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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
Happy Monday Odhanians!!
 
Here's a poem on Rahul...especially for Ammu and Rooj!! ...Big smile
 
 
                                             Rahul
 
I am Rahul
No, not 'The Rahul'
Future premier of our land
But the 'vile' Rahul of RBO
 
I was the mysterious element
The disfiguring old scar
Who stole the thunder
From Shanak's SR
 
I had an awesome plan
To rake up an old wound
And obtain my revenge
His future was doomed!
 
I also have a love interest
To kindle forgotten desires
But it turned out to be a damp squib
Without a spark there ain't no fire
 
I had a lot of potential
Had they just penned my lines better
Added subleties and nuances
To my unidimensional charactor
 
I mastered ' Villainy for Dumbos'LOL
I laid out an elaborate plot..............
But...Shaan's now a rockstarConfused
While I'm just a naught!
 
And that cheap MMS trick!
I knew it wouldn't work
The Shanak bond will get stronger
And I'll be painted a jerkAngry ................
 
 
 
 
But all's not over Rahul
Donot leave in disgrace
If not a villain, then a friend
We long to see a smile on your face!!Big smile
 
 
 
Perhaps I got a little too carried away there!!
 
Please do comment!! Thanks!Smile
 
Simi
 
 


Edited by simiv - 31 January 2011 at 2:47pm

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
simi dear........you are simply superb !!Clap

what a beautiful portrayal of poor Rahul.Wink....(I say poor because he has been a victim of lethargy from writers.LOL...)

I loved "stole the thunder from SR" LOLand "MMS wouldn't work and I'll be painted a jerk".....

perfect !!

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Manita-

simi dear........you are simply superb !!Clap

what a beautiful portrayal of poor Rahul.Wink....(I say poor because he has been a victim of lethargy from writers.LOL...)

I loved "stole the thunder from SR" LOLand "MMS wouldn't work and I'll be painted a jerk".....

perfect !!
 
 
Yes, Manita...he definitely did not get his due. So he's 'poor Rahul' and thanks dear!!Big smile

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
simiHug... I loveed itROFL beautifully penned on rahul confused character journeyHeart

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bones88

simiHug... I loveed itROFL beautifully penned on rahul confused character journeyHeart 
 
Well said!!!Clap

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
Awesome poem simiHug loved it ...Thumbs Uppoor rahul..didnot know shanak  bonding soo strong..
And that cheap MMS trick!
I knew it wouldn't work
The Shanak bond will get stronger
And I'll be painted a jerkAngry ................
 Loved above part ...perfect on rahulApprove

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
aww....thnx didi!!...
it was really nyc.....
gud tht u calld him the man who took the thunder frm  shanak SR!! :)))
goin to read MED now.....

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
simi....too good!ROFL

I loved the last four lines...ROFL

bade ache se exit di hai isskoROFL

and thank you for the request...it was def. fulfilled! lmao

plz keep at it...


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