'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thankssssssssss Guys!!
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
I really wanted to write something on Rahul and the gang expressing our feelings...will work on it soon!!:)
 
But Before its too late I wanted to unload on you this bit of strange poetry on something which is at least indirectly connected to RBO..infact to everybody!!!πŸ˜†
 
 
 
 
.... the Great Leveler
 
 
 Everyone considers me a nonentity

Until I make my presence felt

Then nobody can ignore me

 No I don't wander by stealth              
 
 
 
 I am omnipresent

And no doubt omnipotent

No one can escape my clutches

No one can hide

 
 
 I am endemic

Sometimes epidemic

I am teeny tiny

But have like minded brethren

 
 
 
 You have tried many defenses

Nothing does really work

No liniments, sprays, smoke screens

I'm an indestructible jerk

 
 
 I target everyone

Money, fame don't matter

Be it Shaan or Maan

Or the Mad Hatter

 
 
The only way of escape

Is prevention on a massive scale

Which ain't gonna happen

I'm here to stay, without fail

 
 
 But for pragmatists

There is a bright side

Popularity will multiply

Free of priceπŸ˜†

                                                                                  ~~~~~~

No prices for guessing the correct answer......!!πŸ˜† But tell me do you agree or not???😊
 
Simi
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rafia 24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
simi wow what issues/themes cant you tackle i could completely relate to the poem have had all those feelings at some point or another.
fabulous cant wait for the next xxx
simikr thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: rafia 24

simi wow what issues/themes cant you tackle i could completely relate to the poem have had all those feelings at some point or another.

fabulous cant wait for the next xxx

Thanks a ton Rafia!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its fab simi.....awesome work
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Posted: 13 years ago
simi ur poems are pricelessπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.. simi  πŸ€—  Very nice poem dear..I am fully agree with you
You discribed all feeling ..reaily very greatπŸ‘

Everyone considers me a nonentity

Until I make my presence felt

Then nobody can ignore me

 No I don't wander by stealth              
 
 
 You have tried many defenses

Nothing does really work

No liniments, sprays, smoke screens

I'm an indestructible jerk

All of true...loved it

 
 

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey simi..........
wow awesome poem..............i loved it n i agree with u
pls write next one soon............
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Posted: 13 years ago
How can we not????
with a poem so well thought....
and the character who tries hard
to be bought!!!!

πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
love love love it simi !!!!!!!!!!!
 
as usual u rock!!πŸ€—πŸ‘