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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 3)

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Hey guys,
Thanks for the appreciation all around!!
 
@ Pooja: Please am not a genius..its RBO's side effects!! LOL
 
@ Manita: My thoughts exactly..I would too rather have Rahul as my enemy if he cud give me such a break!!:))
 
@ Bones88: Thanks for reading and appreciating! :))
 
Love,
Simi

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
oh Simi...(our kavi)...is back.....so happy....and ur poem is so justified...

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iluvmanar

oh Simi...(our kavi)...is back.....so happy....and ur poem is so justified...
OMG!!! I'm honored and really I don't deserve that label!! You cud call me a kavi wannabe!! Big smile and I wouldn't mind at all...Tongue
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
So needed this on a friday to add the relaxing smile to a tough crazy day!
Awesome work simi jaan, like always! You are my shield to sadness that convert to laughter Smile

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Wow...I bow down to you on this!!!

that Last line...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

superb! kya Shaan Poem haiROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

loved it!

now can we get a Rahul or a Sunny one? and make it a funny oneROFLROFLROFL
oh i just rhymed...ROFLROFLROFL

and can we get a Khanak one too?

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Aftr so many days u r writing a poem...its awesome and sorry for the late comment my com was nt working

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simiv

Hi Guys!
I am writing a Poem after sometime. Its about Shaan and his secret of success!! I think that he leads a charmed life with everything going for him. See, even Rahul is turning into a new leaf!! Please read and comment!!
 
 
 
                            Luck... not by chance!Big smile
 
He was born
In a rich house
With a silver spoon
In his mouth
 
He wished to cry
said he had it bad
well if I was him
I won't feel too sad
 
He is blessed
with rare good looks
His sleeek profile
could launch a 1000 books!
 
 
He looks like a model
but he can act
a rare species
now what do you say about that
 
 
He has a lovely partner
Please don't be surprised
Yes,she's too good to be true
A 'typical' Indian wife
 
 
He was lazing away
Life was a treat
Till his girl urged him
To stand on his own feet
 
 
And guess what he took upve
But 'music' as his career
His dad raised a ruckus
But succumbed under pressure
 
 
Did he have to struggle?
Who are you kidding!
He bagged Ehsaan as his opening act
Everyone does his bidding
 
 
Then there is this guy
Who has a 'panga' with him
But he's just not aware
That Rani Jhansi is his shield
 
 
 
So he'll escape unscathed
He is one deserving male
But he is willing to share his luck
His shoes are up for saleWinkLOL
 
                                  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
Hahaha....!!! Man if life was as simple as that!!
 
Please do share yr thoughts...Thanks!!
 
Simi
 

awesome and excilient poem simiHug very nice.loved it...but  shaan sara music bhool gaya hai ...hamari rani jhaasi ne usa sab bhula diya hai.so he goes to dhulwadiROFL

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
Mucho Thanks to all of you guys:
 
Ash, Sana, Deepali, Rooj!!...........<3<3<3
 
 

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