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'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (:

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Hi Guys!!


I have decided to keep my "Crooked" Poems together for a change!!</font>


Please comment freely! You'll find the links at the bottom of this page!



                            Luck... not by chance!Big smile


He was born

In a rich house

With a silver spoon

Inhis mouth


He wished to cry

said he had it bad

well ifI was him

Iwon't feeltoo sad


He isblessed

with rare good looks

His sleeekprofile

could launch a 1000 books!



He looks likea model

buthe can act

a rare species

now what do yousay about that



Hehas a lovely partner

Please don't be surprised

Yes,she's too good to be true

A'typical' Indian wife



Hewas lazing away

Life was a treat

Tillhis girlurged him

Tostand onhis own feet



And guess whathe took up

But 'music' ashis career

Hisdad raised a ruckus

But succumbed under pressure



Did hehave to struggle?

Who are you kidding!

He bagged Ehsaan as his opening act

Everyone does his bidding



Then there is this guy

Who has a 'panga' with him

But he's just not aware

ThatRani Jhansiishis shield




Sohe'll escape unscathed

He isone deserving male

Buthe iswilling to share hisluck

Hisshoes are up for saleWinkLOL


                                  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Hahaha...!!! Man if life was as simple as that!!


Please do share yr thoughts...Thanks!!




Poem on Rahul: Pg 4




Seed of Doubt: Pg6




Letter to Khanak: Pg 10

Guess who : Pg12

Dil to Baccha hai ji: Pg14
 
Dal without tadka: Pg 16
 
On Pregnancy: Pg 19
 
Object Of My Fantasies: Pg 19
 
We shall Miss: pg 22


Edited by simiv - 16 July 2011 at 10:16pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
WOW!! Simi   his shoes are up for saleLOLLOLLOLrani Jhanasi as his shield Big smile 
 
superb yaar..

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged

Fabulous!!!!
Your poem made me laugh....really laugh..given the whole 'expressionless' shaan during Khanak's turmoil and now as a awww sad and hurt shaan post watching the MMS....

really good ....tongue in cheek....don;t know if you wrote it from the perspective I read it....Wink

seriously what is his secret? how does he escape unscathed???

Fabulous job Simi.....


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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaaz


Fabulous!!!!
Your poem made me laugh....really laugh..given the whole 'expressionless' shaan during Khanak's turmoil and now as a awww sad and hurt shaan post watching the MMS....

really good ....tongue in cheek....don;t know if you wrote it from the perspective I read it....Wink

seriously what is his secret? how does he escape unscathed???

Fabulous job Simi.....



Yes dear you got it right..on the dot!:)
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
kya baat hai simi not only do you write good ur poems are great
hahaha loved the lparagraph
He is blessed
with rare good looks
His sleeek profile
could launch a 1000 booksROFL soooo true.
 
pls continue to write more loved it Hug

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
yay!!....u wrote one!.....
awesome and funny as usual....missd these while u were away!... :)
my fav line is - 'shoes are up for sale!'....LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
wow! great job.................. loved d line rani of jhansi as his shield.........so true, Khanak is indeed Jhansi ki rani

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Thank you Simi....Cuteness defined Clapand it made me smileBig smile.....

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