'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (: - Page 4

Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 13 years ago

simi....too good!🤣

I loved the last four lines...🤣

bade ache se exit di hai issko🤣

and thank you for the request...it was def. fulfilled! lmao

plz keep at it...

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sana

@_sana.Magic_

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Posted: 13 years ago

Simi.....its awesome...yr creative head just roxxx

go on writing more gal

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

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Posted: 13 years ago

nicely witten dear u are brilliant in poems

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manjiri

@m4manju

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice one Simi...reading ur poem after many days...loved it 😊 rahul ki jitani bhi taarif ki jaaye kam hai 😆 and loved these lines specially "I had a lot of potential
Had they just penned my lines better"... so true 😛

thanks for the PM dear...😊

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angel_9

@angel_9

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey Simi loved the poem............

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice 1 yaar..i m luvving ur poems...

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 13 years ago

Simi darling its so good to have you back from your vacation...or was it work related...

Missed your quirky humourous poems a lot...

Read both and loved them ....you described Shaan and Rahul both wonderfuly...Poor Rahul as Manita said ...a very badlt penned character indeed....the writers indeed made him a confusing person...confused themselves and thus confused him too...😆😆😆

Can't wait to read more from you soon dear...😃

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