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New FF Blood Ties Update 23July pg 150 (Page 101)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
it was fab

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
brilliant part.
loved it.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by a little faith

Precap,

For that moment time stood still for Abhay. It was all about Piya Nice detailing, for time moves forward towards our goals and so here it has no where else to go. Star

Piya had her eyes closed but sleep evaded her mind.Wonderful phrasing. The image of our minds finding peace amongst those pieces of its fragments, that fall through cracks silently, secretly escaping to more blissful states of mind.  Deeper but away from our present conscious state that remains alert in that frantic search. Star

shattered glass.

Pia rubbed her eyes and saw Abhay asleep on the chair still holding on to her hands Nice moment between her random thoughts reinforcing the need for her search.

He'd traced his lips with his fingers reminiscing the stolen kisses. Lovely sentence.

Pia touched Abhay with her fingers gently-I thought i was just imagining U here to be honest i'm just having a moment with myself. So many conversations running in my head. I loved this moment, his explanation. Beautiful. Star

Yeah tonight will shatter someones life Abhay. Mine is already broken but yours Abhay has cracks.Nicely done. Star


I like how U are dissecting the updates and taking meaning into everyhing written hereEmbarrassed
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akshi0019

its awsum ... another saving mission... i loved it continue soon n thanx for pm...
Next part will be action packed. Akasha will arrive with someone

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mijanur

excelent update.so vamp queen runing after both metz & pia.getting anxious what will happen next.pls update soon.thanks for pm.
Maithali and Sid are very intelligent so know what buttons to press with Abhay. Pia is still a target by Maithali. She is not afraid of Akasha. So will do what she can to gain power.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poojahanda

nice updateClapClapClap
great cono btw abhay & sid so finally abhay knows about maithali great & she is mine bro nice line & abhay lines pia life is worth a hundred lives & abhay footsteps were like calming beats 2 her heart great lines & great convo btw abhay & maithali & she is making abhay jealous & u have turned in 2 sid monster this line is so true
Abhay and Sid have a fantastic rapport and bounce off each other. Sid wanted Abhay to know that Maithali is off limits. Abhay though he still loves her he hasn't strayed away from his main prioity which is Pia. Pia in return is changing very fast thanx to both Abhay and Maithali taking a bite out of her. Abhayis still coming to terms with Maithali being so selfish and evil.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Fabulous !!!!!!
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
hey first of all sorry for the late reply due to exams,
i've read all the four parts in one go..
it was really awesome.
keep up the good work..
i really like your way of writing..

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