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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 17)

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Hey Simi...........
loved the poem Thumbs Up
awesome .......
loved the lines.........
Life would lack soul
Without the good and the bad
Friends make my life whole
For that I'm really glad
n also loved the shanak  spice in it  ............
ok read it  before i got the pm ..........neways thanks 4 the pm 
 


Edited by angel_9 - 17 February 2011 at 11:17am

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
@ Simi

LOL- RBO without confusion is like Mumbai without rain? That's genius:)

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
awesome  job! loved it!Big smile

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
very excilient poem simiHugAll of true you said very well
RBO without confusion
Is like Mumbai without rain
So let's just leave it be
Without pain there's no gain

soooo true dearSmile
 

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
wow! that had a deep meaning....so true

no pain without gain

without khanak, shan's boat is gonna sink

just superb and fantastic

P.S.   another thing....my name is shilpa not silpa-----dont mispronounce it -- i hate when people misspell my nameAngry

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Simi how do you do it, awesome it's true without opposites/ extreme ends of the spectrum we can't fully appreciate what we have. As for friends thats why they are more special as they are chosen not thrust upon you lol
As for shanak spice loved it man rbo is confusing but it's better to jut sit back and enjoy the ride ;)

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

dii...i luvd the last two stanzas d most....esp RBO widout confusion is lyk mumbai widout rain!!...

u rock didi and may u continue to write such superb rhyming poems!..

love ya and thnx for the PM!

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Simi darling once again you hit the Nail with your truly fantasticlly billiant poetry/ poem...and loved loved loved it and agreed with all the stanzasClapClapClapClap but the last stanza takes the cake.....as it really said it all LOLLOLLOL
 
 
RBO without confusion
Is like Mumbai without rain
So let's just leave it be
Without pain there's no gain

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