These are some scenes i made up for fun.Please read and comment.If you want me to make more,Please say so.Please remember i am new here so it might not be that good.
episode starts with annie and pinky taking geet to the bedroom.Maan is already there and is sitting on the bed.When he sees A and P bringing geet to the room,he gets up and stands at the door.Geet is looking down shyly and maan is staring at her.
M:Okay,you can go now annie and pinky
A:not so quickly,first give money
M:(joking)i thought u were my sister but even u betrayed me and supported geet
A:well geet is going to rule the house now so im just getting in her good books
M glares at her but gives the money.
M: now go
A:ok but me and pinky need to check something,right pinky?
M gives her the 'im your boss'look
They get geets haned.
G AND M looking confused
A: actually geet,i thought i should count how many bangles youve got on so we know what happens behind closed doors
G feels shy.MSK glares.
A:ok we're going but remember dont break too many bangles,ok geet?
Geet goes inside and is standing there.M closes the door.
G is feeling nervous and goes to sit on the bed.
M sit nexts to her and puts his hand on top of hers.
Geet still looking down.
M:youre shying away from me?i am your husband now after all.
G: yes and now im mrs maan singh khurana.All my dreams have come true.
M:yes geet,im so happy today.i promise from now on,your life will be full of happiness.I'll love you and our baby so much that the whole world will say look at MSK,hes turned into a jhoru ka gulaam.
G:im the luckiest girl in the world.ive been re-united with my family and ive got such a loving husband.after every girls wedding,they become parayi but i can say with pride that this geet is not parayi to anyone.by the way,why didnt u tell me you were bringing my family for wedding?
M:(innocently)Me? i didnt do anything?
G:Mr MSK,dont act that innocent,i know everything.
M:well i can see our relation hasnt changed at all,the same fighting.But ok,i did invite them.Remember,i promised you youd have everything in your wedding that all the other girls have?Well i was just fulfilling that promise.
Geet has tears in her eyes.M wipes away.She kisses him on forehead.*Eyelock*
Scene changes to arjun.
A:enjoy this night,MSK.its the first and last night youll spend with your wife.
He smiles Evilly
Scene changes to M&G hugging.
M:if id known that by bringing your family back,you'd kiss me,id have done it long ago.
G feeling shy.Baby kicks her.
M:whats wrong geet?shud i call doctor?
G:no,our baby is just telling its dad to stop teasing its mum.
M puts his head to her stomach.
M:baby,icant wait for you to be born,come soon.
He then kisses her stomach.
M:Geet,u need to sleep,youre tired.
M: atleast listen to me sometimes.
G:ok,but let me take jeweelery off,so heavy,i had to wear it all day.
She starts to take itoff.Maan stops her.
M:geet,ur stealing my right from me.
He starts taking it off.Geet is blushing.
Maan lies her down and lies down next to her.She faces the other way.
M:ur so shy u wont even face me?
G:no,i wont be able to sleep with u staring at me.
Maan pulls her on top of him.
G:what are you doing?
M:That what husband and wife do on suhag raat.That what u want me to do.
G:I..I dont want you to do anything.
Maan strokes her face.
M:first,i need to do something.husband and wife give presents on suhag raat.Dont u want urs?
G:depends,what is it?
He kisses her softly on the lips.
She rolls away.
Maan moves closer,hugs her,puts his hand on babyand his mouth is near her ear.
Geet thinks he is going to kiss,she closes eyes.
Maan whispers Goddnight then smiles.
They go to sleep,
Its next morning.G&M sleeping,hugging each other.Geets head on maans chest.
Annie knocking on door.
No answer,she goes in and sees them.
She gets water and chucks on Maan.
M:G,wat u doing?slept late,am tired.
He holds Annies hand and strokes it.
G:M,who u talking to?
Both stare at each other,see Annie,Jump apart.
Annie:So,how long were u awake til last night and doing wat?
A:only asking,anyway,if youre done,dadi calling.
Geet goes to have shower.
She comes back,Maan not on bed.
She looks for him.M hiding behind door.He grabs her,puts bindi and sindoor on her.They hug and go down.
At breakfast table:
A is teasing Geet And Maan.
A:So,how many bangles did u break last night?
She looks at geets arm and counts.
A:oh,very good,not even 1,u must have been very careful!
Everyone starts eating.Annie feels sick.She goes upstairs and is sick.She worries about how she'll tell Maan.
The police come downstairs.
Police:whos MSK,we have an arrest warrant for him.
Screen goes to everyones faces.
Geet holds Maans hand.Both look at each other.
Precap:Geet is crying.Maan says to geet:lool after yourself and our baby.I'l be back soon.Slowly let go of hands.Tujhe bhula diya playing in background.
Please comment and tell me what you think.
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 28 January 2011 at 10:09am