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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 16)

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Lovely SimiClap.....Dil to hamesha baccha rehta hai, par dimaag to mature hona chahiyeApprove.....

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Nice poem simiHug Dil to bacca hai ji agree shaan ne kaha bhi tha
harketa baccho jaisi per demand bado waliROFL
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
loved it Simi keep it up!

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
Loved it SimiHug

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Loved, loved, loved the Poetry!!!

I can never every do that! I mean i can do it on emotions but not on people...U did it amazingly Simi!

Thank you!

rooj

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 5:23am | IP Logged
oh simi
sorry im so late in reading this was busy with uni and then i go home and see our internet service provider contract ran out and my bro is looking elsewhere so now im logging in from uni- sorry for rambling you didnt need to know all of that
back to the poem , i was awesome as always i seriously dont know how you do it, you manage to make such good poems out of any situations and theyre all so different.
i loved the tepla stanza as it reminded me of the actual scene
love you and your poems but now i want an update on medieval khichadi and the ss
becuase dil maange more lol xx

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Hi Guys, Thanks to all you folks who have the patience to read my work. Thanks Krishna, Angel, Manita, Shilpa, Sana, Saaaz, Ammu, Azuu, Gaayu, Bona, May, Deepali, Rooj, Rafia, Sonali, Shaz who were kind enough to post comments too!!! Hugs!!
Please care to read my latest post..and commentBig smile Thanks!!!
 
 
                                      Dal  without Tadka!!LOL 
 
 
 
 
Words are bland
Until spiced with emotion
Like prayer is without expression
Unless said with devotion

 
Love is an empty pot
Unless filled with trust
Earth is an empty spot
Without loads of dust

 
History is a blank slate
Without old tales to tell
Heavens wouldn't be in demand
Without the ill repute of hell

 
Life would lack soul
Without the good and the bad
Friends make my life whole
For that I'm really glad
 
 
Shanak spiceWink...........

 
Life without Khanak
Is like a letter without ink
If Shaan doesn't get that soon
His boat is bound to sink
 

 
RBO without confusion
Is like Mumbai without rain
So let's just leave it be
Without pain there's no gain
 
 
                                            xxxxxxxxxx
 
 
Hope you likeBig smile


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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
me first! LOLLOL
sorry didnt comment on the last poem!!!!
I was busy....
 
anyway this one ROCKED and is so true..... love u and love this poem....
 
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