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Geet-Funny OS-Kiss Ko Kiss Se Khatra-Pt 2 : Page 5 (Page 5)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged

I am not that great in writing a seduction part when it comes to girls seducing ........ & me trying 1st time ..... &  i am feeling shyEmbarrassed to write this & may b could not give u all a great part ......... but still tried .....let me know how u like this part ........... i hope u all are not dissappointed............

Part 2 :-
 
Geet went to bed thinking & planning what to do in the morning ............how she will seduce maan in the morning ......... but little does she know ........ that maan can read her very well .........so well ............ that he too....... thinks that before geet can seduce him ........ he will run off to the officeROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL....... on the pretext of an important callWink ........... just like yesterday & plans to have his fav ............ pheeka pastaROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL ......... in office .......... not at home ........ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
geet wakes up with a wicked smile BlushingEvil SmileBlushingEvil SmileBlushingEvil SmileBlushingEvil SmileBlushingEvil Smile thinking about her plan .......... and stretches her hand hoping that maan would be next to her .......... but she finds the place empty .......... opens her eyes in a jhatka & shocked  ShockedOuch ......... to see a missing maan ........ puts her hand on her headOuch ................ thinking ............. ShockedOuchConfused
 
geet - yeh maan kahan gaye ............. let me see ........may b in the bath ............. chks the bath ........... maan missing Ouch 
 
geet thinks may b he's working out ........... let me finish my bath .......... after her bath ..........when she was getting ready ....... finds a note on the dressing table .........
 
note from maan :-
 
geet forgot to tell you yesterday .......... i have an urgent meeting so me rushing off to office ........... so right now me in office ....... mishti ........... me missing u ........luv U ...............take care bye ...........
 
&
 
P.S:- My cell is switched off ..........so no use calling me .......ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
geet - maan switching off his cellAngry ......... pagal ho gaye kya Angry........inka screw deela hogaya hoga Angry............. tight karna jaroori ho gaya hain Angry.............. aur promise bhi yaad dilana padegaAngry ........ kitne promises kiye thaeAngry ...........ek bhi yaad nahin Ouch.............
 
promise - 1)what did he say while confessing ............ har subah tumse shuru & har raat tumse khatam ............... inka subah tho mujhe dekh kae shuru hotha hain & raat bhi mujhe dekhke khatam .............par mera kya ..........ShockedConfusedOuchmaine tho subah utnae kae baad tho unko dekha bhi nahinUnhappyCry
 
promise - 2)shadi kae baad tumhare maathae pae bindi lagaunga roz .......... wo bhi bhul gaye & bhaag gaye office ko ............Angryaane do .......... main bhi dekhungi ..........Angry
 
Geet - subah subah ........... running off to officeAngry ............. eating food as though some one is behind himShocked ...............going to bed even before talking to meAngry ................. 
 
geet - yesterday i told him ............... but tonight i shall surprise him ....................... maan singh khurana .............. bach sako tho bachalo apne aap ko .................
 
maan in office .............
 
maan - thank god ............ saved myself & my family ................. but what to do ................ geet's plans must be runnin wild ...............Confused
 
maan thinking about how she tried last time but failed .............(red dress incident ............)BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
 
maan - oh god ............ that time she was my fiancee & she tried with a mini ............... what will she do now ................ConfusedOuchShockednow that she is my wifey ..........ConfusedShocked
LOLLOLLOL
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It's night & almost maan's arrival time ............
 
geet - today I will not leave the bedroom & ask the food to be delivered to our room it self ................................
 
geet informs nakul to bring the dinner to their room as soon as he hears maan's car horn ............ geet dressed up in a white saree with red pallu & red border ...........& wearing a backless choli ............. she was looking very very beautiful ..............(well we all know how beautiful our kudi looks in sarees ....... that too white maan's fav color...........)
 
geet looking at her self in the mirror ........
 
geet 2 herself - maan .............. aaj aap kya kahengae ............
 
as soon as ......... maan enters the room ....maan is even more surprised & shocked ...........ShockedOuchConfused& is thinking on ......... how to save himself today.......... Embarrassed
 
maan was so so lost to see his new bride in that saree ......... geet was looking just like an angel .......... she was looking stunning in that saree ........... no words to praise her ........... he was lost in her for couple of minutes ......... that ....... he was floating in his dream land with his mishti .......... but nakuls knock made him land on to his original bedroom with a thud.... LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL......... nakul brings in the food after geet said him to enter .......... 
 
geet - nakul ........ khana idhar rakhdo ......... main dekhlungi ...........
 
nakul - ji madam ..........
 
geet - dadima & annie ne khana kha liya ...........
 
nakul - ji ..........
 
geet - aur tum wo sab le ke aaye jo maine mangwaya ..............
 
maan in his mind - geet nae kya mangwaya .........Shockediss geet ka tho kuch bhi bharosa nahin hain ......... LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
nakul - ji maam ............sab le ke aaya ..........
 
geet - teek hain ......... tum jao ............
 
maan already removed his waist coat ....... maan was taking off his tie ........ geet locks the door ..... & coming near maan ........... LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
maan looking like a deer caught in a lion's cage ........LOL LOLLOLLOLWink
geet coming close to him .....have an eye lock ........ she is now in front of him .........while they both are still having an Eye lock ..........
 
maanD'ohin his mind - aaj geet ko kaise avoid karoon ...........D'ohD'ohD'oh
 
geet - maan ......... aap kapde badlengae ki ............
 
maan - ki ..........
 
geet coming close to maan ....... maan looking at her ........ geet places her hand on maan's chest ..... first ....... & he was like ........
 
maan in his mind - oh i think she just wants a hug ......... or is her plan something else ..........
 
geet first hugs maan.....
 
maan in his mind  - oh ok ........ she was thinking only about the hug ........
 
he too reciprocates her hug ..........
 
geet - maan aap change karengae ki main aap ki help karun ........
 
maan - help .....  
 
geet keeping her hands on his buttons ........ maan scared Shocked..........ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL......
geet popped open 1 button already ......... maan is looking shocked Shocked..... geet looking into his eyes ...... popped another button open .... it was KKHH for maan BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing.....well not only for maan even for geet too BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing..... but more than geet it was for maan BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing.... geet's hands touched his bare chest in the process EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.......... it sent shivers down both their spines BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing..... maan is closing his eyes ........ was lost in her touch EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..............but maan was wanting to come out of it .......Angry
 
maan to himself - oh no .... yeh kya kar rahin hain .........
 
but maan will power is strong he holds geet's hands ..........
 
maan - geet ...... main change kar lunga .... tum khana laga do ........
 
geet leaves him .... in a jhatka & is smiling to herself .........
 
geet - ok maan ......jaise aap kahen ..........
 
maan breathes a sigh of relief ........ did not think she would let it go easily ........
 
geet starts serving .... maan changes & comes ....they both sit to have their dinner on the sofa .......
 
they both finish their dinner ......... geet then serves ice-creams in 1 bowl first  ..............
 
geet - shall we eat from 1 bowl ........
 
scared maan ..........
 
maan - no .... we will eat in separate bowls ....
 
geet - ok ... i don't mind ....... i will serve in two bowls ........
 
geet then serves the ice-cream in two bowls ..........geet  while eating the ice- cream ...........
 
geet - oh ho ......... ice - cream tho thoda .......pigal gaya hain ........... aap kha paa rahen hain ........
 
maan - haan ..... geet ........... i don't have a problem ......
 
geet - acha ....... par mujhe ho rahin hain ..........
 
geet on purpose has ice-cream all over her lips ........ice-cream spreading over her chin ....... on her hands ........ she was literally eating like a babyLOLLOLLOLLOL ........ on purpose spoilt her hands ...........by spreading ice-cream all over her face starting from her lips to her chin .............. LOLLOLLOL
 
geet - maan ........... please ........wipe the ice-cream off my face .... if u c it's all over my face .... & my hands too .......
 
maan searches for tissues under the table ....... but geet removed them ......already .........coz she knows tht he might give tissues like previous time .....
 
geet - kya hua maan .... what are u searching for ......
 
maan - oh .... wo .... tissues .........
 
geet angry - maan ..........my saree will b spoilt & i will hate it if any stains fall on this saree ........ u stop searching for tissues & clean my face ......with your hands ........
 
maan - ok ok .......... wait ...........
 
maan now starts wiping the ice cream with his hands ............ he was touching her lips ...........as soon as he touched her lips ..... both lost in each other eyes as usual ............... 
 
maan is coming close to her ........... he is close to her lips ....... about to kiss her .............
 
geet sets timer on the music system ...... so while maan was about to kiss her .......song starts .......bahom main chali aa..........song from anamika .........
 
[song starts]
(play the song through the entire scene...........)
 
geet in her mind - oh god i didn't set the time properly ........ the song started too early ......ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
maan comes back to his senses ...... geet too gets up & wants to go near the system ... to switch the system off as she did not keep the remote near her & the song that was playing in the back ground was irritating her even more ...........as her plan backfired coz of that song ........
 
but geet did not realise that maan was sitting on top of her saree palloo by mistake ..........so while she gets up & tries to walk away from there ......she slips ......... & falls on maan's lap .......& her saree palloo slides off her shoulder ....maan holds her in his arms as soon as she falls on his lap .... with his left hand supporting her back ..... both having eye lock session & lost in each other's eyes ....... maan now slowly slides his hands under her knees & lifts her & geet criss crosses her arms around maan .... maan carries her to the bed .......... places her on their bed .....he too adjusts himself next to her ..... geet eyes are closed & her lips trembling .... maan now bends over her to kiss her ......... there is only a couple of milli metre space in between their lips ...... he was about to plant the kiss on her lips ......... but pulls him self back ......... & moves away from there ........geet again shocked over his behaviour .......... & gets up ......adjusts her self & goes behind him .........
 
maan is standing in the balcony ...........geet too goes & stands beside him ........... geet notices the feelings of maan from his face & notices that he is worried about something ........ confronts him ........
 
geet - what's bothering you maan ........ since our SR night ..... why are you behaving in a weird way .......
 
maan - nothing geet ........ i m fine ..........
 
geet - no maan ........... something is bothering you .... what is it ......
 
maan - nothing geet .......
 
geet - aap ko meri kasam .............
 
maan - geet .......... yeh tum kasam ....
 
geet - aap .......... agar seedhe seedhe nahin bata yengae tho mujhe kasam tho dilana padega ......... ab batayiye ........
 
maan then tells her the problem that's been bothering him ........ about her health .........& what made him stop .......& how he stopped himself ......he only knows .....
 
geet & maan both have tears in their eyes & hug each other ..........
 
geet & maan both decide to go & have a check up next day morning ........
 
then geet kisses maan on his cheek ........
 
maan carries her back to their bed in his arms & geet criss crosses her arms around his neck & maan lays her on their bed & while still bending over her ..... & geet's arms still around maan .........
 
maan then compliments her that she was looking very very beatiful in the saree & how he could not take his eyes off her ........geet then pulls him towards her & then plants a kiss on his lips .......maan too reciprocates her kiss .........they both sleep in each other's arms ...........(I was debating so much on the lip kiss part whether to write it or not but thought ....kissing is ok ...so gave u all a kiss scene....Wink)LOLLOLLOL
 
next day they both meet a gynec ........ & get all the tests done & the doctor says that right now there is no problem ....... but geet needs to take care of her self ........so that complications don't build up in future ......
 
maan & geet back in mansion ............
 
geet - now are you relieved .....see I am fine & our baby is aslo fine .......... so now I hope U will stop running away from me ........
 
maan hugging geet .........
 
maan - yes .......... my mishti ............ I will not run away from U ..... will always be close to you ......... but think over ........... because U might regret ....... because I think .... U might be the one running away from me ............from today onwards .........
 
geet beats him over his chest .............
 
geet - maan stop It .......
 
they both share some wonderful moments together ...........
 
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let me know how U liked this update ..........
 
 


Edited by dewdropred - 21 April 2011 at 6:45am

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
That was well done again! I hope they really show something like that.Day Dreaming The end also was really cute!
Enjoyed it very much.Clap

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
awesome part di Geet plan backfiring ... and Maan thinking of mini...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Fantabulous!!!

Loved it to the core!!!!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
LOLLOLLOL

wow tat was nice........!!!!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Gr8 OS---loved it
Wish something lyk dis happens
On da show Tongue

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
nice one...................i just wish this wud happen in the serial but i dont think so they will do that they might drag this track bit longer...............but i loved the way u hv done it..............geet's plan and backfiring...................

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Awesome
loved it
geets plan backfiring
loved her she was so good
loved the ice cream moment
ending was the best
thanks 4 da pm

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