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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: (Page 10)

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
awesome   job Simi!

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Simi, I love all your poetries , they are soooo realSmile

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
IT was soooo beautiful and sooooo true!!!
love u Simi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 
 

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U r awesome simi...good going and thnx for PMing....
You r an awesome bubbly chulbuli poet who presents rbo in a very fascinating way 2 us

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
OMG another awesome Poem simi!!!!

you are damn good girl!!! keep it up!!!ClapClapClap

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Thank you all sooo much for reading and commenting on my poems!!!! This has really encouraged me to write more!!LOL maybe that's not a good thing but after what transpired yesterday and today I really felt that I needed to say something to Khanak....so here goes!!Smile
 
 
                                          
                                                     Open letter to Khanak.........
 
 
From time immemorial
This has been a woman's lot
That a man is more equal than a woman
Who has ever forgot?
 
 
Till she remains his shadow
Everything is hunky dory
Once she spreads her wings
Well, That's another storyConfused
 
 
 
 So dear Khanak.....
 
 
You were his( Shaan's) handmaiden (..picked up his towels!!)
You cooked him food
You stood by his side
Though he was incredibly rude
 
 
You tolerated his frivolousness
Every step of the way
And now when it is your turn
He wouldn't give you the time of dayAngry
 
 
 
So God bless Rahul (well,not really)LOL
Who played a dirty trick
To make you realise
That you are not a brick
 
 
Just get out of that place
And march out like a queen
We all have been soo ready
For a change of scene
 
 
 
Hike all the way
Or take a Bailgadi
Just don't turn back
Before you reach Dhulwadi!!Big smile
 
 
So our Jhansi Ki Rani
Pick up your sword..(oops!! no your petti)LOL
And don't turn back this way
Till your ' doubting Thomas' pati
Comes grovelling to your feet
 
~~~~~~
 
 
So I got it out...well some of it finally..Please do comment about how you feel!!!Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
 
                                                  
 


Edited by simiv - 03 February 2011 at 10:29pm

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Haila me first!!!!!

Why do i get the feeling that you love the medieval romance? and setting?

anyways I loved it!!!!

You are really talented Simi and loved your little touches in there...

The letter was mind-blowing!!!

Good job!!!
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NICEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Big smile

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