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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 18)

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Wonderful and amazing update Vatty..loved it..supperb part
cute conv. betwaan shaan and khanak loved it 
shaan such a noutankibaaaz..loved his comments
loved the sayri part tooo,
waiting for next update..pl  do update soonHug

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Awesome parts vattiee...!!
Luvdd it all......................
Beautiful concept.....very well written....!!
Lovely....:))
 
luvdd it...!!
do cont. soon........
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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Hi Vatsalya
I read all the parts in the last two days
Sorry for posting late
Loved it Smile
Love this FF-Dying Embers nice title liked it  Smile
Beautifully written and the story is set in Goa lovely place
I am so happy enjoyed reading it
Thank u
please continue soon Smile

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged



I am scrapping this update for now...sorry guys...it didn't come out well....I guess...so I'll post an improved version later...

hopefully you'll like that one....


Edited by vatsalya - 04 April 2011 at 8:38am

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
hei vatty,
i was thinking of asking when r u going to update..n there comes the update..

by the way wat hav u done..i thought they r here to sort out things..to know y they were parted n wat they did all these days..but wat is thisShocked
ShockedShockedShocked..i didnt expect this coming too soon..khanak saying "we hav become much more distanced"..

i couldn't understand much from this..do continue soon..n giv lengthy update..

i 2nd vandu's doubts..pls clarify..

wat does this mean?
"Wrote you a long letter. Came back to me. My first humiliation."

he posted n got returned r he didnt try that eve..


Edited by RB81 - 04 April 2011 at 8:30am

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
what an update Vatty  that was heartbreaking and well written!

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
"Didn't you ever ask your father?"
"He was a dutiful father. That is it. And I also loved him for that."
"Guardian you mean?"
"I wish I could add an angel to it."

"Your mom died here...alone. Didn't  anybody come?"

In return, he looked at her with a question.

"I wasn't here. I was sent away. A week later received this news." she answered him.
"You saw mother in her last stages?" his voice choked on the last part.
" No, I hadn't seen her for a long time.Yet surprised myself by crying all night."

"Your mother?"
"She wrote me a letter. I am too scared to open it."

Utter disbelief.
"You have the letter you wrote to me. I can't have my mother's?"
 
"You never came back?"
"No, the thought of coming to this place gave me nightmares. All childhood memories were painful" She looked at him. "And they seemed to occupy me."

"But you are back." He preferred not to touch the other doubt...for now.
"I call it fate. You can term it any other possible word."
"I don't understand you."  he was exasperated. 

He stood up..realised she was still there staring at him.

He held out his hand. She didn't need it.

"It was stupid of me to think we could start where we left. We've  become much more distanced."
She stood up, by herself.
 
Plz tell me who said this to whom?? Whose mother died?Who cried....! I didnt get this....who was saying what to whom.......LOL........M confused......!! Write....shaan:/khanak....or a "he/she" there to clarify !!!

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Loved both the parts Vatty...
 
Hmmm... so he thought of starting from where they left....but not anymore...
 
Interesting !!!
 
Pls continue soon
 
Ps.. where is the siggy..Hmph

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