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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 12)

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
simiHug Mindblowing LETTER yaar...excilient ..all Lines very niceClap
specialy
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So God bless Rahul (well,not really)LOL
Who played a dirty trick
To make you realise
That you are not a brick (strength of khanakBig smile)
 
 
                                                                     So our Jhansi Ki Rani
Pick up your sword..(oops!! no your petti)LOL
And don't turn back this way
Till your ' doubting Thomas' pati
Comes grovelling to your feet (ClapClapClap)
 
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                Loved it.....Loved it....Loved it  l!!!Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
 

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:20am | IP Logged
how do u write such poems didi??....incredible!!
.....hahhahahahah.....jhansi ki rani and her petti....
 

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Oh my God! girl , how do u manage to explain everything so truely , yet in a humorous way----------u r a genious

loved, loved ur narration of khanak's life----so true, it makes me feel again for her.....

thanks, please har alternate days mein ek poem likhna

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Clapwow what a  letter Simi, very well done!Thumbs Up

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Thankssssssssss Guys!!
 
@ Rooj: More than Medievel I like Historical fiction dear!!:)
 
@ Saaaz: Thanks!!!!!!!!!
 
@Shriya: Like to keep it simple and straight dear!!:)
 
@ Krishna: Haha!! Me tooo!! As for the couch..you have given me an Idea!!
 
@Bones: Simi takes a bow!
 
@Sana:Meri nahin apki jayho jo hamari poems padhti hain:)
 
@Angel: Me loves The cute Peti too:)
 
@Naveen: Hamein sharm aati hai;)
 
@ Deepali: Thankyou dear for getting what I want to say!:)
 
@Ammu: Sweetie....Our modern Rani's sword is her peti!!:)
 
@Shilpa: Wow...that wud be a task..but will try!
 
@Sonali: Thankyou sweets!!:))

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
I really wanted to write something on Rahul and the gang expressing our feelings...will work on it soon!!:)
 
But Before its too late I wanted to unload on you this bit of strange poetry on something which is at least indirectly connected to RBO..infact to everybody!!!LOL
 
 
 
 
.... the Great Leveler
 
 
 Everyone considers me a nonentity

Until I make my presence felt

Then nobody can ignore me

 No I don't wander by stealth              
 
 
 
 I am omnipresent

And no doubt omnipotent

No one can escape my clutches

No one can hide

 
 
 I am endemic

Sometimes epidemic

I am teeny tiny

But have like minded brethren

 
 
 
 You have tried many defenses

Nothing does really work

No liniments, sprays, smoke screens

I'm an indestructible jerk

 
 
 I target everyone

Money, fame don't matter

Be it Shaan or Maan

Or the Mad Hatter

 
 
The only way of escape

Is prevention on a massive scale

Which ain't gonna happen

I'm here to stay, without fail

 
 
 But for pragmatists

There is a bright side

Popularity will multiply

Free of priceLOL

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No prices for guessing the correct answer......!!LOL But tell me do you agree or not???Smile
 
Simi


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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
simi wow what issues/themes cant you tackle i could completely relate to the poem have had all those feelings at some point or another.
fabulous cant wait for the next xxx

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rafia 24

simi wow what issues/themes cant you tackle i could completely relate to the poem have had all those feelings at some point or another.
fabulous cant wait for the next xxx
Thanks a ton Rafia!!Big smile

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