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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 30)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Excellent and Supperb Update VattyDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
Loved your whole Update..very beautiful and amazing
next part pl update soon

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Part 4:

What the hell happened? why was he attracted to Shayeri? Im killing u! btw is she u? lmao

so Khanak hates Shaan but she remembers everything about him...so why does she hate him? did something happen like they did something in one night...?

and OMG that meeting was sooo sensual and sooo emotional!!

Vatsu himmat hai...ur sooo good man!!!

loved the little flashback too!!!

ok next part *reading it*

Part 5:

Ok you are seriously creating a mystery!!!

the element was back...they were fighting like little kids and that ending was superb!!!

so what exactly khanak wants? want him or no? lmao I swear these two really are idiots!

neways I loved Shaan's role...that hug and kiss was cute! he is a nautanki!

and what is with shayeri and Shaan? u def. are taking it as an advantage! lmao

next part...

Part 6:

Omg...what was that?

this was sooo...idk...it was a mysterious talk!!! I can't believe u can write this...this is a simple mystery as to what happened...

u have to continue now

I can't believe I missed all of it!! ugh!!!

loved the little touches of how they hold hands and then let go and sit in silence...

wow so beautiful and so true!!!

Part 7:

OMG man these two are idiots!!!

they are in love and yet they are acting fools!!!

but i loved that  letter...again i say u have made them switch personality or something...i wonder who sent the letter back if it wasn't Khanak because I think his dad made her do it or his mother did...

mystery is still a mystery...

Part 8:

Ok i already told u bout this one but OMG this is too good...Thank God they are giving time to eachother! I love it!

Shaan def. needs to woo her again!!!

mystery khol abb be!!!

Ok now I want the next part up soon!!!


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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 12:52am | IP Logged
ok i want the next update 

before i get back to school please

this is yummy!
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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
vatty soon soon n i mean really soon UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DisapproveDay Dreaming
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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
 
Where is the Author ...ShockedShockedShockedShocked
 
Where is the Next Update ... Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry 
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
haaayyy... as I am left sighing I try to think how the husky baritone sounds her name out...
 
'khanakkk'... Aaahh beautiful vatttyyy... simply beautiful.. Your story is building slowlly yet steadily... and I appreciate you finally coming to your FF and rekindling the embers... It is worth the long wait. But thankfully the wait ended!!!! Shall wait no matter how long for the continuation...
 
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Edited by jparker - 13 June 2011 at 9:56am
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Update Toh Banta hai !
 
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