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FF I Was Made To Love You Precap on Page 61 (Page 18)

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
I unresed my post on page 16 Smile

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Lovely update Priya. Oh, joy for the pregnant Simple. Gosh, Shelia again will she ever leave AVi alone. Ewwww, she has her mouth on Avi's. Avi better wash his mouth with cyanide to kill all her germs.

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Originally posted by KriYa_life

Priya... Glad u updated.. Why didnt U PM me?? Anyway.. Complete it & then I will comment... Im still waiting for Nihal..

hey ramona Hug

i thought to pm u after completing it EmbarrassedLOL

it's doneWink

abt nihal have patience dearEmbarrassed

luv yaHug
PATIENCE... I cant Im dying to see Nihal... Grr.. Sheila & Avi KISSING!!! Why couldnt it be ARPI.. Well done!!! Love U too Honey..

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Posted: 24 February 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
Hey PriyaBig smile, sorry dear for the late response and thanks so much for the pm.
 
Man, things are really hotting up between S and A .....your Sheila can give BJ a run for the moneyWink......very well done.ClapStar
 
 
Vista
 
 
 

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
hey priyaHug

thanks for pm &  so sorry  for  posting late. i  v been busy & i cudnt  read  your  nice story  well.   je suis desole !

priya , your imagination is very  strong &  i love your caractrisation .

suprmeClap

bonne chance


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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Thanks Priya,it was once again very nice as always dear.
But pls open that fact soon that what had happen at that night that led avitas breakup.Avi luvs arpi and arpi luvs avi only i know that but here also 2 people are coming in between Nihal and shila.And in the GKD also two people have came in between avita bj and rv.
Well in gkd every hope has let down now so i am waiting gud things in this 'i was made to luv u' well i will be waiting for d next update.
Bye and take care

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged

Hey Priya Hug

 

Sooo Sorry for replying lateOuch. Though I received ur pm regarding update, but I didn't get mch time to go thru it. Read all the parts altogether. Wud be giving my comments for each part Embarrassed

 

Part 2- Its sad to see Arpi and Avi being so indifferent to each other. But I cud also see them having some soft corner still left in their hearts for each other. Ur description of Arpi's reaction on seeing Avi with Shiela was ExcellentStar. Very well done Dear.ClapClap

 

Part 3- Very interesting partThumbs Up. Lovved to see the jealousy in both of themEmbarrassed. More of Avi actually. He seems to be insecured with the thought of seeing Arpi with someone else. Very well done Priya …Hats off to u for bringing in such minute details like Shiela giggling at Arpi's old fashioned cell fone. And the convo between both Avi n Arpi is so brilliantly expressed.ClapClap

 

Part 4- Awww she's still so used to call him Jaanu Embarrassed. It does happen when u love someone desperatelyBig smile Well what surprises me is howcome a man like Avi fell for a rude insensible girl like ShielaShocked Seems things are heating upWink ….cant wait for the next one Priya. Brilliant imagination ….Awesome writingClapClap. Keep up the grt work going and bring on the nxt one quick.Big smile

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Nice!!!  

Continue soon!!! 

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