it was a deadly part Reet!..oh god..I cannot even think of what to comment because all my head is doing right now is getting anxious to know what will happen now!..will Maan go to the party?..ofcourse he will but will he come in front of Geet?..there is no other thing which can possibly make chief go out of his way and get Geet in his life..ONLY the thought of loosing her can do it and thats what exactly is happening!..I am feeling extremely jittery about it all!..plz plz plz update soon as I am dying to read what happens next!
now let me gather myself and go over a quick review of todayz update..starting with Goa trip's end and Geet being stuck badly between chief,Maan and Guru!..aw..poor Geet..her feelings are so complex..she can feel the connection between chief-Guru-Maan yet it would be way too superficial for her intelligence to reach conclusions like they all are her chief as it will rather look wishful thinking!Maan's feelings are beautifully explained and expressed..loved how he confessed that he couldn't hold himself and went close to her and kept trying to make her spit her feelings and find out"did she ever love me?"..loved how he felt insecured and jealous when he felt Geet attracted to his own avatar as Guru!//loved how inspite of all what he sensed from Geet's reactions,he couldn't help but still feel insecured when she didn't try to find more about Guru and Maan!..loved his plain confession to his ownself about how how he fell in love with this stubborn thick headed little woman!..some lines I truly adored:-She seemed so vulnerable ...so lost ....so helpless ...i felt like hugging her tight and tear the blindfold away from her eyes.....see me...its me....it was always me.....
I don't know her relationship status ....but still I feel my position is safe.......the dance together confirmed me all ...but she could at least try that ..... doesn't she want me....? like I do ...?Geet is intelligent and knows her chief and thats why she didn't go back to Goa!..she just waits for a "co-incidence"..brilliant thought process Reet!👏👏Adi-Geet meeting was very well written too..loved how Adi couldn't help but get angry on her for he thought she had moved on and has totally forgotten chief and didn't realize his true love for her!..and than came the most painful part-Maan getting to know about Geet's engagement!..oh lord..Geet is getting engaged tomorrow ...! he spoke cutting me abruptly
Yeah ....that exactly what he said ...a plain simple statement ! and the tiny viscera in the left part of my chest stopped throbbing .....😭
I thought I heard him wrong .... it must be....... of course he didn't say that ....... I gathered myself and asked ...what did you say ...!
Its her engagement next evening ..! what they call it " sagai" also he plans to get married next month ...!
For the first time in my life I experienced black out without any physical injury ....
I didn't utter anything ....
Probably I had forgotten how to talk ....... I tried ...tried hard to speak something react something .....but nothing came out ....
her face flashed in front of mine.....
Her honey brown eyes......
Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired ...!!
Why don't you understand ice and fire makes the deadly combination ....!
Why do you kill people ....
Why do u care ...?
What is your name....!!
Why do you always hurt me...
You know the limits better than me.....
Barshade aaj badal peyar ka...
Shhhhhhh......!! geet ...shh......dont talk ........dont .....!! I yelled at the humming voice in my head ......................... don't ask me anything geet ......
They say what we call our despair ...is often only the painful eagerness of unfed hope ..
each and every line is so deep and painful..I literally cried reading this phone convo..😭😭😭..and seeing Maan feeling alone was hell painful..a guy who has always been alone but never realised suddenly felt totally alone in the entire world with not even a single person whom he can call truly HIS!..Chief being vulnerable and almost breaking down..I wanted to hold her back....not to let her go ....my heart yelled ..................
Geeeeeeet don't go .....please .!!
😭😭😭..chief crying,breaking downm,feeling defeated,hoping to hold her one last time,wanting to ask her whether she ever loved him,kneeling in front of GOD...one word-PAINFUL..😭..but BRILLIANTLY written..as always you were fabulous 👏👏👏..cannot wait for next part!..PS-thnx a ton for the lovely reply to my comments..and also for not minding my being irregular with commenting😃..more thanks for loving me..😳love you🤗..keep up the awesome work⭐️
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