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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 19)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
vatty awesum update yaar..but i think u should put the anme who said what..sum tyms it is confusing...

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya_cool_123

Loved both the parts Vatty...
 
Hmmm... so he thought of starting from where they left....but not anymore...
 
Interesting !!!
 
Pls continue soon
 
Ps.. where is the siggy..Hmph

Sorry!!! I forgotLOL posted it abEmbarrassed
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
hi,

This is getting interesting ... pls continue soon...

thoda sad emotions tha isme ... but liked the catching u that they did ... still not clear on what happened between their parents though, I am guessing it will start opening in the next few updates ...

Waiting for the next updates.

~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:30am | IP Logged
my first positive comment...lol...thanks dish :D

makes me feel better....lmao

was thinking of scrapping the update..hehe

@others..I will keep that your suggestions ka dhyaan aage se :D
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
hei vatty,
i tried re-reading it..but got more confused..

"Your mom died here...alone. Didn't  anybody come?" she prodded further-this seems to be shaan's mom

"Your mother, Khanak?"
"She wrote me a letter. But I am too scared to open it."-this seems to be khanak's mom..

pls clarify els i'll be reading the further updates with sameconfusion.



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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Vatty......................my darling.............*hugs to you*..........

you know why???..................because I know how it feels when we write something and the readers don't understand our POV.........

Sweetie......do you want an honest review or the usual 'Awesome update....continue soon??'

I can give both................love you for attempting difficult territories though !!!

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
I'll post again manita di...

I always write comment and criticize...so its all in good spirit...i'll work on it again ...it really is okay.
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Very cute!
Talented you are.
Also you have put in some thoughts along the way that are very mature for your age-like how you have interspersed them with your narrative!

Loving how they belong to each other so completely.Have always loved love stories where the couple start out as friends.Lends that much depth to the story.
Now can I have part 6 soon, please?=)

*hugs*

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