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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 19)

rooj-i IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
ok so i finally read it and Simi great job!!!! sorry for the lateness...it was really cute simi....im telln u ur the master of poetry. lol

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simikr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Hi guys!!
Back with a couple of poems after a while....!
On Pregnancy
Nausea, vomiting, chakkar, imli
Classic  pregnancy symptoms
Mads, Khushboo and or khanak
Who is gonna be the victim
Sunil, akshay, and or shaan
Prospective papas to be
Not my time to be a dad
Say all except Akshay.. maybe
Thought guys and girls of today
Are smart enough to know
How to not get into trouble
While loving on the goConfused
But looks like we are in for
Another K house staple
Another bunch of confusion ( remember ILU bungle?)
Hope it's not fatalSmile
Shanak~~ Object of My Fantasies!

I watch you secretly
While pretending to sleep
As you step from the bath
So fresh and sweet

Your hair still wet
Clings softly to your cheek
While the water drops gently
Caress your luminous skin

You sit in front of the mirror
Running a comb through your hair
Still unaware of me
Or are you pretending to be

I see a smile flicker across
Those delectable lips
Please come to me... you are
The  irresistible object of my fantasies

Please press the like button and spill a couple of emotions if you pleaseWink

Edited by simiv - 06 March 2011 at 1:34pm

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priya_cool_123 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Loved it simi. You have a way wit words dear :)

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sweetsute Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
awesome..just fantastic

loved both the poems.....

so true....

and yeah the lips are delectable n khanak is the irresistable object of fantasy for shan n they both together are our objects of fantasy

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adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
 Simi loved them both! they were very well done! so hilarous as usual but true!Big smile

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angel_9 Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
hey SimiHug
awesome n lovely poem.............
lovely..............words used are just amazing..............with the comic essense.............
truely...............mindblowing............loved how simply u described them in the poem..............
loved both of ur poems no need to say it....................but  i can't stop myself to praise u ............................ u  r lovely poetess
n thanks 4 pm

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OlicityFan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
lykd both of them!!...
but the second one was just superb!!....

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-Manita- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
wow !!
too good simi......both of them were well penned !!
first -- loved how you said 'thought boys and girls of today are smart enough, not to get into the trouble'......lol.....funny it was !!
second -- Hmmmm............object of fantasy....well described, loved every line !!

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