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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 22)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Sorry Vatty!
 
Looks like I came quite late...and you took it out!..
 
Waiting for yr revised update...bet it'll be awesome!!!:D
 
Love, Simi

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
great update looking forward to more!

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update Vatty..its Supperb and amazingClap
pl update next part soonLOL

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Fantastic piece of writing dear and very effective!!
 
Loved the brief sentences and pregnant pauses!!
 
Loved it when she said ' I wish I could add angel to that!'.........that 1 sentence did it for me!! SUPERB!!:D
 
 
PS: this is after I read yr revised update!


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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Hailaaaaaaaaaaaaa ....
My 5 year old Can Write This ????????????
My Goodnesss !!!!!!
 
Loved it ..... Dialogues were amazingly Brillliant ... Very Deep Impactful !!!!!!!!  The Hurt , the Pain, the Seperation ..... Very well Portrayed !!!!!
Loved the last comment by Khanak ... Very Strong !!!!!
But it was a short update ... hhhmmmmpphhhhhh
 
Jaldieeeeeeeee Update karo !!!!!!! I want to know further !!!!!!
The complete story !!!!!!
 
 

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
deep!

ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
i love the way its building, thnk god shayeri not around
i dont want her :P
y do u leave it hanging???????????

and then no update for days!!!!!



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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged

Haunting, bitter-sweet, but beautifully written VattyClapStar....Waitng for the story to unfold....

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Wow vatty!!! What was that...
 
like you are remembering the pages of your life.. from yonder... turning each page, and each are narrating the other's...
 
holding hands.. taking strength... lovely.. sigh...
 
Even if the hearts feel the distance, love will erase this in a flash... Shall wait for that glorious moment...
 
Lovely update again Vatty!!! Continue soon...

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