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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 14)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Thank You once again guys for reading my poetry!!
 
Thankyou Rafia, Shai, Ammu, Shilpa, Sana, Bones, Deepali, angel, Saaaz, Pooja, Shriya, May!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EmbarrassedBig smile
 
Love, Simi

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
lovely new poem, keep it up!Big smile

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Simi darling,
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Once again a fantastic poem dear.....brilliant...and so well described ..and we all have gone through it indeed....Agree competely dear...Big smileLOL

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
awesome ximvi loved it

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
OMG Simi....sorry for the late reply...been soo busy...finally got to read it!!!

I loved it!!!! especially the last line...

and also the Mad hatter part...it immediately reminded me of Johnny DeppDay Dreaming

Loved the whole medieval term u used in there!ROFL

u truly are a fan!ROFLROFLROFLROFL

I dare you not to use it nextROFLROFLROFL

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Hello Guys, Happy Valentines!!!Heart
 
So I just couldn't help it, Shanak in Dhulwadi especially Shaan's portrayal has driven me to write the following poem..actually its more of a tongue in cheek ( its my staple,) commentary.
 
You can take it as a sort of addendum to Aditee's post!!Wink
 
 
 
                                                           
Dil to Baccha hai Ji
 
 
Meri Pyaari Khanak
Please donot frown
I have come to woo you back
From your dusty hometown
 
 
What I have done.......
 
I have hired an RV
From my arch enemyOuch
To make my life easy
On this tough journey
 
 
At first I had a brainwave
Of serenading you with a song
you would have been entrapped
Had the idea not bombed
 
 
I wished you to reminisce
By showing you some old pics
And a designer dhoti, kurta
But you gave me a miss
 
 
I even made a tepla
For you to impress
But burned my hands
Badly in the process
 
 
I still don't understand
Why you tore us apart
I was just jesting with you
And you took it to heart
 
 
I say I'm really sorry
Come back to me please
Lets enjoy the game of love again
Aakhir dil to baccha hai ji
 
 
~~~~~
 
 
Just having a little fun...please no offense is implied!!Smile
 
Do comment!!
 
Simi
 
 

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Simi darling,
 
Fantastic dear.....as always brilliant....loved it...ClapClapClap


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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
hey Simi amazing............
u really  r awesome at ur work  ur poems r fantastic n very sensible..........
loved itThumbs Up
 n thanks 4 PM
n
Happy Valentines Day.........


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