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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 6)

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
wow simi you truly are an awesome poet, it was awesome my fav lines were
Who stole the thunder
From Shanak's SR
ROFL 
its soooo true i remember being soo annoyed seeing rasam inbetwwen shanaks intimate scenesROFL
anyways back to the poem b4 i get side tracked again and its true about him being a victim to poor characterisation- bechara
love ur work as always and do write more when u can- you definately have a fan in me

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
hahaaha....suberb .... for many days i have been missing ur poems............keep it up

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Clap.....Loved it Simi......Hopefully the writers will be meherbaan on poor Rahul and inspire you to write somthing for him againSmile.....

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Hi Simi i love both the poems, they were fab, Thumbs Up you really brought a smile to my face,  thanks! Big smile

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Thank you all so much for liking my poem.....Manita, Bones,Deepali, Ammu, Rooj, Sana, Manju, Angel, Jyothi, Krishna, Pooja, Shriya, Rafia, Sweetsute, May, Nisha, aditee, Amrita, Woohoohaha, Sayni, Missfilmy, Naveen, Deepa, Shai, Vatsalya!!!!! Love U all:)
 
And looks like Swapna ji you did also click the like button....!!!! Thanks for taking the time to read your fans' works!!:)

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Hi all!!
Looks like we are all liking the serious turn of events here..me too!!! More meat to chew on!!Big smile Hope they give us some intense scenes and dialogues.............!
I have written a poem on Shaan's state of Mind.........it's a disease called Shaq or Doubt..
        
           
 Seed of Doubt
 
Once you encounter
the Seed of Doubt
It is really tough
To get it Out
 
It starts to flourish
And spread its roots
It feeds itself
Sprouts new shoots
 
It manipulates your mind
It poisons your soul
What you hear, see or say
Isn't under your control
 
The longer you leave it be
The stronger the affliction
Soon there'll be no remedy
From this evil addiction
 
 
The only antidote if any
Is to sow the seed of trust
Nurture it with tender loving care
And protect it you must
 
~~~~~
 
 
Its not funny, but its true!!
 
Please click the like button and leave a comment if you will!Smile
 
Simi
 
 

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great! 

btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsute

wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great! 

btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........
Thanks dear...would like to know your name!Smile
 
Bakwaas becoz I really don't consider myself a poet...just poking fun at myself!!LOLLOLLOL
 
Love,
 
Simi

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