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New FF Blood Ties Update 23July pg 150 (Page 102)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Party people

I loved the title, for it captures the command for people to party but also a term to describe a certain group of people, party people, both then finding their meanings in the following chapter.  Excellent.

The man was all over the place in her brain somewhere controlling her innermost thoughts. I loved the vigilante ransacking image this conjures. Big smile

The girl was an expert at seeing things that weren't there. Excellently caught humour that is derived from this both being literally AND actually true. LOL The following line beautifully flowing on, She was always in Abhay's thoughts after all.

to blow Shaurya away. Come to think of it Misha was certain this was going to blow up in her face it seemed a little odd but it was better than her wearing a mini dress which made her feel uncomfortable. Excellent flow of these phrases so to create an image of a plan backfiring, whilst subtly adding detailing to the character. ClapThen that cute conclusion, Shaurya was taken back by Misha but found himself smiling. I loved how you phrased it from his point of view and thus cleverly enhancing the impact she made. StarThen further detailing of character so that we agree that she isn't crazy for liking him, She definitely suited pink but he preferred her in her old get up...Pink brought out Misha's sharp features and her goofy smile he always was drawn towards.Star

I loved you insightful expounding of the human condition that drives doubts through to every dark corner of conclusions, ending here with
So if a tomboy like Misha had a thing for Shaurya then he must be special to make her want to dress all feminine. Star

Good update. Love Sabah


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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Wow great update.loved abhay's protective part.
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
abhay is so cool he is always a savior for piya

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
awsome part...
waiting 4r nxt part...
plz do cont soon
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
awesome
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
nice partClapClap
poor abhay Cry
cant wait for the action packed partEmbarrassed
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
amazing update...thanku for the pm...really like abhay...
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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
:::Precap 25:::Bourne Ultimatum:::
Akasha smelt a rat. She knew perfectly well what the terrible threesome were conspiring behind her back. Vampires knew nothing these days. It was all about who was the top dog. Who reigned supreme. Pathetic as they were she commended them for attempting to challenge her with their little team. Akasha was intrigued by this new player. She'd foreseen his innocence. It sent a wave of supercharged electricity through her body exciting her very core. Akasha had to see who this vampire was. She needed bait. A way of making him do her bidding. Akasha closed her eyes for a fraction of a second bolstering her old powers to its full potential searching for this vampires weakness. Akasha's eyes opened narrowing in on the girl the menacing pair were after. Pia. Pia exuded purity to a level that sickened Akasha. Abhay was drawn in on her aura. It was her heart he fell for.
 
Akasha arrived at the location Pia was at asily finding the half human with her inate powers strutting towards Pia hypnotising Pia to go with her-Come with me Pia.
Pia's charm wasn't working on Akasha as she manhandled Pia but her copulsion wasn't having an affect on Pia-How did U find me? I can't Abhay...
Akasha gave a wicked smile-If U want to save him then U will do as i ask. Now take off the charmed necklace so the others can have a shot at their prize.
Pia did as she asked calmly placing the necklace in her backpack-There. Please don't do anything to Abhay.
Akasha heard a tinge of fear for her vampire lover icily responding-I promise he will come to no harm so long as he does as i ask of him. Now join me for a little reunion. Your boyfriend is scheming with the idiots to combat me with their combined power.
Pia saw the determined look on Akasha. She was in awe of the vampire Queen at the same time scared of how much she overwhelmed her.

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