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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 20)

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
wow !!
too good simi......both of them were well penned !!
first -- loved how you said 'thought boys and girls of today are smart enough, not to get into the trouble'......lol.....funny it was !!
second -- Hmmmm............object of fantasy....well described, loved every line !!

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
FABULOUS Simi...fabulous....your talent is immeasurable...
I am your official A.C....baki sab sirf fans...hum to A.C. hai bhaiya...Big smile

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
simi..marjaava yaar...awesum hai...

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
aww Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming lovely simiThumbs Up

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Loved them both SimiClap....K-family are in some way like boys & girls, not grown adultsLOL....
 
And you captured ShaNak's playful romance perfectlyDay Dreaming...Or as Madhavi put it 'Coochie- cooing' LOL......


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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
Thanx for the pm simi  Loved both the poems..esp shanak wala is lovely and it clearly reflects our mind set..of how much we love themSmile 

Edited by sshriyaa84 - 06 March 2011 at 5:42pm

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Simiiiiiiiii i missed reading ur poems
Witty, funny and clever as always loved the pregnancy one more lol, it's true who's pregnant caused as much
Hungama as who made the ILU halwa LOL
Keep writing whenever your free or need destressing as it benefits us lol
Read the penultimate part if ur ss will read the conceding part tomorrow and comment on both together but love it- made me miss dhulwadi lol xxxxx

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Loved both the poems SimiClap the first one funny and second one sooo romanticEmbarrassed

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