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Maaneet OS - A Promise Well Kept (Page 15)

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
@ Swati,

I would be the happiest person if you will write poem for my work ! I would honored to have a person like you to make my work just perfect ! 

And, it feels great when someone loves your work, and more importantly, someone understands the crux of the whole thing, and my dear friend, you just did that ! 

I can't thank you enough for this ! Love you !  Wink

And, yes ! I did read your comments but the thing is that, i was so busy and lots of thing were happening at the same time, so i just forgot to reply ! But, no worries, i will give you reply in next few seconds ! And, do not worry, after writing so many sad OS ( which i don't think that they were that much sad ! Tongue ), i'm used to those threats and complaints ! Wink

Hugs to you ! 


HugHugHug



Love, 



Maddy






Edited by maanddy - 15 May 2011 at 5:28am

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Well, i had hoped to do a better job, but this is what I wrote...
It would be wrong to call it poem, coz i am nowhere close to a poetessLOL
Its just that I have written some for muskanp's ffs coz they really really affect me(as in, i keep thinking abt them!), and there people started calling them poems, for me, they are still just creations...maybe my outbursts...when i think too much abt a partucular update/ff then this is how it comes out! And,of course, I write for my own SSEmbarrassed
well, here it is,do tell me how u found it, and please please be honest!Big smile
 
 
THE PROMISE WELL KEPT...
 
 

Life ends but faith goes on''

People disappear but souls go on'.

Smiles fade but tears go on'.

Death remains, YET, Life goes on'.

 

When you left me, my life was gone;

Despite my promise, I couldn't move on!

Yet, you were always there, it was ME who was a moron,

You opened my wings, tugged me to fly on'

 

When people thought I was living a life,

I was only living my promise;

When everyone thought I was alone,

It was you who saved me from turning into a stone!

 

Your faith was my fuel'..

OUR dreams were my aim''

Our kids were my strength'.

When I dared to move again!

 

Today when I see tem happy,

The tears still roll on'.

Yes, a promise has been kept well,

Its time for us(u and me) to go on''..

love
SwatiBig smile


Edited by princess163 - 15 May 2011 at 8:01am

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

Well, i had hoped to do a better job, but this is what I wrote...
It would be wrong to call it poem, coz i am nowhere close to a poetessLOL
Its just that I have written some for muskanp's ffs coz they really really affect me(as in, i keep thinking abt them!), and there people started calling them poems, for me, they are still just creations...maybe my outbursts...when i think too much abt a partucular update/ff then this is how it comes out! And,of course, I write for my own SSEmbarrassed
well, here it is,do tell me how u found it, and please please be honest!Big smile
 
 
THE PROMISE WELL KEPT...
 
 

Life ends but faith goes on''

People disappear but souls go on'.

Smiles fade but tears go on'.

Death remains, YET, Life goes on'.

 

When you left me, my life was gone;

Despite my promise, I couldn't move on!

Yet, you were always there, it was ME who was a moron,

You opened my wings, tugged me to fly on'

 

When people thought I was living a life,

I was only living my promise;

When everyone thought I was alone,

It was you who saved me from turning into a stone!

 

Your faith was my fuel'..

OUR dreams were my aim''

Our kids were my strength'.

When I dared to move again!

 

Today when I see tem happy,

The tears still roll on'.

Yes, a promise has been kept well,

Its time for us(u and me) to go on''..

love
SwatiBig smile




PERFECT ! Just one word for this ! Clap

Loved it and thank you so much for sharing it with me ! I loved that so much ! Embarrassed

Thank you babes ! Hug

And, now that you have just stunned me ! From now on, if i will ever get problem in my work for titles or poems or anything like this kind of 'creation' as you mentioned ! I will for sure ask you and take your help ! 

I hope you won't mind ! Smile


Oh yes ! I wanted to tell you before but i forgot, regarding your complaints, that thank god you have not read my other SS - Kiss the 'Knight' Goodbye. It is my favorite and if you really hate sad ones, then i would prefer you to avoid it ! But, i still think that after A Promise...My most fav is Kiss the Knight...They both are like my babies...I just love reading them, time and time again !


Love,


Maddy






Edited by maanddy - 15 May 2011 at 12:22pm

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
omg this is an awesome os..Big smile
it actually made me cry..Cry
u have written it beautifully!!Smile


Edited by luv_GurTi - 15 May 2011 at 1:44pm

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanddy

Originally posted by princess163

Well, i had hoped to do a better job, but this is what I wrote...
It would be wrong to call it poem, coz i am nowhere close to a poetessLOL
Its just that I have written some for muskanp's ffs coz they really really affect me(as in, i keep thinking abt them!), and there people started calling them poems, for me, they are still just creations...maybe my outbursts...when i think too much abt a partucular update/ff then this is how it comes out! And,of course, I write for my own SSEmbarrassed
well, here it is,do tell me how u found it, and please please be honest!Big smile
 
 
THE PROMISE WELL KEPT...
 
 

Life ends but faith goes on''

People disappear but souls go on'.

Smiles fade but tears go on'.

Death remains, YET, Life goes on'.

 

When you left me, my life was gone;

Despite my promise, I couldn't move on!

Yet, you were always there, it was ME who was a moron,

You opened my wings, tugged me to fly on'

 

When people thought I was living a life,

I was only living my promise;

When everyone thought I was alone,

It was you who saved me from turning into a stone!

 

Your faith was my fuel'..

OUR dreams were my aim''

Our kids were my strength'.

When I dared to move again!

 

Today when I see tem happy,

The tears still roll on'.

Yes, a promise has been kept well,

Its time for us(u and me) to go on''..

love
SwatiBig smile




PERFECT ! Just one word for this ! Clap

Loved it and thank you so much for sharing it with me ! I loved that so much ! Embarrassed

Thank you babes ! Hug

And, now that you have just stunned me ! From now on, if i will ever get problem in my work for titles or poems or anything like this kind of 'creation' as you mentioned ! I will for sure ask you and take your help ! 

I hope you won't mind ! Smile


Oh yes ! I wanted to tell you before but i forgot, regarding your complaints, that thank god you have not read my other SS - Kiss the 'Knight' Goodbye. It is my favorite and if you really hate sad ones, then i would prefer you to avoid it ! But, i still think that after A Promise...My most fav is Kiss the Knight...They both are like my babies...I just love reading them, time and time again !


Love,


Maddy




 
Thanks dear! M really glad that you liked it though i would still maintain that I am not satisfied with it!
Anyways, coming to the thing of me hating sad stories, well, I didn't hate A promise Well Kept, Did I? Coz it was NOT sad! Its not about being happy or sad, it about the crux of the story! Yes, i cried like hell after reading this, but more than the sad part, it was for the depth of gthe love that you portrayed, for the faith which was a strength, for the promise which was the aim!
So, if Kiss the Knight Goodbye fulfills the criteria of being more of a deep than sad SS, I would definitely love it!
And, now, I will defo read it!
And the help partEmbarrassed
Hahahahaha...would be glad to help you in any possible way, yoi don't need to askEmbarrassed, but, I do seriously doubt my ability to do that!LOL
Do keep writing!
Love
Swati

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Thanks dear! M really glad that you liked it though i would still maintain that I am not satisfied with it!
Anyways, coming to the thing of me hating sad stories, well, I didn't hate A promise Well Kept, Did I? Coz it was NOT sad! Its not about being happy or sad, it about the crux of the story! Yes, i cried like hell after reading this, but more than the sad part, it was for the depth of gthe love that you portrayed, for the faith which was a strength, for the promise which was the aim!
So, if Kiss the Knight Goodbye fulfills the criteria of being more of a deep than sad SS, I would definitely love it!
And, now, I will defo read it!
And the help partEmbarrassed
Hahahahaha...would be glad to help you in any possible way, yoi don't need to askEmbarrassed, but, I do seriously doubt my ability to do that!LOL
Do keep writing!
Love
Swati
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From all comments and review you gave me about my work, i'm sure that you can and you will help me ! You have the ability ! Smile And, i just read your comment there and i am shocked, you liked it ! Wink





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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_GurTi

omg this is an awesome os..Big smile
it actually made me cry..Cry
u have written it beautifully!!Smile


Thanks babes ! Smile

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i felt like crying but Armaan was protrayed as a brave son
luved every bit of it
 

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