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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 105)

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
Wicked update Reet,
It was amazing...keep the great work ClapClapClap
thnx for the pm!!!

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by serenelove

Hey Reet,

WOW, What an update Clap 

So all the efforts & still geet was able to gather some info. Cool

So chief was out of control & gave his damsel a souvenir. Yep intuitions can bring on the things, one never dream

Dev its useless to cry over spilled milk. What's done is done. Stop ur remorse act & don't try many surprises as the may surprise u even more rofl!!ShockedLOLLOLLOL

Geet trying to connect dots of HER, Chief, Guru & Maan is interesting.

seeing the Maan's POV of past events was lovelyHeartDay Dreaming gave info. & confirmed many things thats exactly i wanted to hear ...!! thankx

Geet & Adi's part was painful but realistic. But Adi if u r spying then do it throughly before spilling beans. he did....he couldnt possibly pip inside geet's mind eh..!he knew this is a sensitive issue ...and neither any of us know what is geet pov about her and dev's quoted affair !

It was very intense when Maan's condition was explained.CryClap

I love the song (& Movie also) tum bin ? same here ...!! i wasnt getting any ...good ..the song was not apt ..but did ..!

Good boy Chotu Thumbs Up. he is in deed ! i take  a mental note to use him again dunno kno how far i can do tat

Maan gate crash partyStar

Loved it, Continue soon

ROFLPredictions: as I said, Maan Gate crash party. 

If dev try to have a surprise engagement, Geet u can smash something on his head. LOL I have no problem in it.

IF there is no confession then at least some of their feelings can ensure each other' about other's feeling.

On serious note: I think, It's going to be passionate, bittersweet meeting

PS. Who knows what the "Surprising writer" will bring !!!!BlushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedBlushing


did i tell you i adore ur comment !!
 
lozzz......u make me laugh all the time .....
gate crash !! well....!!
zipped for now
 
and ur other predictions ...
uh eh...! okay ...! u hav to wait ! but loved reading ur predictions


Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 April 2011 at 3:56pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanmeet_Reet

Originally posted by serenelove

Hey Reet,

WOW, What an update Clap 

So all the efforts & still geet was able to gather some info. Cool

So chief was out of control & gave his damsel a souvenir. Yep intuitions can bring on the things, one never dream

Dev its useless to cry over spilled milk. What's done is done. Stop ur remorse act & don't try many surprises as the may surprise u even more rofl!!LOL

Geet trying to connect dots of HER, Chief, Guru & Maan is interesting.

seeing the Maan's POV of past events was lovelyHeartDay Dreaming gave info. & confirmed many things thats exactly i wanted to hear ...!! thankx

Geet & Adi's part was painful but realistic. But Adi if u r spying then do it throughly before spilling beans. he did....he couldnt possibly pip inside geet's mind eh..!he knew this is a sensitive issue ...and neither any of us know what is geet pov about her and dev's quoted affair !

It was very intense when Maan's condition was explained.CryClap

I love the song (& Movie also) tum bin ? same here ...!! i wasnt getting any ...good ..the song was not apt ..but did ..!

Good boy Chotu Thumbs Up. he is in deed ! i take  a mental note to use him again dunno kno how far i can do tat

Maan gate crash partyStar

Loved it, Continue soon

ROFLPredictions: as I said, Maan Gate crash party. 

If dev try to have a surprise engagement, Geet u can smash something on his head. LOL I have no problem in it.

IF there is no confession then at least some of their feelings can ensure each other' about other's feeling.

On serious note: I think, It's going to be passionate, bittersweet meeting

PS. Who knows what the "Surprising writer" will bring

did i tell you i adore ur comment !!
 
lozzz......u make me laugh all the time .....
gate crash !! well....!!
zipped for now
 
and ur other predictions ...
uh eh...! okay ...! u hav to wait ! but loved reading ur predictions
Thnx. U give awesome updates & deserve the comments even betterHeart

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
Clap Awesome awesome fantabulous update, just like all your others.. :)
 
I am not able to comment regularly, as college work doesn't give me the time Disapprove
 
Coming to the updates..
 
Loved the dance where Maan was expressing how painful love is, and Geet ended up singing along.. Loved the Maaneet dance as well, after aages they are together so close and only he knows that she is his Geet she is under the illussion that he is not her "Chief", but a guy called Guru, and she is cheating on her love, Maan is also aware that she is feeling this..
 
Loved the convo betweek MSK and Geet, shows the different characters he is, and how different he can be
He very cleverly pointed out what Geet was asking, like when she asked about Guru, and how she is trying to connect Guru and Chief... It must have been very hard for him to control his laughter...
 
Loved Maan's thoughts, love has changed him FOREVER, he is in immense pain, and doesn't know what to do, he thinks that by staying away from her he is doing right to her, but she is just as hurt or probably more hurt than he is... Cry
 
Poor Adi, he is really hurt he thought Geet would change Maan but he does not know what Geet is going through he is only seeing things and believing them rather than finding out and asking her what is wrong!!
 
Can't wait for the next update, hope Maan is at the masked ball with his chief mask on Wink Would like to see something spectacular on Geet's birthday, Maan's reaction to proposal, Geet's reaction.. Day Dreaming 
 
Can't wait... Big smile
Thanks for the pm's xx

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
Goosebumps!!!!!!!!! 

U are incredible with portraying emotions...

your updates so easily bring pain and tears in the eyes of the reader....

speechless  and spellbound!!!Smile eagerly waiting for the next...

Predictions : Well i will always predict and hope it is full of hugs and kisses Wink


Edited by maaneet_pisces - 14 April 2011 at 4:40pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Hmm. I'm thinking someone's gonna crash a party (that someone being Maan). I wonder if Geet will recognize him, actually that's a stupid question, DUH! lol I wonder if they will finally confess? Probably not, but then you never know... waiting for the next update!!!! :)

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
reet,

u r one of the best writers i have ever seeeen..

update was awesome.. and i think it was really needed..

I want Maan to witness Geet rejecting Dev.. He should know that her heart still beats for him.. him only

I was also sad to see Aadhi's behaviour.. I thought he was angry because of the phone call incident with cheif.. but he has a very good reson to get angry with her..

please continue soooon




Edited by febinyusuff - 16 April 2011 at 1:47am

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
this is awesome part......u will kill us for sure someday...im dying to read next ...please update soon....

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