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New Raga FF:-pyaar to hona hi hai PART 3(pg2)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
disclaimer:-I just thought to write my first ff on rudra & gauri,it contains the same characters as in the serial itself.I am basically continuing the story from where yesterdays episode left it as i have never written any ff beforeCry

Character Sketch:Main lead-Rudra Singh Rawat & Gauri Singh Rawat(Rudra's wife)
Supporting Caast:Dadaji,Mr Jairaj Singh Rawat(Rudra's mother),Mrs Rajrani Singh Rawat(Rudra's father),Ratnesh Singh Rawat(Rudra's elder brother),Ketki Singh Rawat(Ratnesh's wife),Revaty(Rudra's younger sister)

Part 1-page 1
Part2-page 2
Part3-page 3


                                                    Story Continues

                                                   PART 1

Next day rudra woke up early in the morning but was really surprised to find that gauri was missing from the houseShockedhe got worried & started searching for gauri outside the house.When he failed to search gauri on his own,he went inside the house & brought a photograph of gauri and started asking the neighbours about herClap
          Then suddenly he heard someones voice,he immediately turned around & saw that it was gauriBig smileSeing gauri in front of him he couldn't stop himself from smiling.He immediately ran towards gauri & hugged her tightlyEmbarrassedAfter hugging her for few minutes he realised that they were still outsideOuch so atonce took gauri inside the house holding her hand.
          As soon as they went inside rudra suddenly started scolding gauri
"gauri tum itni subah subah achanak kaha chali gayi thi ? tumhe pata hai ki main kitna pareshan ho gaya tha jab maine tumhe ghar par nahi dekha"
Seing rudra getting so angry gauri started crying"rudra main to tumhare liye pani garam karne wali machine lene gayi thi.tumhe kal pani bahot thanda lag raha tha na isiliye.i am really sorry mujhe maaf kar do"
After hearing the answer rudra immediately hugged gauri & started consoling her by apolozising herClapThen he slowly removed her hair from her face & kissed lightly the tears which were continuously flowing out from her eyesBlushing


i am ending my first part here itself,hope u liked itSmilethose who didn't liked am apolozising them for writingCrythose who liked it plz press the like button if possibleBig smileu r free to give ur comments
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Edited by monaghosh - 28 January 2011 at 6:32pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
It's good to see u writing ur first FF Mona... I'm liking it so far... Keep on updating!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
way to go mona!! Thumbs Up its awesome that we finally have SSBS FF!! keep updating!! Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged

hapy to see u with an ff..........................gud start......................keep gng.......................

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
nice start

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
I do not understand the Hindi writing could you.
Could someone translate me pleaseEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SexyLo

I do not understand the Hindi writing could you.
Could someone translate me pleaseEmbarrassed

translation of hindi dialogues:-rudra to gauri-"where u went in the early
morning u know i got so wooried for  u when i saw that u were missing"
                                                     gauri to rudra-"i actually went to bring the hot water making machine for u only as yesterday u were feeling cold thats y,i am so sorry rudra plz forgive me"

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Keep it up Mona, really liking it. Update soon dear.

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