Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

My screenplay for tomorrow..1/27/2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

My little screenplay for tomorrow. 1/27/2011.. I know the CVS will come up with a better one... but till then enjoy my version...(there is no AA in mine😉)  

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Geet walks in and sees Maan sleeping.


GEET 

(self talk)

"Maan is asleep already?"


Geet slowly tiptoes to the bathroom and comes out a few minutes later in her nightdress. She lies down on the bed and slowly inches towards maan under the blanket. She watches him for a while and feels a great sense of pride and happiness that this handsome person next to her is all hers.


GEET

(mumbles)

"Ufff.. I want to touch him but I don't want to wake him up. What should I do?

Yes, I will touch is hair and he will not feel that."


Geet slowly inches her hand towards Maan's head and suddenly stops.


GEET

(mumbles)

"Ahhh, these bangles are making too much noise. Abort plan A. I have to come up with plan B. "


The noise of the bangles makes Maan stir and he stretches his feet out of the blanket. Geet's eyes fall on Maan's feet and she starts admiring his beautiful shaped feet and their long delicate toes. Then an idea pops into her mind, plan B. 

She slowly inches downwards so that her feet are closer to Maan's and her face aligns up with his chest. And bang! she freezes... 


GEET

(Gulps, mumbles)

"Bare chest? What no shirt? If only.... forget it Geet this plan C is out of question. Go on with plan B" 


Now that their feet are aligned perfectly Geet slowly moves her foot closer to Maan's and caresses his big toe nail with her big toe. A sweet smile breaks up on her face for accomplishing what she set out to do. She triumphantly lifts her glance from their feet to Maan's face and...


GEET

(Gasps)

AHHHHHH!


MAAN

(watching her through drooped eyelids and smiling)

(whispers in a deep sexy tone)

"Geet, you disappoint me. I thought my sherni would go for plan C."


Maan takes Geet's hand and slowly places it on his chest...


MAAN

(Shivers and shouts)

"AHHHHH! Why are your hands sooo cold?"


GEET

(laughs)

"I just brushed my teeth and there was no hot water. Now you know why I did not go with plan C"


MAAN

"Tomorrow I will take care of Nakul. But for now I will take care of you"


Maan moves Geet up so that her face is close to his on the pillow and takes her hands into his and blows on them and kisses them. 


GEET

(smiles and whispers)

"Love you Maan. Go to sleep, you look tired. Don't worry about anything else. We have our whole life ahead of us. Things will sort them selfs out."


MAAN

(Surprised at geet's understanding of his dilemma without being told)

"Thanks Geet, I love you."


Takes her cold hands and puts them under his cheek and smiles at her.


Kash Kal Aisa hota toh??... Ufff 


Thanks for reading.. Push "like" if I have entertained you even a wee bit.😳



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..shreyaa.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awhh nice one
lolzz Love Geet's plan haha
Awesome one

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Posted: 13 years ago
😉very nice dear...Loved it...Kaaaashhhh aisa kuch ho....😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited.

I was reading ur FF and replying to another topic at the same time.. so that caused the confusion. 

Sorry.. just realized I posted a comment in the wrong thread...😆

Please excuse.
Edited by Angelic_A - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Angelic_A

Edited.

I was reading ur FF and replying to another topic at the same time.. so that caused the confusion. 

Sorry.. just realized I posted a comment in the wrong thread...😆

Please excuse.


Awesome work BTW. 👏
Edited by Angelic_A - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Angelic_A


Awesome work BTW. 👏


Thanks...
I was initially confused reading your comment. I went "hah" am I supposed to read between the lines??🤣

All is well, no problem😊 Glad you liked my little shot at screenwriting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: naamteeg


Thanks...
I was initially confused reading your comment. I went "hah" am I supposed to read between the lines??🤣

All is well, no problem😊 Glad you liked my little shot at screenwriting


🤣 Sorry again.. I was replying that the crazies section in one tab and reading ur FF in the other and I guess the comments got mixed up. 🤔

And I just realized that when I when to see the thread.. thinking where is my comment and found it was here instead there. 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks everyone for all your wonderful comments😊

Here ends my second attempt at screenplay writing. Until tomorrow....goodnight


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Posted: 13 years ago

liked ur screenplay dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear,

thanks for another amazing and nice post. the romance is very clean and cute. loved that.

geet's masterplans to touch her husband were really nice and maan opting for plan c was cute.

the issue of geet brushing her teeth or not becomes an obstacle to maaneet romance. bechari geet! in the morning maan refused her AK because she din brush and now geet couldn't touch his bare chest because her hands are very cold. hope maaneet come with a solution for geet's teeth brushing problem.

finally...maan never forgets nakul.he is planning to take care of nakul later.LOL


143 dear

Tonya