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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 24)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Hey vatty!!when i read your comment 1st i thought this update was going to be confusing but its not....... It was nice i mean it was very very nice...... Dont doubt your writing So much....sehat ke liye acha nahi haiLOL..... the suspense of Wat happened dat day is killing me.......... Continue soon......

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
the story is progressing very well...I really like how you are trying to explore the whole 'love her for what she is' from an adolescent perspective...very nice...continue soon

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
dear vatty thanx for the pm..
 
i love u for your immaturity after all u are young and dont worry some of us..we were probably even more immature LOL
 
i know i used to put up a face when i was your age and quarrel with friends baat baat par
 
it is natural so no worriesSmile
 
loved shaan thinking of how he missed khanak and also him wanting to be with her again  ..
full part was  awesome
 
now be confident and be sure ...u write well... I loved itSmilekeep it upSmile


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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
dnt remember the 6th part as u update sooo OFTEN! ...
 
will read tht and part 7 ..... and then comment!

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
it ws realy gud n nw i m excited 2 c hw does he win over her so pls continue soon

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Soooo
Love how you leave this bait in each part that makes one wait for the next one-in this case all I am wondering is what was there in the past?Why is it so painful??
Jaldi jaldi batao aur jaldi jaldi manao!

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Vatttyyyyy!!.....That was beautifulClapStar....Like poetry.....Love the mistery and am eager to read more....Can;t wait for Shaan to start wooing her again....But unlike Auntie I want them to bury the past firstSmile.....

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged
It was beautiful Vats !!
the letter was too cute.....like a teenagers first crush, first love !!
it was beautifully written.....

I am waiting for them to revisit their past and tackle it so that they can move ahead confidently !!

And never say anything negative about your writing.....whatever you write touches deep !!

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