'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: - Page 5

hahaaha....suberb .... for many days i have been missing ur poems............keep it up

👏.....Loved it Simi......Hopefully the writers will be meherbaan on poor Rahul and inspire you to write somthing for him again😊.....

Hi Simi i love both the poems, they were fab, 👍🏼 you really brought a smile to my face,  thanks! 😃

Thank you all so much for liking my poem.....Manita, Bones,Deepali, Ammu, Rooj, Sana, Manju, Angel, Jyothi, Krishna, Pooja, Shriya, Rafia, Sweetsute, May, Nisha, aditee, Amrita, Woohoohaha, Sayni, Missfilmy, Naveen, Deepa, Shai, Vatsalya!!!!! Love U all:)

Hi all!!

Looks like we are all liking the serious turn of events here..me too!!! More meat to chew on!!😃 Hope they give us some intense scenes and dialogues.............!

I have written a poem on Shaan's state of Mind.........it's a disease called Shaq or Doubt..

        

           

 Seed of Doubt

 

Once you encounter

the Seed of Doubt

It is really tough

To get it Out

 

It starts to flourish

And spread its roots

It feeds itself

Sprouts new shoots

 

It manipulates your mind

It poisons your soul

What you hear, see or say

Isn't under your control

 

The longer you leave it be

The stronger the affliction

Soon there'll be no remedy

From this evil addiction

 

 

The only antidote if any

Is to sow the seed of trust

Nurture it with tender loving care

And protect it you must

 

~~~~~

 

 

Its not funny, but its true!!

 

Please click the like button and leave a comment if you will!😊

 

Simi

 

 

wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great! 

Originally posted by: sweetsute

wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great! 

btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........

Thanks dear...would like to know your name!😊

Originally posted by: simiv

Thanks dear...would like to know your name!😊

 

Bakwaas becoz I really don't consider myself a poet...just poking fun at myself!!😆😆😆

 

Love,

 

Simi

Simi darling.....👏👏👏👏👏.

Is dis wat u call bakwaas??b/w if posible plz try ur hand in SS.??..u'll b one hell of a writer dre aso!!😊