Gunahon Ka Devta


Gunahon Ka Devta
Gunahon Ka Devta

FF I Was Made To Love You Precap on Page 61 (Page 12)

yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vistaa

Priya, thanks for the pm
Will read and comment this evening. I am sure you would have done and excellent job as usual.Smile

vista di Hug

no probs di....

take your own time...

thanks di

love you alots...

yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

I loved this chapter except for the intro of Sheila. Isn't that the name of villainous characters in disney movies. Great selection with the name, it suits her really well. Poor Arpi is heartbroken again. Avi is accusing her of adultery. Men are always incapable of taking blame and turn a situation into something else. I love Avi but I'm on team Arpi. Please continue with the FF updates .

hey sidda Hug

thanks soo much for liking it....Embarrassed

you have thank prashuuuu for selecting her name...LOL

never support one have know about Avi's pain too then you decide whether whose team you are in..Embarrassed

love you alots..

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Heyy Sweetu Syao..Hug

Plzz update soon...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Hey Jannu Saku Hug

u asked me and i won't do it Embarrassed

hope  you like itEmbarrassed

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
I am sorry guys for Updating it late...Embarrassed

This Part is dedicated to My Jannu Saku (Jessie)...Heart

hope you like it Embarrassed


Although almost all people gathered around Avdhesh and Sheila, there are three people who looked like statues frozen. Arpitha moved away from the door quickly, while Ran Vijay and Manjari stared dumbstruck at the pair. Ran Vijay recovered first and moved towards the door of the church and welcomed his CEO-slash-best friend.

There was a sudden hush among Arpitha's wedding staffers who were whispering amongst themselves. Avdhesh Singh Thakur is a famous person in his own right. After noticing that she was also gaping at him, Arpitha shook her head and went beside Manjari.

"You're late," Ran Vijay said accusingly to Avdhesh .

So you knew he was coming, Arpitha thought and cast Ran Vijay a threatening look that he didn't notice.

Suddenly, one staffer broke the silence of the audience.

"Mr. Avdhesh Singh Thakur?" The girl said excitedly, "You really are handsome, sir! Can you sign this for me?" She added, handing over a piece of paper and a pen.

He merely looked surprised, but he nodded. (See that's how famous he is! Bwahahaha)

Soon there was an excited tension among the people as they bustled for any piece of paper to make Avdhesh even asked Avdhesh to sign her shirt.

But one staffer, Arpitha's right hand and close friend, Maya Sharma, who happens to be Nihal's godmother, suddenly looked thoughtful at her.

After all the commotion, Avdhesh  turned to Ran Vijay and Manjari.

"You will forgive us for being late, Ran Vijay, Manjari. I had business appointments to attend."



Avdhesh  silently gazed around the church. He didn't know why, but somehow he was looking for an unfamiliar guy's face.But he will never admit it, but Avdhesh was looking for his supposed RIVAL, Nihal' But curiously, he found none.

He turned to the couple in front of him. There was intense animosity in the amethyst eyes of Manjari. And he knew why. Manjari is Arpitha 's best friend. That was when he remembered she was supposed to be here. He turned his eyes to Manjari.

Then there beside her was the face he used to see beside him every morning, six years ago. The women whom he used to love and for whom he went to against whole world to make her his. But he lost every thing on that faithful night and his whole world crashed. But a irritating voice made him to come back to reality anyhow it was nothing compared to her beautiful voice.

"Arpitha!" Sheila gasped, looking obviously shocked. Arpitha merely bored her eyes to her stepsister's. Obvious hatred was etched in the soft contours of her face.

He knew the two never got along well, but still, Arpitha's reactions were uncalled for.

He stared at her silently, at the black eyes, the black hair' She hasn't changed much over the years, only older.



She wanted to laugh hysterically at Sheila's stunned gasp.

So this girl still remembered me, She thought sarcastically

 Sheila, as she was named, hated her so much ever since. Just as she hated her, too. Sheila had been her rival with Avdhesh  back then, but she couldn't believe that he'd stoop so low as to court this bitch!

Her temper began to rise.

"Sorry, Arpitha, six years had passed'  I didn't think we'd meet here' Dad had been more than worried' Have you been in touch at all, Arpitha?" Sheila asked in a honey-laced voice she hated so much.

"Yes," She answered in the same phony voice. "Only to Bhaiiya, I'm afraid."

"Ah, of course! Jagat Bhaiiya'I see" She hated the hypocrisy of Sheila's voice, but she cannot say so.

"Well, hello then, Sheila. Yep, it has been a while since we last saw each other."

The staff turned questioning eyes to her, which she dodged. They were clueless of her "acquaintance" with Avdhesh  Singh Thakur.

"I believe you have met Avdhesh, Arpitha?" Ah, the dreaded question'

But of course, weren't we rivals back then, Sheila? Arpitha wanted to snap at Sheila, but instead, "Ah, of course, Jaan-I mean Avdhesh." She said in an unsteady voice.

So this is who you've replaced me with, Jaanu ! How could you?

"Arpitha" He said formally, casting an iron-like gaze at her and nodded stiffly

Then, before the tension reached boiling point, Ran Vijay shouted, "Oi, everyone! Last three sets!"

They were halfway the second to the last set when Arpitha's cell phone rang.

The call was from the shop, but she felt awkward in answering it after Sheila suppressed a giggle, seeing her rather old-fashioned mobile phone. But right now, she could not afford such luxuries. It might be Simple Bhabhi.

After muttering an excuse, she walked towards a corner of the church and answered the phone.



He stared closely as a flushed, rather embarrassed Arpitha walked away to answer the call. He had a sudden urge to follow, which he did, only discreetly so he may not be noticed.


The person at the other end said something, and he saw Arpitha's face lighten up.

"Nihal! Sweetheart, what's wrong?"

Again, he didn't hear the answer, but he could feel anger boil from within him. he could feel jealousy boil from within him.

"No, sweetheart! Not right now, you can't come here,I'll see you later. No buts."

The person at the other end must have protested, for Arpitha shouted at him, and he felt a surge of joy at this.

"Be reasonable, Nihal! Stop it, okay? I'll see you later." She hung up

Arpitha felt someone staring at her. Turning, she saw Avdhesh  staring intently at her.

"Has it been your hobby to eavesdrop?" She said, although she started to get nervous. Did she mutter any giveaways her relationship with Nihal. She hoped not.

"How long have you two been together?" He asked, seemingly like a jealous husband. But that idea was laughable.

It took a moment before what he said registered in her mind.

"Wha'you mean Nihal? He's '" But she thought better of it. He thought Nihal was her --! Then thinking fast, she quickly said, "Five years, Avdhesh. Now mind your own business."

"No No, Just tell me more about him. You seemed smitten about him."

"Let's just say he's everything you weren't." She said, her temper rising. The nerve of this guy!

"Ah'Does that mean he's a lousy lover? Hah! Is he rich? Is he your new boy friend, huh,Pari?"

"Shut it! You have no right to say anything like that!" She said in a low voice, afraid to attract attention. "And leave me alone!"

"Yeah, I would," He said casually as he stared at her. "If only we aren't waiting for you for the practice...You seem to forget easily,Arpitha." So it's back to Arpitha again, huh? She thought before turning away from him.

"You weren't even here for the first week of practices, and you tell me that? Shut it, I don't wanna hear a pot calling a kettle black. So shut up."

With that, she walked towards the altar, fuming...

Part 3 Completed...

thank you for reading it...Embarrassed

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Edited by yoga23priya - 20 July 2011 at 2:38pm

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged


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Loved this part a lott!
 Avdhesh is Jealous!! Loved it..!!! Its a positive signEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 Waiting for NihalBig smileBig smileBig smile
 Both are Jealous, to be more precise..  and Both dont wanna show it...
You are awesome writerWinkWinkWink
This is for youEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 Update the next soon..............................M waiting fr itWinkWink

Edited by prash_t - 11 February 2011 at 1:51pm

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:29pm | IP Logged

Priya !!!! Hug     Hug


I am in love with it.....Loved the Avdesh & Arpitha part....HeartHeart
Woww.....Avdesh is jealous....I just can't wait to read next..Big smileBig smile

Edited by jes_jade - 11 February 2011 at 1:29pm

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Its a lovely update!!!!!!! I loved seeing the jealousy between Avita, they are not willing to say that they love each other but they still do. I'm hoping to see Nihal's appearance.

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Nice development of action Priya....ur characters are very interesting and descriptions are very well done too.
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