reet it was great.... but darling u scared me.... that one dailogue... he has a gut feeling she will kill him.... its a request plz dont turn this into a tragedy... why do i feel u will use these dailogues later... plz dont make it a sad fic... plz plz plz dont kill him in future coz i get a feeling u willl end the fic that way... plz we want a happy ending as in happily ever afters....😊
thanks for the update
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Ok i read a few parts again...
k...so now i can bet... geet will kill chief... she will... BUT she will kill chief not maan... now i get it why u asked us not to call him maan yet coz they are two diff personalities of the same person... somewhere behind the heart less man there is another person who has a heart that beats for geet... she will kill the murderer in him n once his mission will b accomplished he will come out as maan... so yeah she will not kill her love... now m not scared.... hope i'm right
NOW THAT m no longer tensed here's a proper comment....
the update was lovely n yeah i did cry for some parts... the voilence part was well sketched...n the kicten scene...well after reading the part where adi accuses maan of hurting her...it was expected... i did feel she will try kill herself but then i did not think she will opt for burning herself to death so it was expected yet unexpected... wow u used a verse from bhagwat geeta... did u like research it or u actually have it all memorised... btw cud u translate it as i have no idea whatsoever it means... yet it was a very smart move by you...
talking abt the confrontation... it was well written i mean yeah her reaction was natural n his too... so yeah enjoyed reading it...
Edited by .muskaan - 13 years ago
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