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[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread (Page 104)

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
omg i m in lov wid dis ff............
great work dear..........
eagarly waiting 4 nxt update......
thanx 4 pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Amazing update! Loved every single bit of itClap n thank u so much for a long update Smile waiting 4 the masquerade party Wink excited   Day Dreaming

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
nxt update tk wait kaise hoga........

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
it was a deadly part Reet!..oh god..I cannot even think of what to comment because all my head is doing right now is getting anxious to know what will happen now!..will Maan go to the party?..ofcourse he will but will he come in front of Geet?..there is no other thing which can possibly make chief go out of his way and get Geet in his life..ONLY the thought of loosing her can do it and thats what exactly is happening!..I am feeling extremely jittery about it all!..plz plz plz update soon as I am dying to read what happens next!
now let me gather myself and go over a quick review of todayz update..starting with Goa trip's end and Geet being stuck badly between chief,Maan and Guru!..aw..poor Geet..her feelings are so complex..she can feel the connection between chief-Guru-Maan yet it would be way too superficial for her intelligence to reach conclusions like they all are her chief as it will rather look wishful thinking!
Maan's feelings are beautifully explained and expressed..loved how he confessed that he couldn't hold himself and went close to her and kept trying to make her spit her feelings and find out"did she ever love me?"..loved how he felt insecured and jealous when he felt Geet attracted to his own avatar as Guru!//loved how inspite of all what he sensed from Geet's reactions,he couldn't help but still feel insecured when she didn't try to find more about Guru and Maan!..loved his plain confession to his ownself about how how he fell in love with this stubborn thick headed little woman!..some lines I truly adored:-

She seemed so vulnerable ...so lost ....so helpless ...i felt like hugging her tight and tear the blindfold away from her eyes.....see me...its me....it was always me.....

I don't know her relationship status ....but still I feel my position is safe.......the dance together confirmed me all ...
 
but she could at least try that ..... doesn't she want me....? like I do ...?
 
Geet is intelligent and knows her chief and thats why she didn't go back to Goa!..she just waits for a "co-incidence"..brilliant thought process Reet!ClapClap
Adi-Geet meeting was very well written too..loved how Adi couldn't help but get angry on her for he thought she had moved on and has totally forgotten chief and didn't realize his true love for her!..and than came the most painful part-Maan getting to know about Geet's engagement!..oh lord..

Geet is getting engaged tomorrow ...! he spoke cutting me abruptly

Yeah ....that exactly what he said ...a plain simple statement ! and the tiny viscera in the left part of my chest stopped throbbing .....Cry

I thought I heard him wrong .... it must be....... of course he didn't say that ....... I gathered myself and asked ...what did you say ...!

Its her engagement next evening ..! what they call it " sagai" also he plans to get married next month ...!

For the first time in my life I experienced black out without any physical injury ....

I didn't utter anything ....

Probably I had forgotten how to talk ....... I tried ...tried hard to speak something react something .....but nothing came out ....

her face flashed in front of mine.....

Her honey brown eyes......

Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired ...!!

Why don't you understand ice and fire makes the deadly combination ....!

Why do you kill people ....

Why do u care ...?

What is your name....!!

Why do you always hurt me...

You know the limits better than me.....

Barshade aaj badal peyar ka...

Shhhhhhh......!! geet ...shh......dont talk ........dont .....!! I yelled at the humming voice in my head ......................... don't ask me anything geet ......

They say what we call our despair ...is often only the painful eagerness of unfed hope ..

each and every line is so deep and painful..I literally cried reading this phone convo..CryCryCry..and seeing Maan feeling alone was hell painful..a guy who has always been alone but never realised suddenly felt totally alone in the entire world with not even a single person whom he can call truly HIS!..Chief being vulnerable and almost breaking downOuch..

I wanted to hold her back....not to let her go ....my heart yelled ..................

Geeeeeeet don't go .....please .!!

CryCryCry..chief crying,breaking downm,feeling defeated,hoping to hold her one last time,wanting to ask her whether she ever loved him,kneeling in front of GOD...one word-PAINFUL..Cry..but BRILLIANTLY written..as always you were fabulous ClapClapClap..cannot wait for next part!..
PS-thnx a ton for the lovely reply to my comments..and also for not minding my being irregular with commentingBig smile..more thanks for loving me..Embarrassedlove youHug..keep up the awesome workStar

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
VERY NICE UPDATE LOVE IT i hope that maaneet  meet  face to face soon cant see  them seperate   hope geet is not getting engage to dev   cant see them  hurt like this make them meet again
waiting for your update soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bul3

it was a deadly part Reet!..oh god..I cannot even think of what to comment because all my head is doing right now is getting anxious to know what will happen now!..will Maan go to the party?..ofcourse he will but will he come in front of Geet?..there is no other thing which can possibly make chief go out of his way and get Geet in his life..ONLY the thought of loosing her can do it and thats what exactly is happening!..I am feeling extremely jittery about it all!..plz plz plz update soon as I am dying to read what happens next!
now let me gather myself and go over a quick review of todayz update..starting with Goa trip's end and Geet being stuck badly between chief,Maan and Guru!..aw..poor Geet..her feelings are so complex..she can feel the connection between chief-Guru-Maan yet it would be way too superficial for her intelligence to reach conclusions like they all are her chief as it will rather look wishful thinking!
Maan's feelings are beautifully explained and expressed..loved how he confessed that he couldn't hold himself and went close to her and kept trying to make her spit her feelings and find out"did she ever love me?"..loved how he felt insecured and jealous when he felt Geet attracted to his own avatar as Guru!//loved how inspite of all what he sensed from Geet's reactions,he couldn't help but still feel insecured when she didn't try to find more about Guru and Maan!..loved his plain confession to his ownself about how how he fell in love with this stubborn thick headed little woman!..some lines I truly adored:-

She seemed so vulnerable ...so lost ....so helpless ...i felt like hugging her tight and tear the blindfold away from her eyes.....see me...its me....it was always me.....

I don't know her relationship status ....but still I feel my position is safe.......the dance together confirmed me all ...
 
but she could at least try that ..... doesn't she want me....? like I do ...?
 
Geet is intelligent and knows her chief and thats why she didn't go back to Goa!..she just waits for a "co-incidence"..brilliant thought process Reet!ClapClap
Adi-Geet meeting was very well written too..loved how Adi couldn't help but get angry on her for he thought she had moved on and has totally forgotten chief and didn't realize his true love for her!..and than came the most painful part-Maan getting to know about Geet's engagement!..oh lord..

Geet is getting engaged tomorrow ...! he spoke cutting me abruptly

Yeah ....that exactly what he said ...a plain simple statement ! and the tiny viscera in the left part of my chest stopped throbbing .....Cry

I thought I heard him wrong .... it must be....... of course he didn't say that ....... I gathered myself and asked ...what did you say ...!

Its her engagement next evening ..! what they call it " sagai" also he plans to get married next month ...!

For the first time in my life I experienced black out without any physical injury ....

I didn't utter anything ....

Probably I had forgotten how to talk ....... I tried ...tried hard to speak something react something .....but nothing came out ....

her face flashed in front of mine.....

Her honey brown eyes......

Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired ...!!

Why don't you understand ice and fire makes the deadly combination ....!

Why do you kill people ....

Why do u care ...?

What is your name....!!

Why do you always hurt me...

You know the limits better than me.....

Barshade aaj badal peyar ka...

Shhhhhhh......!! geet ...shh......dont talk ........dont .....!! I yelled at the humming voice in my head ......................... don't ask me anything geet ......

They say what we call our despair ...is often only the painful eagerness of unfed hope ..

each and every line is so deep and painful..I literally cried reading this phone convo..CryCryCry..and seeing Maan feeling alone was hell painful..a guy who has always been alone but never realised suddenly felt totally alone in the entire world with not even a single person whom he can call truly HIS!..Chief being vulnerable and almost breaking downOuch..

I wanted to hold her back....not to let her go ....my heart yelled ..................

Geeeeeeet don't go .....please .!!

CryCryCry..chief crying,breaking downm,feeling defeated,hoping to hold her one last time,wanting to ask her whether she ever loved him,kneeling in front of GOD...one word-PAINFUL..Cry..but BRILLIANTLY written..as always you were fabulous ClapClapClap..cannot wait for next part!..
PS-thnx a ton for the lovely reply to my comments..and also for not minding my being irregular with commentingBig smile..more thanks for loving me..Embarrassedlove youHug..keep up the awesome workStar
 
 
 was that for real ....!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 my nightingale !!.....................
 
 
 
 
i m still in awe with your reply .....how...i mean just how u pick up the lines i left for double meaning ....though i try explaining everything ...!
but some really gets really everything ..!
you stand in first row ...!i vow down dear ....your compliments inflates my pride ! thank u ......as well again i feel insecure of the next update ....
 
ur calling the update deadly then what is that u have written for me.....
loved how he felt insecured and jealous when he felt Geet attracted to his own avatar as Guru!//loved how inspite of all what he sensed from Geet's reactions,he couldn't help but still feel insecured when she didn't try to find more about Guru and Maan!..loved his plain confession to his ownself about how how he fell in love with this stubborn thick headed little woman!..some lines I truly adored:-
 
 
yeah ....feeling how alone he actually is ...and was always until she was ready to sail off in a new boat ......made him get the true sense of her presence in his life ..
 
frankly speaking next part will be the toughest of all ...i hav no idea how i will able to make it ...
 
thanx nightingale ....!! thank u so much ...!!
hope u dont mind me calling that ...
 
 
love and heartfelt thanx
reet
 


Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 April 2011 at 3:27pm

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by serenelove

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madame ...do edit it ....i m waiting ...and put some prediction for next meeting !
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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanmeet_Reet

Originally posted by serenelove

res

madame ...do edit it ....i m waiting ...and put some prediction for next meeting !

BlushingThnx 4 considering my comments dear. What can I say about their meeting. I have turned my thinking into funny one while writing it.

I have Edited. Check it & No Chappals LOL



Edited by serenelove - 15 April 2011 at 2:38am

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