Rang Badalti Odhani

*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: shanakyasharan

n ya u say its not good...jaaa doob mar vatti sacchi!!!!!!!!!!!!!...just thinking wats next mereko idhar breadthing problem ho rahi hai...lol
 its sooo good.ill read all d old chapters back again:)

lovely update its damn good


Thank you kari!!  
"breathing problem" πŸ˜†


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-YasharanArshi- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
HELLO ?
 
Mere Post ko Quote nahi kiyaa ????
Hmmmpphhh ... Rude !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arre what do I reply to you??

You get your answers in next update seedha :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls vatty promise kar by atleast 3 days u wil update...dont stop this re its sooo damn good plsss
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brilliant and beautiful... just loveee ur writing style❀️
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Posted: 12 years ago
vatsalya loved itπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
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Posted: 12 years ago
What do I say...
though I am speechless...but won't run away like you people do.πŸ˜›...okay sometimes you doπŸ˜‰!!

let's start with --- Thanks !!!

Finally you update sweety !!

I have told you before that your writing style is Killer.πŸ‘πŸ‘...really !!!
you won't believe it but after every few lines I stop and think *Is she really 18 years old??*...

Beautifully pennedπŸ‘πŸΌ...
your writing style has a flow, a peace, a beauty, a stability ⭐️!!!!
I am in love with it and was wondering whether I will be able to read it again !!

Coming to update -- Highlights --

"Shaan carrying pillow to window side seating and remembering his mon" -- what a touch...it touched meπŸ€— !
him talking to tanmay -- *standard badha apna*.🀣...loll !!!
the breakfast table talk about Tamanna...very very matureπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ...I appreciate that in an FF where real life situations are touched and tackled in a routine way !!!

Khanak's childlike behaviour...Shaan's efforts to woo her back !!

Finally -- his melodious *Khanak*.😍😍😍...*Sigh* !!

*Sigh*...*Sigh*...next part is expected when??


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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!really???*rubs my eyes in shock*

vattie... Shit u really updated???? How? When?kaise? Kaisa?

Ok ok let me read..
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Posted: 12 years ago
ccc vatty ccc!!!!!!11 how much ppl love it n u bhao khao...lol
 keep it going sweety:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally an update... i've read the ff three times n waited for the update
 
Thank God u updated and thx to u for updating it😊

Its beautiful... em speechless

Her childish behavior and that melodious khanak... really cute.