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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 28)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
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brilliant and beautiful... just loveee ur writing styleHeart

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
vatsalya loved itThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged
What do I say...
though I am speechless...but won't run away like you people do.Tongue...okay sometimes you doWink!!

let's start with --- Thanks !!!

Finally you update sweety !!DancingDancing

I have told you before that your writing style is Killer.ClapClap...really !!!
you won't believe it but after every few lines I stop and think *Is she really 18 years old??*...

Beautifully pennedThumbs Up...
your writing style has a flow, a peace, a beauty, a stability Star!!!!
I am in love with it and was wondering whether I will be able to read it again !!

Coming to update -- Highlights --

"Shaan carrying pillow to window side seating and remembering his mon" -- what a touch...it touched meHug !
him talking to tanmay -- *standard badha apna*.ROFL...loll !!!
the breakfast table talk about Tamanna...very very matureThumbs UpThumbs Up...I appreciate that in an FF where real life situations are touched and tackled in a routine way !!!

Khanak's childlike behaviour...Shaan's efforts to woo her back !!

Finally -- his melodious *Khanak*.Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming...*Sigh* !!

*Sigh*...*Sigh*...next part is expected when??


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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
OMG!!!really???*rubs my eyes in shock*

vattie... Shit u really updated???? How? When?kaise? Kaisa?

Ok ok let me read..

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:05am | IP Logged
ccc vatty ccc!!!!!!11 how much ppl love it n u bhao khao...lol
 keep it going sweety:)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Finally an update... i've read the ff three times n waited for the update
 
Thank God u updated and thx to u for updating itSmile

Its beautiful... em speechless

Her childish behavior and that melodious khanak... really cute.
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged

Spellbinding, haunting, but perfectly ShaNak and love the overall direction of your story VattyClapStar...

Stop hiding this talent...Update regularly pleaseBig smile...
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
hei vatty,
that was awesome..
y is khanak troubling herself?
loved the talk between shaan n tanmay..that too reg shaan's secretary(std badha apna..)LOL!!!!
khanak didnt expect shaan to meet aunty hai kya?silly girl..if she is upset it doesnt mean that he would not come to meet aunty..
shayeri n aunty play cool between shanak..
really i too think that tannay n shayeri will get along..Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming(wishful thinking)
intentionally sending shaan to inform khanak..
how could u stop it like this..his melodic 'khanak' is ringing in my ears..need to see her reaction for wat she said hearing the knock on her door n seeing that person in front of her now..
continue soon vatty..dont make us pester u again for updates..


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