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New FF Blood Ties Update 23July pg 150 (Page 130)

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Ayesha that was fantastic...
Metz is in a complete emotional turmoil...
Abhiya conversation was superb...
So next will be a bloody war I guess...
Loved it Aysh...
Update soon

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
awesome mind blowing no words to expressThumbs Up. the way u portrayed abhay's fight with his mind and heart is just gr8Clap i just hope the heart will win 
i hope they will soon find a way to kill akasha
and no need to tone it down u r going gr8 guns and just let the level rise 
thanks for the pm and update sooon

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Awesome update Aysha.. Dis part was rocking yaar.. So d fight has began..n it seems der's gonna b lot of bloodshed.. I hope they find a way to kill Akasha.. Continue soon..thanxx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by matwamango

Originally posted by -Swetha-

this update was simply awesome...!Approve
i loved it a lotDay Dreaming
Thank U sweetie. The blood and guts all in the next update. I hope U have a stomach for it. I'll try not to make it too grotesque
it w3d b awesome if u make4 it that but overall fighting part was fab
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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
wow yaar awesome update.Akasha is so obssessed wid Abhay.But abhay only belongs 2 Pia..Pia love will bring him back & will kill akashaSmile

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
nice precap , updateClapClapClap
ripped my heart out nice para& nice convo btw abhiya , love 4 him over flowed through his veins nice para , nice convo btw akasha & pia , time he was buying 4 the nice line

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidhsara

Ayesha that was fantastic...
Metz is in a complete emotional turmoil...
Abhiya conversation was superb...
So next will be a bloody war I guess...
Loved it Aysh...
Update soon

Its not easy for a vampire to let go and Metz is in a place between a rock and a stone. Where does she go? Abhiya's conversation i find is a little repetitious and its all my fault. I keep making Pia sound so desperate to hold on to her love but i just don't know how else to portray her in this FF as she is a new vampire and only coming into her powers. Next part will be out and out a bloody battle. 

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivanirajput

awesome mind blowing no words to expressThumbs Up. the way u portrayed abhay's fight with his mind and heart is just gr8Clap i just hope the heart will win 
i hope they will soon find a way to kill akasha
and no need to tone it down u r going gr8 guns and just let the level rise 
thanks for the pm and update sooon
Its the Battle of wills for Abhay while the elders have a power struggle amongst their midst. I am asking all my readers how much gore i should add as i have a range of readers from teens to people in their 20's. I won't tone it down too muchEmbarrassed

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