member

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
this is awesome part......u will kill us for sure dying to read next ...please update soon....
tanya_vi Goldie

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Posts: 1715

Posted: 14 April 2011 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update Reet!! At least, now we know for sure that chief a.k.a Maan is an under cover cop. Geet and Maan....they are so much in love with each other..I hope they get together soon!!!!
maanmishti Goldie

Joined: 14 May 2008
Posts: 2239

Posted: 14 April 2011 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
oh my god!!! terrific update.......but felt sad for geet maan adi........i hope everything goes well in next update.........plzzzzzzz dont make anything like geet saying ok to will sound stupid.....i want geet and chief to disclose their love to each other.......want 1 super hot kiss........plzzzzz reet 1 kiss could do plzzzzzzz.......common its her birthday........want everything to be good in between adi and geet......first time i felt adi is little stupid abt his imagination........plzzzzzzzz their love is pure.......dont bring dev between them........reet i can take anything in this fiction but not separation of maan and geet..........i only want romance, love, jealousy, fake anger between them.......plzzzz reet make everything good in next u take care ......muaah byeeee

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ruhakhan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Wow i m just hooked to ur ff i love ur ff its awesome and i know masquerade ball mein chief will come do update soon

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