Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


mchopra IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 3:33pm | IP Logged

Yeh hosla kaise juke

Yeh arzoo kaise ruke -2

Manzil mushkil to kya

Dhundla sahil to kya

Tanha yeh dil to kya

Ho hooo

Raah pe kaante bikhre agar

Uspe toh phir bhi chalna he hai

Sham chupa le suraj magar

Raat ko ek din dhalna he hai

Rut ye tal jaayegi

Himmat rang layegi

Subha phir aayegi

Ho hooo

Yeh hosla kaise juke

Yeh arzoo kaise ruke -2

Hogi Hame Jo
Rehmat Ata

Dhup kategi saaye

Apni Khuda se Hai
ye Dua

Manzil Lagale
Humko Gale

Jurrat so baar

Uncha ikraar rahe

Zinda har pyaar

Ho hooo

Yeh hosla kaise juke

Yeh arzoo kaise ruke -2


 I had given up when I
heard the last bit of the news. I had no courage to face it anymore. Hadn't I
dealt with enough when it came to my life? I had almost lost the one I loved to
death, I had lost myself in this mad rush of world and today the lady standing
in front of me gave me the news that I was about to lose the little one that
had not even entered the world. I had to tell her, but I didn't know how. I had
made sure that I give her everything she wanted, I had made sure that I had
smiled even though the pain in my heart felt like it would tear me into two . I
didn't know how to face her but then I had  let her sleep when I had walked out of the
room. She was sleeping on the bed with a smile on her face. I still hadn't told
her what the doctor had said earlier that day. I was scared. Scared of how she
will react, I knew her decision and it was making me more scared. I was scared
of losing her and the doctor had told me if she wouldn't let the baby go I
would lose her. I was not ready for it.

I had dreamt of a life with her and here just one incident
had turned my life upside down. I was on the brink of losing her. No I couldn't
do that. I had to tell her everything and had to make her realize her decision
affects not one but three lives. Either she would lose one life or she would be
ready to take the blame of taking a soul from a man's life.

I couldn't do much till I had told her everything and to
tell her the bitter truth I had no strength. I couldn't face her, she would
find out what was going in my mind, no I didn't want that. All I had to do is
stay away from her and to stay away from her meant shatter all her dreams coz
all her dreams were to be with me and what I was going to do break all her
dreams. I had no other solution to the problem right now. I couldn't bring
myself to tell her what was going on within me or what the doctor had told me.
I needed courage and the correct words to tell her but words, I laughed an
empty laugh, wish I knew how to be a diplomat and play with words and tell her.
It was my weakness, the biggest weakness MAAN SINGH KHURANA had and today I
regretted it. For the first time I felt that my being a recluse was costing on
my new found relationship.

I had gone to office to avoid her questions the whole day, I
had even kept her mind aloof at the dining table and now I was to head back
home where she was waiting with open arms to make two bodies to one. I had to
tell her that we cant become one in body till she was in danger. Nothing
mattered to more than her happiness and knowing her decision I had only few
months to keep her happy.

Few Months..i gasped at what my brain had just come up with.
I was to lose her forever in few months. No that couldn't be possible, it can't
be true. She had promised me last night on the sacred fire that she will stay
with me for next 7 births and here she was ready to leave me in next 7 months.
That was a cruel joke the destiny was playing on me.

I had to get out of this and convince her to save herself
but I knew that was next to impossible. To deter her from her decision was
impossible. Maan she is your wife. I shook my head at that. Obviously she was
my wife she might be totally contrasting from what I am but this one aspect of
her I regretted to be like mine.

It was late into the night when she had come back to the
room. I had to tell her everything now before she took any step.

M: Geet..

G: Ji..

She turned to look at me. She looked like an angel to me in
that pink suit of hers. I held her hand and took her out to the terrace. She
looked at me with confusion and questions in those almond shaped brown eyes of
hers, but I needed to speak to her.

We reached the terrace and I just stood there leaving her
hand. I needed to collect myself before I could say anything.

She stood beside me waiting for me to speak. I was still
looking at the moon.

M:  Geet agar tumhe
kabhi mujhe ya..

G: Maan..aisa kabhi sochiyega bhi mat..mere liye aapse
zayada mehatavpoorna is duniya mein koi nahi hai..

M: Hai.. and I turned and looked at her.

She was confused and shook her head. Nahi..she said with

I placed a hand on her stomach.

She stepped back immediately.

G: Maan aap kya kehna..

I had tears in my eyes and she comprehended most of what I
couldn't say from that. I knew it, her eyes, her hands just told me that.

M: kal raat jab tum behosh hue thi tab doctor ne mujhe kuch
kaha tha..Woh baat jo main tumse chupa raha hoon..tumne poocha than a kya hua..

She just nodded her head but I could see fear in her eyes.

I was fumbling for words now.

G: Maan baby..

I closed my eyes and took a deep breath.

M: Haan geet baby theek hai..par..

G:maan kahiye kya..pls..main aise paagal ho jaoongi..

M: doctor ne kaha ki tumhari jaan ko khatra hai..

She looked discombobulated.

M: Geet doctor ka kehna yeh ki agar humne pregnecy terminate
nahi kit oh delivery ki time tumhe..

I couldn't say anymore. She understood. She looked at me for
a few minutes and then she said..

G: Maan chalein..

M: Geet hum..

G: Maan nahi..yeh nanhi jaan is duniya mein ayeegi..chahe
kuch bhi kyun na ho jaaye..


Geet smiled at me.

M: main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta geet..

G: main aapko ek nanhi pari dekar jaaongi..aap uske liye

M: geet mujhme itni himmat nahi hai..

I had tears in my eyes which finally overflowed.

She wiped those tears away with her fingers..

G: Maan maine is pari ke liye saari duniya ko chod diya ab
main ise nahi kho sakti..aap mujse waada kijiye ki mere baad aap isko maa aur
pita dono ka pyaar denge..

I just stared at this woman dumbfounded. She was talking abt
her death as though it meant nothing for her.

G:Maan waada..

I shook my head.

G: Maan..

M; geet hum baad mein bahut saari..

G: Maan ..shhh..nahi..mujhe yehi waali chaihye..and she
placed on her tummy..

M: Geet pls..maan jao na..hum..

G: Maan waada..

I had no other option but to succumb to her demands.

After 7 months.

D: Mr.Khurana hum aapki wife ko nahi bacha paye.

M: Aur baby..

D: Aapke ghar ek beti ne janam liya hai..

M: Kya main use..

D: thodi der main..

M: Geet.

D: unhe abhi bhaar la rahein hain..

Maan just waited there. After few minutes he saw the
lifeless body of his wife being brought out of the OT.

As the ward boys approached him he told them to leave.

Maan bends down and kisses her forehead, and whispers in her
ears.." I love you geet.."

A tear escaped his eyes but he wiped it  coz he had promised her that he will bid her
goodbye with a smile.

The doctor brought the baby and placed it in his arms.

Dadi also came there.

Maan: Dadi yeh rahi meri GEET and he placed a peck on the
little angels forhead.

Do laeve ur comments..Criticsm is most welcome..




Edited by mchopra - 12 September 2011 at 1:09pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged

Shreya...this is too good! ClapClap i loved it and wanna see somethnig similar in the show with a happy ending off course. I want a happy threesome!!!!!!

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
WOW!! Beautiful..Awesome OS!Clap

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Ilovemsk IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:07pm | IP Logged

i mean meri chopra sahibi
that was awesssssssommeeeeeeeeeeeeee  <3
sooooo touching

the ending was sad :(
but every sentence was beautifully written <3
luved it

naina xxxxxxxx 

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..shreyaa.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Awhh This was amazingggggg
Loved it
soo sad but
Awhh the Baby was named  Geet too
Loved it


Edited by maangeetcrazy - 26 January 2011 at 4:11pm

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Absoluv IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Will comment later...Smile

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jnawaz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
dont know why people call me the tragedy queen!! you just killed geet!! omg omg omg...i crying buckets!! not cool...not cool at all!!

but..beautifully done...

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
@Shreya............ Very angsty  yaar.Cry............ Why are you giving CV's such ideas.Angry

It really beautiful, the way you described sorrow and brought out the pathos .Clap

BTW I hate you for ruining my make up....LOL

Edited by kadydeep - 26 January 2011 at 5:31pm

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