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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 8)

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
really gud as usual!!!...
very meaningful and .....lyk priya said, shaan shld read it!!

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ammu_SunshYn

really gud as usual!!!...
very meaningful and .....lyk priya said, shaan shld read it!!
Thanks Ammu sweets!!...I Wish!!:))
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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
nice yaar...ur poem is just wow...

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
nice poetry...



luv zara

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Thanks Naveen, Zara!!:))
 
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wow simi take a bow love that was awesome, you even managed to take a serious issue and turn it into beautiful poetry without ditracting from the harsh reality of it. and the comparison of doubt with a seed that grows and spreads is superb it really is the perfect metaphor. my fav stanza is
 
It manipulates your mind
It poisons your soul
What you hear, see or say
Isn't under your control
 
seriously keep at it. look forward to ur next and out medieval khichadi xxx

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rafia 24

wow simi take a bow love that was awesome, you even managed to take a serious issue and turn it into beautiful poetry without ditracting from the harsh reality of it. and the comparison of doubt with a seed that grows and spreads is superb it really is the perfect metaphor. my fav stanza is
 
It manipulates your mind
It poisons your soul
What you hear, see or say
Isn't under your control
 
seriously keep at it. look forward to ur next and out medieval khichadi xxx
Thanks Rafia!!HugExactly what I wanted to say!! Am working on the Khichdi!!!!WinkWinkWink


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simiHugHugHugHugI am in lovee with ur poetry... totally creativeHug loveed itHeart please keep them coming... always lovee reading themHeart

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